初中英语 - 写作练习题

初中英语——写作练习题

一．阅读理解（共19小题）

1．以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿．

注意：

所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；

词数：100个词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；

文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其它信息，否则，不予评分．

Nick Vujicic is a world﹣famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．　　．

2．My Plan for the Coming School Year

提示：难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以"My Plan for the Coming School Year"为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一学年内的打算．

要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

英语试题卷•第7页（共8页）

3．将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．

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3．假设你们学校在澳大利亚的友好学校的师生想要了解你校学生的兴趣和爱好，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的兴趣和爱好及其意义．

注意：文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名．

4．老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动．请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受．

内容要点及要求：

表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；

你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；．词数：80左右．开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．

提示词（可选用）：learn from，respect，care for，do some housework，study hard

Monday，June 30 Sunny

This morning，our English teacher told us some stories about“the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”．　　．

5．假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营．根据夏令营的活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语阅读的发言稿．具体要求如下：

（1）对英语阅读重要性的认识；

（2）个人开展英语阅读的情况（1～2点具体做法）及感悟；

（3）将来的打算．

参考词语：play an important part，in the past，borrow books，at the beginning，something easy and interesting，become interested in，in the future，form a good habit of，read every day，be helpful for

书写要求：（1）词数：100词左右．（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（2）可根据具体要求及参考词语适当发挥；

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名．

Good afternoon，everybody，

I’m very pleased to be here to talk about my English reading．As we all know，

Thanks for listening!

6．根据下面提示写一篇征文．

《学生英文报》正在举行“我的美丽家园”征文活动，请你用英语为该报写一篇征文，介绍我们的家乡﹣多彩贵州．标题自拟，文章应包括以下要点：

1．贵州的地理位置及概况；

2．宜人的气候和清新的空气；

3．美丽的风景和其他你所了解的内容．

要求：1．征文应不少于80词；

2．文中不得出现真实的个人信息．　　．

7．在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一．内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算．

注意1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；=2、词数在80﹣100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数．

Dear　　

Words can’t show my thanks to you，　　

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming．

8．假如你叫李明，最近你和你父母就”周末学生该不该与同学外出活动”进行了讨论．

现在请你以Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？为题，参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文．

注意：=1．开头部分已写好，你只需接着写．

=2．所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至少三个想法．

=3．词数：70个左右．

Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends　　．

9．随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张．请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法．

要求：（1）内容包括 ①分析这种现象产生的主要原因；

②提出解决该问题的具体建议．

（2）字数：60﹣80字

（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名．

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10．假设你叫Zhang Ling，前些天收到笔友Dave的e﹣mail．信中说他不久要来中国学习中文．

他想了解如何学好中文．请你用英文给他回复一封e﹣mail，提出一些如何学好中文的建议．

内容要求：1．中文有用，外国人对它感兴趣，学习它；

2．中英文不同，学习困难；

3．学好巾文的建议：多记忆、多读写、看电视、听广播、找人交流等．

4．不仅能从书卜学到，也能通过其他方法学好中文．

要求：1）必须用上以上所有信息，可适当发挥；

2）要求句子连贯，语句通顺，书写规范；

3）词数不少于80词，信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

参考词汇：：useful，foreigner，different from，difficult，learn…．by heart，listen to the radio，

not only…．but also．

Dear Dave，

I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．

Hope to see you soon．

Yours，

Zhang Ling．

11．假如你是王昆，你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日“春节”非常感兴趣，请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题，写一封E﹣mail，给他做一介绍．

1．要点包括：节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等；

2．字数要求：100字左右

3．提示：the Spring Festival，traditional，get together，clean up，be dressed up

Subject：My Favorite Festival From：Wang Kun

Dear Tom，

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12．假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel，你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily 广告中介绍的机器人培训班．

请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：

1）培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；

2）参观机器人公司的具体安排

3）你还想了解到该培训班其他信息．

注意：

1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3）词数：80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Sir/Madam

I’m writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School．　　．

Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon．

13．假如你是某杂志社编辑Mr．Knowledgeable，根据中学生 Bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题．字数80﹣100，开头已给出．

Dear Knowledgeable，

My problem is that I can’t get on with my family．My parents always say“no”to my ideas without any reason．So I often quarrel（吵架） with them．Also，my brother is not very nice to me．He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show．Instead，he watches whatever he wants until late at night．I don’t think this is fair．At home，I always feel lonely and nervous．Is that normal？What can I do？

Bob

Dear Bob

Knowledgeable．

14．加入你校将举行“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的体会是写一篇短文．

（一）内容提示：1．不带管制刀具（restricted knives）到校；

2．上下楼梯不要拥挤；

3．注意饮食安全；

4．注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况（emergency）要报警．

（二）要求：1．短文应包括所提示的内容，可适当发挥；

2．短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；

3．词数：80词左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

How to protect ourselves

How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students．　　．

15．三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就要进入高中学习，请以My life in the high school为题，根据下表所提供的信息和提示词，用英语写一篇小短文，畅想自己未来的高中生活．

提示词：peaceful（宁静的），knowledgeable（知识渊博的），宽敞明亮（wide and bright），care for（关爱），learn by oneself（自主学习），take an active part in（积极参加），group work（小组学习），out﹣of﹣class activities（课外活动）

要求：

1．短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用2～3句话表述；

2．所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数80左右（不含已给出句子的词数）；

3．短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；

4．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．

My life in the high school

My junior school will be over．And I'm going to my high school in September．I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful．

The campus of my high school will　　

Wonderful high school life!I can't wait!

16．目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日"全国学生营养日"开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧．请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．

提示词：regularly，active，junk food（垃圾食品），a balanced diet，as a result

要求：

（1）所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法．

（2）所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥．

（3）字数80词左右．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55percent of the students　　．

17．"地球一小时"是世界自然基金会应对全球气候变化所发起的一项活动．倡议世界各城市在特定时间熄灯一小时，以表明对环保行动的支持．请根据下面表格内容，以"Earth Hour"为主题写一篇短文，宣传这一备受全球瞩目的环保活动．

要求：1．内容完整，意思连贯，书写规范，文中不得出现真实的姓名校名．

2．必须用上表格中所有的提示信息，词数80左右．

Earth Hour．

18．在初中即将毕业之际，请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：

参考词汇：分享快乐 share happiness

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个

（2）信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

Dear Brian，

How time flies!We have been friends for three years．I’m writing to thank you for your help!

Three years ago，　　

Hope to see you soon!

Yours，

Zhang Ming．

19．两个月前，胶东在线对我校初四学生毕业后的人生规划进行了一次问卷调查．请根据图表中提供的数据信息，写一篇100﹣120词的调查报告，并结合实际谈谈你的观点和毕业后的人生理想．

要求：

1．行文不得出现真实姓名和校名；

2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．

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二．书面表达（共11小题）

20．为丰富学生的校园生活，鼓励学生参加体育运动，学校每年都会开展形式多样的运动会．既为有体育特长的同学提供了展示的舞台，也给了其他同学自由表现的机会．运动会中有人奋力拼搏，有人乐于帮助，有人善于宣传报道…请你写出某次运动会中自己的表现和感受，并为学校的运动会提出1～2条具体的建议．

要求：1.80词左右．

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名．

21．请你根据自己对"感恩父母"的认识和理解，结合以上五个问题，请以"How to Be Thankful to Our Parents"为题，写一篇80﹣100词的英语短文，不能照抄试卷上的材料，文中不能出现考生真实姓名、学校等信息．

22．I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School

提示：初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈．在老师、同学和家长的帮助下，通过你的努力，你在学习、生活、文体活动、与人相处等方面，一定学到很多，取得了进步．请你根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文．

