专题36 英语作文之话题作文(压轴题)(解析版)

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1. 2014年江苏省淮安市中考】

在初中三年的学习生活中,父母、老师给了我们很多帮助。假设你是李明,在即将毕业之际,用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情。感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一。内容必须包括以下提示点:1、感谢的对象及原因;2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果;3、你的感受和打算。

注意:1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;2、词数在80-100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数。

Dear __________[来源:Z&xx&k.Com]

Words can’t show my thanks to you,

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Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】

Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss X,

Words can’t show my thanks to you.You’ve helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and give me some advice.At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it.You came and cheered me up.You told me some good ways to improve English.With your help,I’ve made great progress in English.I’m so thankful to you for your kind help that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,

Words can’t show my thanks to you.You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it.You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I’ve become a popular boy/girl and made a lot of friends.I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩。如:in troubleAt one timemake great progress in; take good care of; argue with; talk with; work hard等。短文中还用了一些连词如:whenthatand等,使句子结构更加复杂化,增加了文章的亮点。

考点:话题作文。

2. 2014年吉林省中考】

同学们彼此书写临别赠言时,初中生活的点点滴滴萦绕眼前,欢乐和痛苦都成为幸福的回味!请你以“My Happy Middle School Life”为题,写一篇短文.10分)

要求:1.叙述一或两件在初中生活中令你感到开心快乐的事,可适度发挥。

2.80个词左右。文中不得出现真实的校名与姓名。

【答案】

My Happy Middle School Life

 How time flies! My middle school life is coming to an end. I can’t forget the happy time that I’ve spent with my classmates and teachers. At school, I am busy with my studies. I’m interested in English because my English teacher, Miss Wang, is kind and helpful.

  I like playing basketball and reading books. After class, I join some clubs at school. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life. I learn how to face difficulties, and I also learn how to get on well with friends.

  My school life is meaningful and colorful. In a word, it is unforgettable.

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩,如:At school, I am busy with my studies. I’m interested in English. I learn how to face difficulties. I also learn how to get on well with friends.等。文章还用了that引导的定语从句I can’t forget the happy time that I’ve spent with my classmates and teachers.增加了它的亮点。

考点:话题作文。

3. 2014年江苏省宿迁市中考】时间都去哪儿了?这是许多成年人的感慨,也是一些中学生的烦恼:没有时间做作业,没有时间从事个人爱好… …

其实,时间就在我们的掌握之中,关键是能否合理利用。请根据提示,以“How to spend our time properly”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。

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注意:

1. 词数80左右。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 内容必须包括上图中的要点,可作必要的发挥;

3. 条理清楚、语句连贯;

4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。

How to spend our time properly

Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?

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If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.

【答案】

How to spend our time properly

Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?

As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan for every day. Most of all, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we don’t need to spend so much time on them. So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies.

In other ways, we need time, too. For example, we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends.

If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式,增加了文章的色彩,如:make a plan for make a list make sb do sthspend some time in doing sth ;it is+形容词+ for sb to do sth等。文章用了一些连词ifandbutso等,使句子的结构不再单一。为了上下文的衔接用了一些过渡词如:most of all,then, in other ways等。

考点:话题作文。

4. 2014年辽宁省沈阳市中考】

某英文报刊开辟中学生栏目,请你以 Reading Comic Strips is____为题写一篇小短文,为报社投稿(词数 80-100)。步骤与要点如下:  1.确定主题,并在文中说明原因;  

2.围绕主题,进行叙述;  

3.讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。  

要求:1.补全标题(参考词汇:interesting; popular; useful; boring; my pleasure等);  

2.字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范;

3.鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

4.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照图文中的内容,但不可以直接引 用图文中的句子;

5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名.  

Reading Comic Strips is ______

There are many kinds of stories in comic strips. In my opinion, reading comic strips is...  

【答案】

There are many kinds of stories in comic strips. In my opinion, reading comic strips is interesting.

When I was young, I had few friends in our neighbourhood, so my father bought me a lot of comic strips . In these books I learned a lot about our life and history. Since then I have been in love with the comic strips.

I have become a middle school student for three year, but I am still crazy about comic strips.And I begin to draw my own cartoons. I wish I could be a carntoonist one day.

【解析】[来源:&&Z&X&X&K]

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,介绍自己对于看连环画的看法。本题给出的材料较为简略,需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中注意讲明喜欢连环画的原因,讲述一段榆次有关的故事或者经历。根据短文内容,可知本文主要用第一人称,进行叙述,注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配,使得文章避免单纯的重复,使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对我喜欢的猴子这种动物有了一个比较全面的了解,不失为一篇上等作文。

考点:考查话题类作文

5. 2014年上海市中考】

Write at least 60 words about the topic “This time next year“ (明年此时为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)

你是否想象过,明年此时,你的生活会发生怎样的变化?你对自己或他人有怎样的期待?你能为此做些什么?)

(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)

The following sentence patterns are for reference only. ( 以下句型仅供参考)

I hope to /I hope that...

Perhaps I will...

It will be exciting / necessary / terrible to ...

