2020-2021年 英语中考英语书面表达20（附带答案解析）经典

2020-2021年 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)经典

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1． 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。

参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,

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【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.

Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.

In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.

I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try one's best to do sth.）。

常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

2．书面表达

“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；

2.遵守交通规则；

3.公共场合不大声喧哗；

4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）

参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For

example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达

你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。

注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。

A hoarding school or a day school

We are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________

【答案】

We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.

If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.

As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.

【解析】

【分析】

整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。

【详解】

写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】

这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

4． 诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：

1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。

注意：

1、词数80—100；

2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony

【答案】The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours,

Tony

【解析】

【分析】

本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。

【详解】

首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。

【点睛】

文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

5． 假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?

Tell me about your ideal job!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。

【详解】

首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】

本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

6．书面表达

假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:

2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽

3.景点:山和古村落:

4.文化:茶、黄梅戏

5.建议

提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera

注意:1.词数80-100

2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名

4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数

Dear Dave

I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?

【答案】Dear Dave，

I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.

Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!

Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

7．书面表达

假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。

内容如下：

1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；

2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；

3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。

参考词汇：雾霾haze

注意：

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .

People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.

As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。

8．随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变， 购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；

3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Hello everyone,

Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】Hello everyone,

I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.

I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.

My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.

I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。

【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。

10．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传。请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右。

Longjing Tea

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【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea.

Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料类介绍型作文，所以我们必须要结合所给材料再适当补充内容。时态以一般现在时为主。

亮点词汇短语：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea绿茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth对…严格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不仅．．．而且．．．。

亮点句型：

It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龙井茶对人们保持健康有好处。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （对某人来说）做某事是怎样的。

Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龙井是我国著名的茶叶，它不仅与龙井的气候、土壤环境有关，而且与龙井的生产工艺有关。Which引导的限定性定语从句。

Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龙井茶出产的胜地。Where引导的定语从句。

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