要求：

1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2）文中不得使用其真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

3）请将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．

23．养成好习惯，成就好人生，作为一名中学生，请你从日常行为习惯及学习等方面谈谈如何成为一名合格的中学生，以"How to be a good student"为题写一篇英语短文．

要求：

1、语言正确，行文流畅，书写规范；

2、词数：80词左右；

3、文中不能出现真实的人名、校名或所在地名．

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24．英语课上，你们开展了一次以"What can we do to make home a happier place？"为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上．请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊Englihsh Learning 投稿．

注意：（1）短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法．

（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息．

（3）词数：80～100．短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数．

短文首句：In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place．

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25．假如你是李梅．你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的E﹣mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事．请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封E﹣mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．

Sima Guang hit the tank（缸）

要 求：

1．文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；

2．文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息；

3.100 词左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．

26．关于"说英语"问题，小华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的意见，请你仔细阅读下面图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给的要求写一篇短文．

要求：（1）用"Li Hua"或"Miss Wang"补全短文首句；

（2）写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；

（3）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

（4）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．

参考词汇：shy，make a mistake，believe in

I am ．

27．每个人对交友都有不同的看法，请根据图示提供的信息，以"Good Friend in My Eyes"为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，首先分享大众观点，然后从中选出你最看重的两方面进行阐述，并说明理由．

要求：1．短文语句通联、意思连贯，可适当发挥；

2．题目与开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不得出现个人真实信息．

参考词汇：some…others…；not only…but also…；both…and…；work together

Good Friends in My EyesEveryone needs friends，Different people have different ideas about making friends．

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28．（A） 话题作文：2016年5月25日，著名学者杨绛女士逝世，她一生饱读诗书、才华横溢．亲爱的同学们，你们喜欢阅读吗？请以 Let's Read More 为题，用英语写一篇80﹣100词的文章．

提示：1．当前存在现象（上网，聊天，玩手机游戏…）

2．读书的益处

3．有关阅读的做法与打算

（B） 图示作文：仔细观察下列四幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇短文．

要求：1．话题作文或图示作文任选其一．

2．词数在80～100词之间．

3．要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥．

29．如今，手机已经在我们的生活中广泛使用．它既让人们享受到许多的便利，也带来了不少的问题．请以My Opinions on Using Cellphones为题，写写你对使用手机的看法．

内容包括以下三方面：1．使用手机的好处 2．使用手机的弊端 3．你的建议（词数：90左右）

温馨提示：短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．

My Opinions on Using Cellphones

30．请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇关于你的朋友亮亮减肥的故事．并通过此事，谈谈你的感想．要求：

1 90词左右；

2可适当增加细节使行文连贯完整；

3文中不得出现真实姓名；

4 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．

参考词汇：overweight，flied chicken，balanced diet，good figure/shape

Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be﹣he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，．

初中英语——写作练习题

参考答案与试题解析

一．阅读理解（共19小题）

1．以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿．

注意：

所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；

词数：100个词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；

文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其它信息，否则，不予评分．

Nick Vujicic is a world﹣famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．　He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．

From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．　．

【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般过去时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

【解答】Nick Vujicic is a world﹣famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．

From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．

【点评】解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．

2．My Plan for the Coming School Year

提示：难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以"My Plan for the Coming School Year"为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一学年内的打算．

要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

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3．将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．

　My Plan for the Coming School Year

New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never forgotten，which is studying studying studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．First，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．

Second，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．

Third，I will do more exercises．Such as，English．maths，Chinese and so on．

In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!　．

【分析】这是一篇以My Plan for the Coming School Year为题目的作文，主要围绕新学年的学习计划展开写作，写作重点就是把计划说清楚，可以利用序数词分条进行列举；作文中要以一般将来时为主．因为是"我的计划"，所以人称应该用第一人称I；作文要有适当发挥，应用词汇和语法结构要正确； 上下文要连贯以及语言要得体．还要注意拼写和标点符号．

所用到的重点词汇及重点短语和句子有：do well in；first，second，third；in a word；the entrance exam of senior school；Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today；Such as；cherish等．

【解答】参考例文：

My Plan for the Coming School Year

New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never forgotten，which is studying studying studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．【总起】

Firstly，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．

Secondly，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．

Thirdly，I will do more exercises．Such as，English．maths，Chinese and so on．【分条列举计划】

In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!【总结全文】

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文．作文前要仔细审题，确定出写作重点；要把握好时态和人称；为使文章更有条理性可以分条列出计划．为避免文章的单调和枯燥．应该考虑运用比较高级的语法形式去让文章增色，如定语从句的使用和名人名言等．所以平时的基础一定要打牢，这样写起文章来才游刃有余，而不是捉襟见肘．

3．假设你们学校在澳大利亚的友好学校的师生想要了解你校学生的兴趣和爱好，请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的兴趣和爱好及其意义．

注意：文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名．

【分析】这是一篇命题作文，让我们写一篇关于自己的兴趣和爱好的作文．内容是开放式的，这需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力，把这些内容补充完整．首先我们要介绍一下自己的大体情况，比如说姓名、年龄、城市、学校、年级等，然后再介绍自己的兴趣和爱好以及意义．我们可以将本作文分为两部分，第一部分为作者简介，第二部分为兴趣爱好，第三部分为爱好的意义．

重要的短语和句型：

collect stamps 收集邮票

exchange sth with sb 跟…交换…

help sb （to）do sth帮…做…

cut off 剪下

It helps me learn different cultures，including history and international knowledge．

它帮我了解不同的文化，包括历史和国际知识．

It's also a good way of saving money，because the stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by．

这也是省钱的一种方式，因为邮票会随着时间的流逝而升值．

【解答】参考答案

My name is Jim．I am fourteenn years old．I am in Grade 8 Class 5．I am a student of Beijing Number 5 Middle School．I have a hobby．＜简单介绍自己＞My hobby is collecting stamps．I have been collecting stamps for 10 years．Usually I collect stamps in three ways．When I get letters，I cut the stamps off the envelopes．What's more，every year I go to the post offices to buy a set of new stamps and I also go to the stamp market to buy some old stamps and foreign stamps．Finally，I have lots of friends who have the same hobby as I，so I sometimes exchange my stamps with them．＜介绍兴趣爱好＞I think my hobby is very interesting and fun．First，it helps me learn different cultures，including history and international knowledge．Second，I can enjoy the beauty of art．Third，by exchanging stamps，I have made more friends．Fourth，it's also a good way of saving money，because the stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by．I think hobbies can make our life more colorful．What about your hobbies？＜意义/感想＞

【点评】写命题作文时，我们最好需要列一列提纲，然后再通过提纲进行写作就不会造成作文的离题或者偏题．但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文间要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，最好能够写短的简单句，这样比较能够得分．同时注意，写作文是要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等等．再者，在作文完成的时候要注意检查，修改，以避免遗漏．如果有条件的话，最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易分高分．最后，注意要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文．

4．老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动．请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受．

内容要点及要求：

表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；

你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；．词数：80左右．开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．

提示词（可选用）：learn from，respect，care for，do some housework，study hard

Monday，June 30 Sunny

This morning，our English teacher told us some stories about“the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”．　I was deeplymoved．Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring forparents．

Iused to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it．I think Ishould learn from them．I will help do some housework and take good care of mymum and dad when they are ill．I will try my best to study hard so that I canenter the key high school in our city．I hope I can become a filial piety youthlike them．　．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．本文已经给出了主要写作要点：在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母．本文主要是第一人称，时态较为复杂，注意时态一致问题．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

重要短语和句型：

learn from 从…学习…；

help do some housework 帮着做家务；

take good care of 好好照顾；

Our English teacher told us some stories about“the most beautiful filial pietyyouth in 2013”．

