2019年高考英语全程训练计划：写作专练(2)

写作专练(二)

写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

(2018·河南洛阳高三第一次统考)

My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be，however he never fails to show her care and consideration.Once I broke a neighbor window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately.When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened.I could only tell him a truth.Instead of scold，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen.How luckily I am to have such a good father!

【答案】

My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be, he never fails to show care and consideration.Once I broke a window.Seeing nobody around，I ran away immediately.When Dad came home，he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what happened.I could only tell him truth.Instead of，he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health he also teaches me to be a good citizen.How I am to have such a good father!

第一处：删除however。考查连词。在as引导的让步状语从句中，表语放句首时，从句倒装，分析句子结构可知，however多余。

第二处：her改为his。考查代词。与上文人称代词he保持一致可知，此处应用形容词性物主代词his。

第三处：neighbor改为neighbor's。考查名词所有格形式。此处用名词所有格形式作定语，修饰名词window。

第四处：has改为had。考查动词时态。与asked呼应可知，此处应用过去完成时，表示过去的过去。

第五处：a改为the。考查冠词。tell the truth为固定词组搭配，符合语境，故用定冠词the。

第六处：scold改为scolding。考查动名词。介词后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，故用动名词scolding作介词of的宾语。

第七处：our前加to。考查介词。apologize to sb.意为“向某人道歉”，为固定词组搭配，故用介词to。

第八处：and改为but。考查连词。not only...but also...意为“不但……而且……”，为固定结构，故用连词but。

第九处：what改为how。考查疑问词。与teaches呼应可知，此处表示方式，故用how。

第十处：luckily改为lucky。考查形容词。与I am呼应可知，此处应用形容词lucky作表语。

第二节　书面表达(满分25分)

(2018·东北三省四市教研联合体模拟二)

假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”(最美中学生)，请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：

1．介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；

2．说明推荐理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【范文赏读】

Dear_Editor，

I'm a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student.①It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends，Lin Yang.

First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well.Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin.② Last but not least，he is warm­hearted and willing to help others in need.

Therefore，I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.

Yours_sincerely，

Li_Hua

【一句多译】

①I would be grateful if you consider my recommendation of my best friend，Lin Yang./In my opinion，my best friend，Lin Yang，should be chosen to be The Most Qualified Student.

②Most importantly，he is always ready to help others./The most qualified points of him are warm­heartedness and the readiness to meet others' need.

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