Lesson 3 我和文学 (巴金)
前两天,有一位日本作家问我,你怎么同时喜欢各种流派的作家和作品呢?我说,我不是文学家,不属于任何派别,所以我不受限制。那位朋友又问,“你明明写了那许多作品,你怎么说不是文学家呢?”我说,唯其不是文学家,我就不受文学规律的限制,我也不怕别人把我赶出文学界。我的敌人是什么呢?我说过:“一切旧的传统观念,一切阻止社会进步和人性发展的不合理的制度,一切摧残爱的努力,它们都是我最大的敌人。”我所有的作品都是写来控诉、揭露、攻击这些敌人的。
前两天,有一位日本作家问我,你怎么同时喜欢各种流派的作家和作品呢?
翻译(一): The other day ,a Japanese writer asked me how I was able to appreciate authors and literary works of different schools
翻译(二) I was inquired ,the other day , how I was able to appreciate authors and literary works of different literary schools——this was from a Japanese writer .
前两天: The other day (文学用法)
A couple of days ago (美国人爱用)
A few days ago (常用)
能: 鉴赏力 间接引语 Be able to 喜欢:
我说,我不是文学家,不属于任何派别,所以我不受限制。
My response went like this :for me , “by no means ,a man of letters;nor do I conform to any particular literary school .Hence ,I exempt from any restriction in any way .”
我说: My response went like this :
My response went this way :
By no means : 谈不上是 属于: conform ···to 任何:particular
任何: any restriction 不受: exempt from
那位朋友又问,“你明明写了那许多作品,你怎么说不是文学家呢?”
那位日本作家 (拆译)
The writer went on :“so many books you have composed, as a renowned writer;
with this , you turn out to be a man of letters ,but you didnot admit.”
那位朋友又问--And then the writer asked me 最保守的翻译方法
又:And then 英语当中的对应关系 也表明接着的概念 The writer went on:””
明明:as renowned writer
那: 指强调 composed : 指作品
有这么多的文学作品,但是你又不承认你是个文学家
我说,唯其不是文学家,我就不受文学规律的限制,我也不怕别人把我赶出文学界。
I replied, :’I never stand among the party of literary men,and thus immune to the rule of literary . Nor do I have to be afraid of being exiled from the literary circle.’
唯其: 只要 stand among the `···party 什么行列之一
不受··的限制 Be immune to
Be not subject to
Be not attached to
Be not subordinated to
规律 :文学原则 the rule of literary 赶出:exiled from 借用
我的敌人是什么呢?(既包括人也包括物) 无主句
我说过:“一切旧的传统观念,一切阻止社会进步和人性发展的不合理的制度,一切摧残爱
(定语一) (名词短语) (定语二)
的努力,它们都是我最大的敌人。”
My enemies? As I mentioned before , all the outdated conventional thinking, All the irrational system,which hinder social progress or human development ,All the forces which trample on love --all of this are my enemies .
我说过:As I mentioned before as 传统的 conventional 观念:thinking
一切旧的传统观念 :All the outdated conventional thinking
一切阻止社会进步和人性发展的不合理的制度All the irrational system,which hinder social progress or human development
一切摧残爱的努力:All the forces trample on love
阻止: Hinder Barricade 努力: 一种势力 trample on
它们都是我最大的敌人:all of this are my enemies
我所有的作品都是写来控诉、揭露、攻击这些敌人的。
All my composition were to exclude ,expose , explode these are my enemies .
控诉 揭露 攻击 :exclude expose explode (alliteration )
从1929年到1948年这20年中间,我写得快,也写得多。我觉得有一根鞭子在抽打我的心,又觉得仿佛有什么鬼魂借我的笔为自己伸冤一样。我常常同主人公一起哭笑,又常常绝望地乱搔头发。我说我写作如同在生活,又说作品的最高境界是写作同生活的一致,是作家同人的一致,主要的意思是不说谎。
从1929年到1948年这20年中间,我写得快,也写得多。
(20年间)
Over the twenties years between 1929 and 1948 , my output came out rapidly and quantitively .
写: 数量output
我觉得有一根鞭子在抽打我的心,又觉得仿佛有什么鬼魂借我的笔为自己伸冤一样。
翻译一:
What impinged into my mind ___as if my mind was being whipped , as if a ghost commandeered my pen and redressed my injustices it had suffered .
