英语作文:动物dog

发布时间:2018-06-30 22:46:04   来源:文档文库   
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I love to keep a dogA dog A friend

I always want to have a dog as a pet, and I often dream of(梦想着) having a dog. However, my mother doesn't like keeping a dog at home because she is very busy.

Since ancient times(自古以来), dogs have been human beings’ best friends. They protected us from being hurt from fierce(凶残的) animals and looked after our houses so that thieves couldn’t steal our belongings and properties(工具). Nowadays many people keep a dog as a pet. We play with them to have fun, and we treat them as our family members.

From my perspective(观点),dogs are brave and loyal(忠诚的). They can even give their lives to save their owners’ lives. They are so clever that they can understand what people say and act according to people's instructions.

If I have a dog, it's necessary to walk it every day. I can walk it or even run with it in a park, which will help me to keep healthy. If I have a dog, I will do more outdoor activities(户外活动)to improve my PE performance.

点评:本文开头先介绍了自己喜欢狗但是家长不支持买,很多同学也是这样,因此容易吸引人们的共鸣。接着文章描述狗的来历,作用和自己的看法。最后一段则是展望自己拥有了一条狗后的美好情景,渴望之情呼之欲出。不过文章标题是一句话,有些冗长,建议改短一些,更能高度概括全文。

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