【答案】

This Time Next Year

It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like. At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also,I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone. Life will be totally differentbut I'm really looking forward to it.(90 words)

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth,做某事对某人来说怎么样;so that一遍,所以;take part in参加;in order to为了,目的是;take care of照顾;look forward to盼望等。连词also but等的使用是本文看起来更加条理清楚,符合逻辑关系。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点:考查话题类作文。

6.2013湖北黄石】假如你叫李华,你打算中考结束后和同学们结伴出游,但遭到了父母的反对。请结

合此事,谈谈如何对待父母及如何解决日常生活中与他们意见不一致的问题。

要求:1. 逻辑清晰,语言通顺,观点不限,自由发挥,无需标题。

2. 文中不能以任何方式出现真实的人名、校名和县(市)区名及其它相关信息。

3. 词数:80-100

参考词汇:中考 the High School Entrance Examination

【答案】

In my opinion, we should love and respect our parents because they love and care for us so much. Since we are not adults, we need to discuss things with our parents before we make decisions. But when we do so, we often find that what they think is quite different from what we think. What should we do? I think we should explain to them what we think and ask them for advice.

Take my experience for example: Last time I told my parents about my summer travel plan and they simply said "No". I was really upset at first. But later I realized that they were just worried abour my sefety. So I talked to them later and made it clear that I would be safe together with my classmates. In the end, not only did they agree to my plan but also helped me prepare for the trip.

How nice it is that our parents and we can understand each other!

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇命题作文题目中给出的材料较为简略,故动笔前先要围绕主题确定写作内容,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,句式,关键单词等问题。写作中要注意举出实例来说明自己和父母之间的问题,注意表达自己的观点。结合材料可知本文主要是第一人称,时态一般应该用一般现在时,注意表达观点时,常见句式的应用,如:I think……,情态动词should后面动词用原形。为了是表达更有逻辑性,可以使用序数词,连接词等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文思路清晰,逻辑性强。使用了适当的连词及句式,为文章增色不少.: In my opinion, Since we are not adults, Butwe often find that what they think is quite different from what we think.Take my experience for example: at firstBut laterIn the end, not only but also,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点:话题作文

7.2013年河南】每个人都是独一无二的,都有与众不同之处,人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。请以 “What makes me a good friend?”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求:1. 语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 80词左右。

What makes me a good friend?

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【答案】

One possible version

What makes me a good friend?

I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular.

I’m always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought.

Besides, I’m quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories to make my friends laugh. They say time spent with me is full of fun.

I’m honest. I never tell lies. So I’m a friend worth trusting.

【亮点说明】这篇短文思路清晰,逻辑性强。使用了适当的连词及句式,为文章增色不少.: I am a boy easy to get along with.,定语从句That’s the most important reason that makes me so popular,让步状语从句Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment’s thought.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点:话题作文

8.2013年重庆】埃及千年神庙惊现中文涂鸦××到此一游。此事曝光后,引起国内外广泛关注,某国外英语网站就此发起讨论。请你以一名中国中学生(网名Whitecloud)的身份,跟帖发表自己的看法。

要点提示:[来源:Z,xx,k.Com]

1.表明身份;

2. 发表看法;

3. 你的行动

要求:

1. 词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

【答案】

One possible version:

Whitecloud: I come from China k.Com] .

I’m also a middle school student like Ding. When I read the news, my heart ached. What Ding did made me sad. Ding should feel sorry for that. As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. For example, we’d better keep our voicedown . I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. And I’m sure we Chinese will  show our best to the whole world!

Sincerely yours,

【解析】

试题分析:本题是就一起热点网络时间发表看法。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料,表达自己对这起事件的看法,同时注意自己是中国人,要自觉的维护自己国家的形象。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在及时态,这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语,如:When I read the news, my heart ached.What Ding did made me sad.For example, we’d better keep our voicedown,等。

考点:话题作文。

9.2012年河北】假如你叫李华,请你就英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学这一问题,根据下面的提示和要求,给你的老师Miss Li写一封信,谈一谈你的看法。

提示:(1)What’s your idea?

(2) Why do you think so?

(3) What is your advice?

要求:(1)信须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。

(2) 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

(3) 词数:60~80

Dear Miss Li,

I think you’d better use ______________________________________________

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Hopefully you can think about it.

Best wishes!

 Yours,

                                                          Li Hus

【答案】

Possible versions

Dear Miss Li,[来源:Zxxk.Com][来源:..]

      I think you'd better use English in class. When you speak English, we'll have a good chance to improve our listening skills. It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly. This way, we can learn English better and better.

Hopefully you can think about it.

Best wishes!

                                                        Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

Dear Miss Li,

      I think you'd better use both English and Chinese. The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English, it's good for our listening. At the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking, reading and writing. However, if you only use English, we can't follow you sometimes, especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is "Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary". This way, we can learn English better.

Hopefully you can think about it.

Best wishes!

                                                        Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

 【亮点说明】短文从确切的角度阐述自己的观点。内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语

考点:话题作文。

10.2012年北京】书面表达(本题共15分)

生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验,如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法…….现在,某英文报纸举行分享(Sharing为话题的征文,请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历,并谈谈你的感受。

要求:根据中文和英文参考词汇,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑,不少于80—100词的短文。文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

参考词汇:share…with…;experience; interest; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident

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【答案】

One possible version:

I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色.: 时间状语从句When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new classso that句式,until引导的时间状语从句,From then on等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点:话题作文。

【考点总结】语话题作文可以采用三段式的方法来写: 首先介绍( introduction), 总体提纲挈领 然后写具体内容围绕话题展开论述,最好是firstly secondly thirdly 分三段或者更多,每段写一点都围绕这一个话题及中心话题来写。说最后就是结论conclusion 在结论里面发表自己对这个话题的最后总结的看法和对这个问题的展望。

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