我们的英语老师告诉我们一些关于2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹．

Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring forparents．

那些少年为我们树立了尊重和关心父母好的榜样．

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it．

我过去常常使我的父母不高兴，现在我感到羞耻．

I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city．

我将尽我所能努力学习，这样我就可以进入我们城市的重点高中．

【解答】Monday，June 30 Sunny

This morning，our English teacher told us some stories about“the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”．I was deeplymoved．Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring forparents．【引出话题】

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it．I think I should learn from them．I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill．I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city．I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them．【在日常生活、学习中如何孝敬父母】

【点评】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．如：set an example for为…树立榜样；used to do sth．过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try one's best to do sth．尽力做某事；强调句式It is said for sb．to do sth．做某事对某人来说怎么样等等．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．

5．假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营．根据夏令营的活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语阅读的发言稿．具体要求如下：

（1）对英语阅读重要性的认识；

（2）个人开展英语阅读的情况（1～2点具体做法）及感悟；

（3）将来的打算．

参考词语：play an important part，in the past，borrow books，at the beginning，something easy and interesting，become interested in，in the future，form a good habit of，read every day，be helpful for

书写要求：（1）词数：100词左右．（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（2）可根据具体要求及参考词语适当发挥；

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名．

Good afternoon，everybody，

I’m very pleased to be here to talk about my English reading．As we all know，

　（英语阅读重要性）readingplaysanimportantpartinlearningalanguage．It’sverynecessarytoreadalot．（个人开展英语阅读的情况）Inthepast，Ioftenborrowedbooksfromthelibrary．Atthebeginning，Ireadsomethingeasyandinteresting．Later，Ibegantoreadlongerandmoredifficultstories，likeDanny’sDreams．（感受）Byreading，IhaveimprovedmyEnglishandbecomemoreinterestedinlearningEnglish．IplantoreadsomeEnglishnovelsandsimpleEnglishpoemsduringthissummervacation．（将来的打算）Inthefuture，IwillreadmoreEnglishbooks．AndIwillformagoodhabitofreadingandtrytoreadeveryday．I’msurereadingwillbequitehelpfulformyfurtherEnglishlearning　

Thanks for listening!

【分析】本文需要我们根据题目中所给的信息，用英语写出一份学生参加暑期英语夏令营的关于英语阅读的发言稿．要求写出对英语阅读重要性的认识，个人开展英语阅读的情况及感悟以及将来的打算．这三方面缺一不可，是这篇文章的主要内容．其中重点应介绍个人开展英语阅读的情况及感悟这一部分．人称为第一人称I，大的时态可用一般现在时辅以一般将来时，可用句型有play an important part，It’s very necessary to 等

【解答】Good afternoon，everybody，

I’m very pleased to be hereto talk about　my　English reading．As we all know，（英语阅读重要性）reading plays an important part in learning a language．It’s very necessary to read a lot．（个人开展英语阅读的情况）In the past，I often borrowed books from the library．At the beginning，I read something easy and interesting．Later，I began to read longer and more difficult stories，like Danny’s Dreams．（感受）By reading，I have improved my English and become more interested in learning English．I plan to read some English novels and simple English poems during this summer vacation．（将来的打算）In the future，I will read more English books．And I will form a good habit of reading and try to read every day．I’m sure reading will be quite helpful for my further English learning．

Thanks for listening!．

【点评】此题为话题作文，要仔细审题，注意发言稿的格式，抓住描述的重点，把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，要求语句通顺，单词，语法，时态正确，书写规范，字数合乎要求，切忌出现中文式的英语，这样才能算是一篇好作文．

6．根据下面提示写一篇征文．

《学生英文报》正在举行“我的美丽家园”征文活动，请你用英语为该报写一篇征文，介绍我们的家乡﹣多彩贵州．标题自拟，文章应包括以下要点：

1．贵州的地理位置及概况；

2．宜人的气候和清新的空气；

3．美丽的风景和其他你所了解的内容．

要求：1．征文应不少于80词；

2．文中不得出现真实的个人信息．　（贵州的地理位置及概况）I Love GuizhouGuizhou province is located in the southwest of China．Guizhou is very beautiful and simple．（宜人的气候和清新的空气）It has a pleasant climate and clean air．（美丽的风景和其他内容）Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world﹣famous places of interest，such as Huangguosh Waterfall，Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on．Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city，150 kilometers away from Guiyang．It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall，which is clear and cool．It can excite visitors’imagination．Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou，which was built 600 years ago，known as one of China's most attractive towns．I love my hometown﹣Guizhou．Welcome to Guizhou．　．

【分析】这是一篇提示性作文．要求根据所给提示写一篇征文．本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，写作要点有1．贵州的地理位置及概况；2．宜人的气候和清新的空气；3．美丽的风景和其他你所了解的内容，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．本文是介绍美丽的贵州，可以用一般现在时态，用第三人称书写．重点短语及句型有 is rich in，places of interest，It is well known for 等

【解答】答案：（贵州的地理位置及概况）I Love GuizhouGuizhou province is located in the southwest of China．Guizhou is very beautiful and simple．（宜人的气候和清新的空气）It has a pleasant climate and clean air．（美丽的风景和其他内容）Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world﹣famous places of interest，such as Huangguosh Waterfall，Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on．Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city，150 kilometers away from Guiyang．It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall，which is clear and cool．It can excite visitors’imagination．Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou，which was built 600 years ago，known as one of China's most attractive towns．I love my hometown﹣Guizhou．Welcome to Guizhou．

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，抓住美丽贵州这个主题，要做到语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺．

7．在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一．内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算．

注意1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；=2、词数在80﹣100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数．

Dear　Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，　

Words can’t show my thanks to you，　Words can’t show my thanks to you．（感谢原因）You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．（举例说明）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（感受和打算）I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future．　

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming．

【分析】本题是一篇提纲作文，写作内容是在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．要求是感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一，根据这个内容可知这里叙述的过去的事情，所以句子应该用一般过去时．后面的感受及打算部分句子应该用一般将来时．用第一人称和第二人称，要注意句子上文之间的衔接．重点短语及句型：take good care of，in trouble，used to，gave me a lot of advice．With your help，I’m so thankful to you 等等

【解答】Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，（感谢的对象）

Words can’t show my thanks to you．（感谢原因）You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．（举例说明）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（感受和打算）I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future．

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

【点评】本题是一篇提纲提作文，写给自己的父母或老师的感谢信，学生比较有话说，但是要注意提示要点一定写全．同时还要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．

8．假如你叫李明，最近你和你父母就”周末学生该不该与同学外出活动”进行了讨论．

现在请你以Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？为题，参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文．

注意：=1．开头部分已写好，你只需接着写．

=2．所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至少三个想法．

=3．词数：70个左右．

Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends　（父母的想法）My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons．And they should have enough time to have a good sleep．In the meanwhile，they should help their parents do some housework．

（我的三个想法）In my opinion，we teenagers should go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax more．And we can also share ideas with each other．What’s more，we can also take some exercise together to keep fit．　．

【分析】本题目是写有关陈述观点的一篇短文．观点要明确，分条目列举出来，本文的要点有1，父母的建议，2，作者的建议，时态主要以一般现在时来写．注意人称的运用．主要用第一人称，利用一些常见的句型去写简短的句子．重点短语句型有We/They should…；In my opinion，…think that；sometimes等等．

【解答】答案：Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends？

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends．（父母的想法）My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons．And they should have enough time to have a good sleep．In the meanwhile，they should help their parents do some housework．