翻译二
It seemed as if my mind was being whipped , as if a ghost was commandeered my pen and redressed my injustices it had suffered .
我觉得:I felt as if···
It seems as if ··
As if ··
What impinged into my mind
心 : mind 借 :commander my pen 伸冤 :Redress the injustices it had suffered
我常常同主人公一起哭笑,又常常绝望地乱搔头发。
(表分享他的喜怒哀乐)
I would share the emotions with principal characters ___ both tears and laughter mingled ; I would desperately scratch my head (破折号解释说明emotions )
一起哭笑:分享喜怒哀乐 share the emotions
我说我写作如同在生活,又说作品的最高境界是写作同生活的一致,是作家同人的一致,主
第一点 第二点 第三点
要的意思是不说谎。
(结论)
My literary view goes like this :for one thing ,wring is of living ;for another,
the highest ideal a literary work can attain is that writing and living should be in combination ; moreover , an author is supposed to make a life-size , vivid impression on readers . All in all , I fundamentally mean that any author’s composition are,undoubtedly, true-to-life and realistic.
我说 in my opinion 如同: be compared to(明喻) /is of (暗喻)
我又说:My literary view goes like this :
最高境界 :the highest ideal a literary work
作家同人的一致:As author should make a life-size , vivid impression on readers.
I fundamentally means that both the authors and the books never tell lies.
I fundamentally mean that any author’s compositions are undoubtable truth-to-life and realistic
我最近还在另一个地方说过:艺术的最高境界是无技巧。我几十年前同一位朋友辩论时就说过:长得好看的人用不着浓妆艳抹,而我的文章就像一个丑八怪,不打扮,看起来倒还顺眼些。他说:“流传久远的作品是靠文学技巧流传,谁会关心百十年前的生活?”我不同意,我认为打动人心的还是作品中所反映的生活和主人公的命运。这仍然是在反对那些无中生有、混淆黑白的花言巧语。我最恨那些欺世盗名、欺骗读者的谎言。
我最近还在另一个地方说过:艺术的最高境界是无技巧。
Recently , on another occasion , I noted that the highest stage art can attain is artlessness.
最近:recently , these days 说: 指出
另一个地方: on another occasion
最高境界 the highest stage
无技巧 artlessness 艺术创作中不讲技巧 (term )
我几十年前同一位朋友辩论时就说过:长得好看的人用不着浓妆艳抹,而我的文章就像一个丑八怪,不打扮,看起来倒还顺眼些。
Several decades ago , I was arguing with a friend ,’physically attractive people don’t need heavy make-up , my writing resembles an ugly monster without any decor ,but it looks a bit better’.
辩论=说 重复了 arguing with
几十年:several decades ago 就像: resemble
长得好看:physically attractive people 浓妆艳抹:heavy make-up
打扮decor 倒还 but
他说:“流传久远的作品是靠文学技巧流传,谁会关心百十年前的生活?”
He refuted :’literary works have stood the test of time thanks to the skill adopted in them ,who today is actually concerned about what life was like a hundred years or so ago? ’
他说: 反驳道 He refuted 流传久远的作品: 禁得起时间的考验 literary works have stood the test of time (靠 )thanks to 谁:今天的人 be cancered about
生活:生活是什么样的 what the life was like
我不同意,我认为打动人心的还是作品中所反映的生活和主人公的命运。
For thus , I take the other side :readers are moved by the life mirrored in a story
and destiny of principal characters .
我不同意:I take the other side (立场 不伤害他人情面)
两句之间缺了过渡词 transitional words : for thus
打动人心的 readers are moved by the life mirrored in a story /reflected
这仍然是在反对那些无中生有、混淆黑白的花言巧语。
This implied that I an opposed to fabrication ,deception and flowery language .
这仍然: this implies
无中生有,混淆黑白 :
我最恨那些欺世盗名、欺骗读者的谎言。
My hatred goes to those glory-seeking writers , for they deceive the reading public with their lies .
恨 :hatred 欺世盗名 those glory-seeking writers
恨盗名欺世读者的作家,因为他们的作品都是欺骗读者的
For they deceive reading public with their readers .
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