雅思写作批改(23)

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Some people said the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums, and they should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

In todays world, where material lives enrich, middle-class citizens prefer government to advance more entertainment infrastructure such as theatres as well as sports stadiums. Nevertheless, some societies render that municipal authorities are well-advised to invest more on medical care and education. For my part, I wholeheartedly consent to the latter point of view.

Real education, in reality, is undoubtedly an essential ingredient at all stages and ages of the life of an individual, society as well as the nation. At the same time, medical care and society public service guarantee, to some extent, directly exert pivotal influence on people well-being. Nevertheless, both theatres and stadiums are merely use in some certain circumstances, such as concerts and sports meetings, which might not that paramount to the ordinary lives of people. Take Beijing as an example, in order to prepare for the 2008 Olympic Games, Chinese authorities spent over 40 billion RMB in construction of sport stadiums and the related facilities. Albeit they succeed in hold a marvelous Olympic Games, a enormously quantity of stadiums are abandoned after that, which ultimately become an titanic waste of money.

Admittedly, those theatres as well as sports stadiums are terrific architectures situated on city, which will certainly beautify the cityscape remarkably. Such infrastructures, at the same time, are beneficial to the advance on society in the long term. Nonetheless, unlike the investment on education and medical care, they could easier produce benefits by holding huge activities and therefore it can be built by some company. In addition, it is well-advised to accept donation from society.

By and large, only with joint efforts can we utilized our capital in a appropriate approach to make a better world.

1. 一个取得广泛共识的概念是没有大学文凭的年轻人通常只能找低技术含量的工作,这也危害到他们的生活质量。

A common sense concept is that the youth without a college degree is usually able to find jobs with low technology, which be detrimental to their living qualities.

2. 我们应该认识到体育课的重要性,因为它可以促进学生的身心健康,增强他们的自信心。

We should aware the significance of PE classes, seeing that it can not only promote students psychological as well as mental health but also enhance their confidence.

3. 历史文物因为它的历史重要性而被保存

Heritages are preserved for their historical importance.

4. 学校活动的设置要能让孩子体会到成就感和提升他们的幸福

The arrangement of school activities are supposed to leave children a chance to feel attainment and enhance their happiness.

5. 现在公司喜欢能够打破常规的员工。

Companies now prefer those employees that can break the conventions.

6. 当地政府应该保证平等教育,这样能够帮助落后学生去解决学习的落后。

Local authorities should guarantee equality of education, which can help the students falling behind catch up with others.

7. 虽然政府促进平等,但是种族歧视仍然是一个严重问题。

Albeit authorities promoting equally, the race discrimination is still a serious issue.

8. 接触不同的文化能够促进创新,这是企业或者国家的财富。

Contacting with different culture can promote innovation, which is fortune for an enterprise or a country.

9. 一些人反对转基因食品,因为他们认为这种食品的弊大于利

Some people disagree on genetically modified food, in that they render that those foods do more harm than good.

10. 因为堵车上下班时间变得更长。

Because of congestion the time to go to work and go home alter longer.

11. 学生们可以获得电脑技术,这些技术可以应用在他们的学习和工作中。

Students can learn computer technology, which can apply to their study and work.

12. 社区服务给犯人提供获得实用技能的机会,给他们好的起点当他们被释放后。

Community service provide violators the chance to acquire practical skills, which give them a better start after they are released.

13. 当谈论到公共资金的分配时,一些人认为政府重视社会福利,尤其是医疗服务,这会帮助阻止弱势群体无助地死去。

When talking about the distribution of public capital, some are convinced that municipal government should lay emphasis on social welfare, especially in medical care, which can help prevent the poor from dying helplessly.

14. 在竞争激烈的社会中,有工作的人关心职业发展,很难实现工作和生活的平衡。

In this society, people having a job pay attention on career advancement, which is hard to set a equilibrium between life and work.

15. 住宅楼由于其能最大限度地利用土地和空间,所以有助于解决城市的拥挤问题。

Now that apartment buildings can make the best use of land and space, it is helpful to tackle congestion in city.

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