（我的三个想法） In my opinion，we teenagers should go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax more．And we can also share ideas with each other．What’s more，we can also take some exercise together to keep fit．

【点评】这是一篇给材料作文，本文人称问题比较复杂，注意主谓一致问题，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少．动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．

9．随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张．请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法．

要求：（1）内容包括 ①分析这种现象产生的主要原因；

②提出解决该问题的具体建议．

（2）字数：60﹣80字

（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名．

　I don't like my parents．（父母的表现）They always tell me I should do this，and should not do that．It sometimes makes me angry，“said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question．Why？

（原因）One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things．They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born．All these things are part of your life．They want you to grow up healthily and happily．

So how can you make things easier on yourself？（建议）Just make sure your parents know what you're doing．Get them to know your friends．Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body．Say sorry to them when you make mistakes．Take responsibility for what you have done．Talk about your ideas with them．

Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that．Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children．（总结全文）　．

【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，1．分析这种现象产生的主要原因；2．提出解决该问题的具体建议．

动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．可用词汇如：worry about担心；grow up长大；take responsibility for为…负责任；talk about谈论你；get on with和…相处等

【解答】答案：

I don't like my parents．（父母的表现）They always tell me I should do this，and should not do that．It sometimes makes me angry，“said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question．Why？

（原因）One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things．They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born．All these things are part of your life．They want you to grow up healthily and happily．

So how can you make things easier on yourself？（建议）Just make sure your parents know what you're doing．Get them to know your friends．Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body．Say sorry to them when you make mistakes．Take responsibility for what you have done．Talk about your ideas with them．

Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that．Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children．（总结全文）

【点评】用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语．写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想．如果有些单词不会写，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替．要学会善于运用适当的关联词，利用祈使句，情态动词表示建议等，以使作文行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅．．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．

10．假设你叫Zhang Ling，前些天收到笔友Dave的e﹣mail．信中说他不久要来中国学习中文．

他想了解如何学好中文．请你用英文给他回复一封e﹣mail，提出一些如何学好中文的建议．

内容要求：1．中文有用，外国人对它感兴趣，学习它；

2．中英文不同，学习困难；

3．学好巾文的建议：多记忆、多读写、看电视、听广播、找人交流等．

4．不仅能从书卜学到，也能通过其他方法学好中文．

要求：1）必须用上以上所有信息，可适当发挥；

2）要求句子连贯，语句通顺，书写规范；

3）词数不少于80词，信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

参考词汇：：useful，foreigner，different from，difficult，learn…．by heart，listen to the radio，

not only…．but also．

Dear Dave，

I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．

　（中文有用性）Chinese is becoming more and more useful．Many foreigners are interested in it and studying it now．（中英文的不同）It may be difficult for you because it’s really different from English．（学习中文的建议）You have to learn more Chinese words by heart．It’s also important to do some reading and writing．You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening．It’s a good way to catch （get ） every chance to talk in Chinese．You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you．If you have any questions，please Let me know．I’m sure you’ll learn Chinese well．　

Hope to see you soon．

Yours，

Zhang Ling．

【分析】本文需要我们根据题目中所给的信息，用英语写一篇关于如何学好中文的建议的信：根据提纲中的四条要点，主要描述学习中文的用处和学习中文的建议．人称主要为第二人称，时态可用一般现在时，句型及短语可用you can/have to …以及It's adj to do sth，not only…．but also．等

【解答】答案：

Dear Dave，

I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．

（中文有用性）Chinese is becoming more and more useful．Many foreigners are interested in it and studying it now．（中英文的不同）It may be difficult for you because it’s really different from English．（学习中文的建议）You have to learn more Chinese words by heart．It’s also important to do some reading and writing．You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening．It’s a good way to catch （get ） every chance to talk in Chinese．You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you．If you have any questions，please Let me know．I’m sure you’ll learn Chinese well

【点评】要根据所给要求，利用恰当的句式写出正确而简短的句子，尽量避免用较长的句子，以避免语法、句式的错误．

11．假如你是王昆，你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日“春节”非常感兴趣，请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题，写一封E﹣mail，给他做一介绍．

1．要点包括：节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等；

2．字数要求：100字左右

3．提示：the Spring Festival，traditional，get together，clean up，be dressed up

Subject：My Favorite Festival From：Wang Kun

Dear Tom，

　（节日介绍）The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people．

（节日准备）Several days before the new year，we begin to prepare for it．My parents buy meat，fish and vegetables．Houses are cleaned up．

（节日活动）On the eve of the new year，the whole family get together and have a big dinner．After the meal we watch“the Spring Evening”on TV until twelve o’clock．On the first day of the new year，each of us is dressed in new clothes．When meeting others outside，we say“Happy New Year”to each other．We pay new year calls to friends and relatives．That day my parents and relatives give“Red﹣bags”（money） to us children．All of us have a great time．　．

【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，以电子邮件的形式向美国网友介绍中国的传统节日“春节”．结合所给材料，要点包括：节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为主语为第一人称，辅以第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The Spring Festival is…；we begin to…；the whole family get together…；we watch…；we say…等句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意运用题中所提示的单词和短语．

【解答】答案：（节日介绍）The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people．

（节日准备）Several days before the new year，we begin to prepare for it．My parents buy meat，fish and vegetables．Houses are cleaned up．

（节日活动）On the eve of the new year，the whole family get together and have a big dinner．After the meal we watch“the Spring Evening”on TV until twelve o’clock．On the first day of the new year，each of us is dressed in new clothes．When meeting others outside，we say“Happy New Year”to each other．We pay new year calls to friends and relatives．That day my parents and relatives give“Red﹣bags”（money） to us children．All of us have a great time．

【点评】本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，内容是向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日﹣春节，写作时要注意要点齐全，不能漏写，并且要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．

12．假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel，你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily 广告中介绍的机器人培训班．

请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：

1）培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；

2）参观机器人公司的具体安排

3）你还想了解到该培训班其他信息．

注意：

1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3）词数：80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Sir/Madam

I’m writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School．　Firstly，I’d like to know more about the course arrangement（培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课）．For example，could you tell me how long the course will last？I prefer to know if there is any class for the weekend．

（参观机器人公司的具体安排）Next，I’m interested in the visits to Friendly Robots Company．Would you tell me whether I need to pay？

（其他信息）Finally，I wonder whether I’ll be able to design a robot myself at the end of the course．　．

Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon．

【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一封电子邮件询问广告中介绍的机器人培训班的相关信息．结合所给材料，可知本文主要运用一般现在时态和一般将来时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’d like to…；could you tell me…； I prefer to…及Would you tell me…等句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的希望收到回信的意愿．注意电子邮件的格式．

【解答】Dear Sir/Madam

I’m writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School．（总起）

Firstly，I’d like to know more about the course arrangement（培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课）．For example，could you tell me how long the course will last？I prefer to know if there is any class for the weekend．

（参观机器人公司的具体安排）Next，I’m interested in the visits to Friendly Robots Company．Would you tell me whether I need to pay

（其他信息） Finally，I wonder whether I’ll be able to design a robot myself at the end of the course．

Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon．（结束语）

Yours faithfully

Daniel

【点评】这是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头和结尾已经给出．本作文中给出的要点比较详细，动笔前可以先翻译一下这些短语，再用合适的句式把它们表达出来，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，不要偏离文章中心．

13．假如你是某杂志社编辑Mr．Knowledgeable，根据中学生 Bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题．字数80﹣100，开头已给出．

Dear Knowledgeable，

My problem is that I can’t get on with my family．My parents always say“no”to my ideas without any reason．So I often quarrel（吵架） with them．Also，my brother is not very nice to me．He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show．Instead，he watches whatever he wants until late at night．I don’t think this is fair．At home，I always feel lonely and nervous．Is that normal？What can I do？

Bob

Dear Bob

　It’s normal to have these feelings．Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family？First，it’s not right to quarrel with your parents．I don’t think quarrelling can solve problems．You’d better have a talk with your parents．Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying“no”to your ideas．Second，Why not sit down and communicate with your brother？You should explain that you don’t mind him watching TV all the time．However，he should let you watch your favourite TV show．I hope things will be better soon．Good luck!　

Knowledgeable．

【分析】这篇作文要求我们以某杂志社编辑的身份给Bob写一封回信．首先我们必须要读懂Bob的来信，知道Bob有什么问题．根据这封信的内容可知，Bob遇到的问题是他和他的家人相处得不好，他经常跟父母吵架，和哥哥的关系也不好．因此我们要根据这一内容，帮助Bob解决他的问题，给他一些建议．这些内容需要我们自己来想象，给出的建议要符合这个情景，能对Bob起到帮助的作用．例如，我们可以建议他坐下来和父母谈一谈，把你的想法跟父母说清楚，争取获得他们的理解和支持；和自己的哥哥也要进行很好的沟通，让他知道你的意见，互相理解．在提建议的时候，我们经常用到一些句型，如why not…，you should…，you’d better…等．注意语句之间的连接，使文章表达流畅．文体是一封信，注意信的格式；因为这篇文章主要是给Bob提出一些建议，所以时态应用一般现在时；人称主要为第二人称you．

【解答】答案：

Dear Bob，

It’s normal to have these feelings．Why don’t you talk about these feelings with your family？First，it’s not right to quarrel with your parents．I don’t think quarrelling can solve problems．You’d better have a talk with your parents．Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying“no”to your ideas．Second，Why not sit down and communicate with your brother？You should explain that you don’t mind him watching TV all the time．However，he should let you watch your favourite TV show．I hope things will be better soon．Good luck!

Yours，

Knowledgeable

【点评】此题为材料作文．首先要仔细审题，阅读好Bob的来信先提炼出信的中心内容，才能在作文中给他提出相应的建议．提建议时可以分几条去表达，这样比较明确；文中要多使用表示提建议的句型，比如例文中的why not…，you’d better，you should等．还有使用宾语从句和时间状语从句等，也可以让文章增色不少．

14．加入你校将举行“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的体会是写一篇短文．

（一）内容提示：1．不带管制刀具（restricted knives）到校；

2．上下楼梯不要拥挤；

3．注意饮食安全；

4．注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况（emergency）要报警．

（二）要求：1．短文应包括所提示的内容，可适当发挥；

2．短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；

3．词数：80词左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

How to protect ourselves

How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students．　First，don’t take restricted knives to school．They might hurt our classmates or ourselves．Secondly，there are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．Thirdly，we should eat more healthy food and we’d better keep away from junk food，At last，we must pay attention to the traffic．Remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency．

It’s our duty to protect ourselves．Let’s start from today．　．

【分析】本文是一篇材料作文．经过审题可知，要求以“中学生自我保护”为主题写一篇英语征文．内容侧重于如何进行自我保护，这是文章的重点．其要点主要包括已给出的4点，1．不带管制刀具（restricted knives）到校；2．上下楼梯不要拥挤；3．注意饮食安全；4．注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况（emergency）要报警．

要求在作文中缺一不可，也可在此基础上适当发挥．可以分条进行阐述．要看清要求，严格按要求去写，包括不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息以及字数的要求．由于是论述中学生如何进行自我保护的话题，所以时态为一般现在时；人称为第一人称．在语言上要注意简明扼要，准确到位，重点词汇句型有：first，Secondly，Thirdly，At last，had better do sth，keep away from，pay attention to等

【解答】答案：

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　How to protect ourselves

How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students．

First，don’t take restricted knives to school．They might hurt our classmates or ourselves．Secondly，there are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．Thirdly，we should eat more healthy food and we’d better keep away from junk food，At last，we must pay attention to the traffic．Remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency．

It’s our duty to protect ourselves．Let’s start from today．

【点评】此为材料作文，要仔细审题，抓住重点，在阐述自我保护的方法时要把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，可使用一些表示顺序的词，使论述更明确，更有层次感．还要注意多使用一些委婉的提建议的句型，尽量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥单调．要求语句通顺，语法，词汇，时态正确，书写规范

15．（2014•河池）三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就要进入高中学习，请以My life in the high school为题，根据下表所提供的信息和提示词，用英语写一篇小短文，畅想自己未来的高中生活．

提示词：peaceful（宁静的），knowledgeable（知识渊博的），宽敞明亮（wide and bright），care for（关爱），learn by oneself（自主学习），take an active part in（积极参加），group work（小组学习），out﹣of﹣class activities（课外活动）

要求：

1．短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用2～3句话表述；

2．所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数80左右（不含已给出句子的词数）；

3．短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；

4．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．

My life in the high school

My junior school will be over．And I'm going to my high school in September．I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful．

The campus of my high school will　be peaceful and beautiful．The classroom will be wide and bright．It must be a good place to study．The teachers will be knowledgeable．They will be strict with the students but they care for them，too．I will get along well with my classmates．I will learn by myself and take an active in group work．And I will try my best to make big progress．I will take part in all kinds of out﹣of﹣class activities and keep fit．　

Wonderful high school life!I can't wait!

【分析】本文需要我们根据题目中所给表格的信息，用英语来畅想自己未来的高中生活：从校园、老师、同学、学习及课外活动人称等几个方面进行阐述．可用第一人称，时态可用一般将来时．

【解答】参考例文 my life in the high school

My junior school will be over．And I'm going to my high school in September．I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful．

The campus of my high school will be peacefuland beautiful．The classroom will be wide and bright．It must be a good placeto study．The teachers will be knowledgeable．They will be strict with thestudents but they care for them，too．I will get along well with my classmates．I will learn by myself and take an active in group work．And I will try my bestto make big progress．I will take part in all kinds of out﹣of﹣class activitiesand keep fit．

Wonderful high school life!I can't wait!

【点评】此为提示性作文．要仔细审题，抓住重点，把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，要求语句通顺；语法，时态正确；书写规范．

16．（2011•福州）目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日"全国学生营养日"开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧．请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．

提示词：regularly，active，junk food（垃圾食品），a balanced diet，as a result

要求：

（1）所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法．

（2）所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥．

（3）字数80词左右．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55percent of the students　have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．（It is bad for their health．） 20 percent （of the students） go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．

It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．　．

【分析】本文是一篇图表作文，要求是根据你所在学校的学生会在5月20日"全国学生营养日"开展的问卷调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐．写作内容要根据吃早餐的情况，分析到具体比例和形成的原因．人称要以第三人称they来写，也可用到 数+percent of the students等做主语，由于是介绍调查结果，也就是平时的情况，应该用一般现在时．

【解答】Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important．But not all the students have realized its important．Here's the result of our survey．About 55

percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．They keep healthy and look active.25 percent of them just have junk food instead．They don't have a balanced diet．（It is bad for their health．） 20 percent （of the students） go to school without breakfast．As a result，these students often fell hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully．What's worse，they get ill easily．

It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast．

【点评】本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．

可以借鉴的短语

as a result 作为结果

What's worse 更糟糕的是

keep healthy 保持健康

可以借鉴的句型：

Breakfast is important，About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day．

What's worse，they get ill easily．

It's necessary/important （for us） to have breakfast．

17．（2010•自贡）"地球一小时"是世界自然基金会应对全球气候变化所发起的一项活动．倡议世界各城市在特定时间熄灯一小时，以表明对环保行动的支持．请根据下面表格内容，以"Earth Hour"为主题写一篇短文，宣传这一备受全球瞩目的环保活动．

要求：1．内容完整，意思连贯，书写规范，文中不得出现真实的姓名校名．

2．必须用上表格中所有的提示信息，词数80左右．

Earth Hour．

【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"Earth Hour"为主题写一篇短文，宣传这一备受全球瞩目的环保活动．时态主要为一般过去时辅以一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称辅以第一人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．

其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：

一、时间1.2007年3月31日，悉尼（Sydney）率先行动；超过220万家庭在晚上7：30同时熄灯；2.2010年3月27日，全球有125个国家参加，我国有33个城市也参加了"地球一小时"活动

二、目的：节约能源（save energy）改善气候（improve climate）

三、方式：与家人共进烛光晚餐（in the candlelight）

与朋友一起分享（share）故事

常用到的重点短语：

more than超过

turn off 关闭

take part in 参加

such as 例如

share…with sb 与某人分享…

【高分句型】

1．The activity aims to save energy and improve climate．

aim to表示目的是…

2．We have different ways ①to spend the dark hours ②such as having dinner with our family in the candlelight and ③sharing stories with our friends．

①动词不定式作为后置定语，修饰ways．

②such as 例如，给出事例．

③share…with sb 与某人分享…

【解答】Earth Hour

Earth Hour started in Sydney at 7：30 pm．on March 31，2007．More than 2.2 million homes turned off their lights for an hour．On March 27，2010 over 125 countries took part in it，and in our country 33 cities also took part in it．（时间）The activity aims to save energy and improve climate．【高分句型】（目的）We have different ways to spend the dark hours such as having dinner with our family in the candlelight and sharing stories with our friends．【高分句型】We can also have parties or take a walk in the parks．（方式）

【点评】图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．

18．在初中即将毕业之际，请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：

参考词汇：分享快乐 share happiness

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个

（2）信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

Dear Brian，

How time flies!We have been friends for three years．I’m writing to thank you for your help!

Three years ago，　I came to a new class，and I had no friends，so I felt lonely．You wrote to me many times．In your letter，you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well．During these three years，you shared happiness with me．And I became happy．In recent years，great changes have happened in Tianjin．Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin？　

Hope to see you soon!

Yours，

Zhang Ming．

【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给自己的好友Brain写一封感谢信．结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I came to…；you encouraged me to…；you shared…；I became…及Could you come…？等句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己想见到好友的愿望．

【解答】Dear Brian，

How time flies!We have been friends for three years．I’m writing to thank you for your help!

Three years ago，I came to a new class，and I had no friends，so I felt lonely．You wrote to me many times．In your letter，you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well．During these three years，you shared happiness with me．And I became happy．In recent years，great changes have happened in Tianjin．Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin？

Hope to see you soon!

Yours，

Zhang Ming

【点评】本题是一篇提示性表格作文．写作时，要把所给的材料研究透，抓住重点，以便把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，解答本题时，一定要注意时态和人称的使用，书写规范条理，尽量把所给信息都用上并有所拓展．

19．两个月前，胶东在线对我校初四学生毕业后的人生规划进行了一次问卷调查．请根据图表中提供的数据信息，写一篇100﹣120词的调查报告，并结合实际谈谈你的观点和毕业后的人生理想．

要求：

1．行文不得出现真实姓名和校名；

2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．

　65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school．About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation．And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families．Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims．I think they should make it clear what to do next．

In my opinion，we teenagers should have a design for our future life．Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time．

My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients．So，I am determi ned to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University．I’m ready for a hard but colorful senior school life．　．

【分析】本题是关于毕业后人生规划的作文，内容是胶东在线对我校初四学生毕业后的人生规划进行了一次问卷调查，根据图表中提供的数据信息，写一篇调查报告，并结合实际谈谈你的观点和毕业后的人生理想．写作要点要包括：1．描述调查问卷的内容和结果．2．我的观点．3．我的人生理想．

【解答】Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．

65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school．About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation．And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families．Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims．I think they should make it clear what to do next．

In my opinion，we teenagers should have a design for our future life．Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time．

My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients．So，I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University．I’m ready for a hard but colorful senior school life．

【点评】图画或图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，显得简洁明了，正被越来越多的各级各类英语考试所采用．提纲图表式作文属于控制性写作的范畴．它控制性强，便于评分．考生应仔细分析图表，引证典型数据并按提纲要求进行取材与构思．

二．书面表达（共11小题）

20．（2016•宜昌）为丰富学生的校园生活，鼓励学生参加体育运动，学校每年都会开展形式多样的运动会．既为有体育特长的同学提供了展示的舞台，也给了其他同学自由表现的机会．运动会中有人奋力拼搏，有人乐于帮助，有人善于宣传报道…请你写出某次运动会中自己的表现和感受，并为学校的运动会提出1～2条具体的建议．

要求：1.80词左右．

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名．

【分析】【高分句型一】

I couldn't hold back my tears because of the unexpected failure．因为意外的失利我控制不住自己的眼泪．

because of因为…，后加名词代词或动名词．

【高分句型二】

My suggestion is ①that we can start more fun games ②so that more students can take part in．我的建议是我们可以开展更多的比赛，那样更多的学生能参加．

①that引导的表语从句，与is构成系表结构．

②so that引导的目的状语从句．

【解答】Our school has a sports meeting every October．I join in the 100﹣meter race every time．Last year，I fell down in the final race．After I got up，it was too late．I couldn't hold back my tears because of the unexpected failure．【高分句型一】Then most of my classmates came around me．They reminded me of the real sports spirit．I'll never forget the experience．（运动会中自己的表现和感受）My suggestion is that we can start more fun games so that more students can take part in【高分句型二】（建议）．

【点评】根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落．但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用．

21．（2016•安顺）请你根据自己对"感恩父母"的认识和理解，结合以上五个问题，请以"How to Be Thankful to Our Parents"为题，写一篇80﹣100词的英语短文，不能照抄试卷上的材料，文中不能出现考生真实姓名、学校等信息．

【分析】高分句型：一、I have a really happy family because I love my parents very much．我有一个非常幸福的家庭，因为我非常爱我的父母．because引导的原因状语从句．

高分句型二、In fact，both my parents in their early forties are still young．事实上，我的父母在四十多岁还年轻．both…and…两者都…固定句型．

【解答】How to Thankful to Our Parents

Our parents are the dearest people to us in the world．For me，I have a really happy family because I love my parents very much．【高分句型一】

In fact，both my parents in their early forties are still young．【高分句型二】My mother is a farmer and my father is a teacher，but they enjoy doing their work．Actually，my mother is very beautiful，kind and hardworking．My father is very great，so I am pround of him．How can we thank our parents？I think we should often help them with housework and find time to communicate with them，trying our best to understand them．

In my opinion，we should always be grateful to our parents and do all that we can do thank them（陈述自己的观点），do you think so？

【点评】在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，平时多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．

22．（2016•云南）I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School

提示：初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈．在老师、同学和家长的帮助下，通过你的努力，你在学习、生活、文体活动、与人相处等方面，一定学到很多，取得了进步．请你根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文．

要求：

1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2）文中不得使用其真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

3）请将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．

【分析】高分句型一：

Fortunately，my friends showed me that education is important for my future，and I began to work harder at school．

这句话的句意为：幸运的是，我的朋友向我证明了教育对我的将来很重要，然后我开始在学校更努力地学习了．"education is important for my future"为宾语从句，做"show"的宾语．

高分句型二：

I used to be a bit shy，but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident．

这句话句意为：我过去经常害羞，但是我的朋友帮助我变得更加自信．其中"used　to　do　sth"意为"过去常常做某事"，"help　sb　（to）　do　sth"意为"帮助某人做某事"．

【解答】I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School

My time at junior high school has been mostly good．（开篇点题）I've been at junior high school since 2004．In the first year，I made some good friends，and had a lot of fun．However，I didn't do so well at school in Grades 6 and 7．I didn't study hard enough．Fortunately，my friends showed me that education is important for my future，and I began to work harder at school．【高分句型一】I used to be a bit shy，but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident．【高分句型二】Now I know that I have the ability to do good work．My reports in Grade 8 were much better than in Grades 6 and 7．I'm very happy that I'm no longer bottom of the class．Since Grade 8，I think I have become more confident．I have learned a lot at junior high school．（成长经历）

I have worked hard and I have enjoyed these last four years．I hope to do well in the final exam．I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me．（总结全文）

【点评】此作文要求考生根据初中三年的生活写一篇记叙文．题目为：I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School．因为是写自己的收获，所以人称用第一人称．根据自己的生活经历，找出自己在学习、生活、文体活动、与人相处等方面的进步，写出本文．

23．（2016•黔东南州）养成好习惯，成就好人生，作为一名中学生，请你从日常行为习惯及学习等方面谈谈如何成为一名合格的中学生，以"How to be a good student"为题写一篇英语短文．

要求：

1、语言正确，行文流畅，书写规范；

2、词数：80词左右；

3、文中不能出现真实的人名、校名或所在地名．

．

【分析】高分句型一：

①As a middle school student，I think ②it's important to have good habits，③which can make you to be a good student．作为一个中学生，我认为有良好的习惯是很重要的，这可以使你成为一个好学生．

①as作为，介词

②think后跟了宾语从句，引导词that被省略．it为形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式．

③which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子

高分句型二：

①In a word，I think②I'm a good student．一句话，我认为我是一个好学生．

①in a word总之

②think后跟了宾语从句，引导词that被省略

【解答】How to be a good student

As a middle school student，I think it's important to have good habits，which can make you to be a good student．【高分句型一】First，I get up and go to bed on time．I often take part in some meaningful activities with my friends in my spare time．【日常行为习惯方面】Second，I listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish my homework by myself．I also help other classmates with their lessons，and we often help each other at school Third，I always obey the school rules，respect my teachers and get on well with others．【学习等方面】

In a word，I think I'm a good student．【高分句型二】【总结全文】

【点评】本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．

24．（2016•嘉兴）英语课上，你们开展了一次以"What can we do to make home a happier place？"为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上．请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊Englihsh Learning 投稿．

注意：（1）短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法．

（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息．

（3）词数：80～100．短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数．

短文首句：In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place．

　Somesayit'sbettertospendmoretimewithfamily．Themorewegettogether，thebetterweunderstandeachother．Familymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries．Forexample，whentheyhaveproblems，weshouldtrytocheerthemup．Othersbelieveit'simportanttogivesmallpresentstoourfamilyontheirbirthdays．

Ithink，showingloveforfamilyisnecessary．Ifwehelpwithhousework，theymayfeelwarmer．Sometimes，eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier．Thoughwe'reyoung，wecandomuchtomakeahappierhome．　．

【分析】这是一篇图画作文．内容是针对学生"What can we do to make home a happier place？"的看法写一封短文向校刊投稿，时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．

其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：

1．描述图画：

①花更多的时间和家人在一起

②分享快乐和不开心

③记得家人的生日

2．我的看法

常用到的重点短语：

spend+时间+with sb 和某人在一起

the+比较级，the+比较级 越…，就越…

try to do sth 尽力做某事

cheer up 使兴奋

【高分句型】

1．Others believe ①②it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays．

①believe后是省略了that的宾语从句．

②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

2．If we help with housework，they may feel warmer．

if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词may，从句用一版现在时．

3．①Though we're young，we can do much②to make a happier home．

①though引导的让步状语从句．不能和but连用．

②动词不定式作为目的状语．

【解答】In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place．We shared different ideas．

Some say it's better to spend more time with family．The more we get together，the better we understand each other．（花更多的时间和家人在一起）Family members should share happiness and worries．For example，when they have problems，we should try to cheer them up．（分享快乐和不开心）Others believe it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays．（记得家人的生日）【高分句型】

I think，showing love for family is necessary．If we help with housework，they may feel warmer．【高分句型】Sometimes，even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier．Though we're young，we can do much to make a happier home．【高分句型】（我的看法）

【点评】这是一篇看图作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是仔细观察图画，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

25．（2016•济宁）假如你是李梅．你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的E﹣mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事．请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封E﹣mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．

Sima Guang hit the tank（缸）

要 求：

1．文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；

2．文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息；

3.100 词左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．

【分析】这是一篇图画作文．内容是给Tom回复一封E﹣mail，向他讲述司马光砸缸的故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．

其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：

1描述图画：司马光和朋友一起玩捉迷藏，旁边有一口装满水的缸，一个小孩掉进缸里，其他小孩吓坏了，司马光想出主意，捡起石头扔向缸，缸破了，小孩得救了．

2询问对该故事及主人公的看法．

常用到的重点短语：

be interested in 对…感兴趣

fall into 掉入

be full of 充满

pick up 捡起

【高分句型】

1．I'm very happy①that you②are interested in traditional Chinese stories．

①that引导的宾语从句．

②be interested in 对…感兴趣

2①．When the kids were playing，one child accidentally ②fell into the tank．

①when引导的时间状语从句．

②fall into 掉入

3．Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．

so…that…如此…以致于…，that引导的结果状语从句．

【解答】Dear Tom，

I'm very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories．【高分句型】Well，let me tell you a famous one with the name"Sima Guang hit the tank"．

Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with several children in the backyard．There was a large water tank in the yard．It was full of water．（第一幅图）When the kids were playing，one child accidentally fell into the tank．【高分句型】Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．【高分句型】（第二幅图）However，Sima Guang was different．He thought it over and then had an idea．He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank．（第三幅图）"Bang!"，the tank broke and the water ran out．The kid was saved．（第四幅图）

Do you like the story？What do you think of Sima Guang？（询问对该故事及主人公的看法．）

I am looking forward to hearing from you．

Li Mei

【点评】看图作文的基本步骤：

一、列出要点．明确写作的具体内容，仔细寻找全部要点，做到要点无遗漏．

二、依据内容要点，选择确立可供自己使用的熟悉词汇、短语和句型．做到"不求难，不求异，只求准"．

三、将要点译成基本句子．尽量用熟悉、简单的结构表达，避免因用大量的长句和复合句而造成的语法错误．忌用汉语思维生造句子．

四、按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序或情节发展对基本句子进行有序的排列组合．

五、适当增加细节，运用适当的连接过渡词将句子连接成文．

六、细心检查错漏：检查人称和主谓是否一致；检查时态和语态是否正确，检查语句和措词是否恰当；检查拼写和标点是否无误；检查内容要点是否齐全．

26．（2016•河北）关于"说英语"问题，小华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的意见，请你仔细阅读下面图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给的要求写一篇短文．

要求：（1）用"Li Hua"或"Miss Wang"补全短文首句；

（2）写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；

（3）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

（4）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．

参考词汇：shy，make a mistake，believe in

I am ．

【分析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们根据图片内容写一篇关于"说英语"的作文，内容是开放的，需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力，把这些内容补充完整．由题目可知，写作时要用第二人称，时态为一般现在时，内容要点包括：补全短文首句、续写理由、提出要求以及适当鼓励．

重要短语及句型：

a tool of …的工具

as much as possible 尽可能多地

be afraid of 害怕

believe in 相信

The more you speak it，the better your English will become．

你说得越多，你的英语会变得越好．用到了句型"The+比较级，the+比较级"，表示"越…，就越…"．

And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake．

不要害羞或害怕出错．用到了be afraid of"害怕"，后跟动名词；make a mistake犯错．

Practice makes perfect．

熟能生巧．这是一个谚语，用得恰到好处．

【解答】Possible version 1

I am Miss Wang．（补全首句）Your English is poor because you don't speak English．English，like any other language，is a tool of communication﹣﹣﹣the more you speak it，the better your English will become．（高分句型）（理由）So you should try to speak every day，as much as possible．And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake．（高分句型）Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you．（要求）The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up!Always remember：practice makes perfect．（高分句型）（鼓励）

【点评】写图画作文时，首先要看懂图画所表达的内容，最好列一下提纲，然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题，但要注意，文章必须要覆盖整个要点，行文要注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，要使用正确的句子，同时注意，要使用一定的连接词，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等．再者，在作文完成时要注意检查、修改，如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分．最后，注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文．

27．（2016•烟台）每个人对交友都有不同的看法，请根据图示提供的信息，以"Good Friend in My Eyes"为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，首先分享大众观点，然后从中选出你最看重的两方面进行阐述，并说明理由．

要求：1．短文语句通联、意思连贯，可适当发挥；

2．题目与开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不得出现个人真实信息．

参考词汇：some…others…；not only…but also…；both…and…；work together

Good Friends in My EyesEveryone needs friends，Different people have different ideas about making friends．

．

【分析】本题要求写一篇作文，题目为：Good Friend in My Eyes（我眼中的朋友）．时态用一般现在时态．动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题，题中包含了这些要点：①首先分享大众观点；②从中选出你最看重的两方面进行阐述，并说明理由．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．

高分句型一

Some people like friends who are not only honest but also outgoing．一些人喜欢不仅诚实而且外向的朋友．

这是一个who引导的定语从句．先行词是friends，所以从句中的谓语动词用are．not only…but also不仅，而且．

高分句型二

I think it is important for my friends to be honest．我认为对于我的朋友来说诚实是重要的．

这是一个宾语从句，主句是I think，从句是 it is important for my friends to be honest，it is+形容词 for sb．to do sth．是固定句型，对于某人来说做某事是…的．

【解答】Everyone needs friends，Different people have different ideas about making friends．Some people like friends who are not only honest but also outgoing．【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】Some like friends who are good at sports and always ready to help others，others like friends who study hard and get on well with others．【要点一大众观点】

In my opinion，I think it is important for my friends to be honest【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．What's more，good friends should help each other and often work together．I am a little shy，I expect my friends funny and humorous，I hope my friends can make me laugh．【要点二最看重的两方面进行阐述，并说明理由】

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

28．（2016•黑龙江）（A） 话题作文：2016年5月25日，著名学者杨绛女士逝世，她一生饱读诗书、才华横溢．亲爱的同学们，你们喜欢阅读吗？请以 Let's Read More 为题，用英语写一篇80﹣100词的文章．

提示：1．当前存在现象（上网，聊天，玩手机游戏…）

2．读书的益处

3．有关阅读的做法与打算

（B） 图示作文：仔细观察下列四幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇短文．

要求：1．话题作文或图示作文任选其一．

2．词数在80～100词之间．

3．要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥．

【分析】高分句型：

句型一：

Suddenly，he saw an old woman lying on the ground，the vegetables were everywhere．突然，他看见一个老人躺在地上，蔬菜洒得到处都是．这里用到了短语：see sb doing sth 看见某人正在在某事

句型二：

If he helped the woman，she might ask him for money when she come to life．If he didn't do that，the old woman might lose her life．如果他帮助这个老人，她醒过来时可能会找他要钱，如果他不帮她，这个老人可能会失去生命．

此句为if引导的条件状语从句．if 意为"如果"，引导条件状语从句时，表示假如有从句的动作发生就（不）会有主句的动作的发生．此处表示对将来的遐想，从句用一般过去时，主句用should/would/might+动词原形．

【解答】A helpful boy

It was a sunny afternooon．When school was over，Li Lei was on his way home happily．He felt very relaxed because the next day would be Saturday．Suddenly，he saw an old woman lying on the ground，the vegetables were everywhere．【高分句型一】She looked terrible．（交代事情的开头）Li Lei looked around，but found nobody．He thought for a while，"Help or not help？"He said to himself．If he helped the woman，she might ask him for money when she come to life．If he didn't do that，the ola woman might lose her life．【高分句型二】Finally，Li Lei decided to help her．（交代事情的经过）Luckily，the old woman was saved．She praised Li Lei，"You are a good boy!"How helpful the boy is!Let's learn from him．（交代事情的结果）

【点评】在写作时要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，表达流畅．还可以根据考生的语言积累，多使用一些短语和高分句型．

29．（2016•晋江市一模）如今，手机已经在我们的生活中广泛使用．它既让人们享受到许多的便利，也带来了不少的问题．请以My Opinions on Using Cellphones为题，写写你对使用手机的看法．

内容包括以下三方面：1．使用手机的好处 2．使用手机的弊端 3．你的建议（词数：90左右）

温馨提示：短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．

My Opinions on Using Cellphones

【分析】高分句型：

①If we spend too much time on cellphones，we may get headaches or sore eyes．如果我们在手机上花费太多的时间，我们可能会头疼或眼睛酸痛．本句中if引导一个条件状语从句，一般翻译成如果；spend some time on sth花费时间做某事；get headaches 头疼．

②we won't have enough time to study，exercise or chat with family face to face．我们没有足够的时间学习，锻炼或与家人面对面聊天．have enough time to do sth有足够的时间做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式；face to face面对面．

【解答】My Opinions on Using Cellphones

Cellphones are widely used nowadays．There is no doubt that they provide us with more lively ways of communication．We can also listen to music，read news，do some shopping，play games and watch movies on the cellphone．（使用手机的好处）

Cellphones have improved our lives，but they have brought problems too．If we spend too much time on cellphones，we may get headaches or sore eyes（高分句型）．Besides，we won't have enough time to study，exercise or chat with family face to face（高分句型）．（使用手机的弊端）

In short，we should use cellphones in proper ways instead of looking at the screen for hours without a break．（给出一些建议）

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，抓住对使用手机的看法这个主题，要做到语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺．

30．（2016•徐州二模）请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇关于你的朋友亮亮减肥的故事．并通过此事，谈谈你的感想．要求：

1 90词左右；

2可适当增加细节使行文连贯完整；

3文中不得出现真实姓名；

4 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．

参考词汇：overweight，flied chicken，balanced diet，good figure/shape

Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be﹣he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，．

【分析】高分句型：

①These changes helped him lose a lot of weight．这些变化帮助他减了肥．本句中help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，后面跟动词原形，lose weight减肥．

②He started to exercise．他开始做运动．固定短语start to do sth开始做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．

【解答】Liangliang is no longer the boy he used to be﹣he has changed greatly．Only a year ago，he was overweight and a little lazy．He got tired easily and did not like sports．His favorite meal was fried chicken and chips（介绍亮亮减肥前的情况）．One day，he realized that he couldn't continue like this．So，he decided to change．He started to exercise（高分句型）．He ran in the school playground every day．He also began eating a healthier diet of more fruits and vegetables，and less meat．These changes helped him lose a lot of weight（高分句型）．He is now a very happy boy in very good shape，and he is always so active．（介绍亮亮如何减肥）

From Liangliang's story，we learn a lot．Where there'a a will，there's a way．（亮亮减肥的启示）

【点评】本文是一篇图画作文，在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生要注意详略得当，做到有条理．学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型．英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采．

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