初中英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧(超强)及练习题(含答案)
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·北京中考模拟）为了帮助同学们树立集体观念和提高班级责任感，你校英文报刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” （创建和谐班级）为题征文，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈班级成 员应该如何创建一个和谐的班集体，作为一名成员，你通常是怎么做的，以及还需要再做些什么。
提示词语: important, respect, trust, help
提示问题： ● Why should we build a harmonious class?
● As a member of a class, what do you usually do?
● What else do you need to do?
We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________
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【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.
As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have some
problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,
I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.
Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of my
classmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.
【解析】这篇作文给出的写作背景是：你们学校英文报刊在以Building a Harmonious Class为题征文，你来为校刊投稿，谈一谈如何创建一个和谐的班集体、你通常是怎么做的以及你还需要做什么。这是一篇开放性的作文，题目中只给出了话题和大概的一个提纲，具体的写作内容需要我们自己思考，发挥想象力来充实完成。因此首先我们要仔细思考这个问题，结合自己的真实生活，想一想平时是怎么做的，应该怎么做。这是写作中的一个难点。另外一个难点是使用正确的英语将自己的所想表达出来，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时，不能逐词去翻译，而应从文章、句子的整体考虑，首先确定这篇短文使用什么人称、时态来叙述；可能用到哪些词汇、短语和句型，每个句子应以简单句为基础，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构，然后再变化成较高级、复杂是句型，如复合句、非谓语动词形式等。另外还应注意语句之间的连接，使用恰当的连词或副词，使文意衔接紧密、意思连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、充实。作者根据题目要求就如何创建和谐班级发表了自己的看法。短文中作者结合了自己日常生活中的所作所为，使文章的内容非常真实。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章中以第一人称为主、一般现在时态来叙述，符合题目要求。语法规范，句式表达符合英语的习惯。文章中以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整文章结构，使用复杂句型、短文和较高级的句型，提升了文章的档次。这些较好的句型和短语有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help them.等等。
2．（·广州市第十六中学中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。
要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
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Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3．（·北京初三）题目2：
常言道，“一分耕耘，一分收获”这告诉我们凡事只有付出努力，才能取得成功。
假如你是李华，你校英文杂志正在开展以“付出与收获”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你个人的一次经历：你付出了什么努力？取得了什么收获？有何感悟？
提示词语：weak，spend，progress，keep trying
提示问题：— What did you do?
—What did you achieve?
—What did you learn from the experience?
【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇短文关于“付出与收获”，学生可以通过自己的日常经历，来写付出了什么，中间是怎么努力的，以及最后从这段经历中学到了什么。
【详解】
本文写了自己一开始不擅长英语，在自己的努力下，英语成绩取得了进步，每天听英语，阅读英语，也尝试着看一些英文电影，经过几个月的努力，英语成绩有所提升。通过这件事意识到，只要肯努力，没有什么是做不成的。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
4．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求：1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；
2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。
【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片的内容介绍一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的经历。主要是要完整叙述图片内容、结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。在陈述个人观点或给出建议时用一般现在时来写。注意作文中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到的不是风景，而是无数晃动的头。句子What you see at the seaside做主语。
【高分句型二】
In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来，旅行时，人们不仅要注意安全，还要注意卫生，不要到处乱扔垃圾。该句话运用了not only…but also…。
5．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
三年初中生活即将结束，在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励，支持和帮助。虽然你就要和一些人说再见了，但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。请以I’ll never forget _______为题，谈谈你最难忘的人。老师、好友，家人，同桌还是……
基本信息：（1）Who is he/she?
（2）What kind of person is he/she?
（3）What did he/she do for you ?
（4）Why is he/she unforgettable?
参考词汇：loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful…
要求：1.补全标题；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名
3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响；
4. 词数不少于70词。
I’ll never forget _______
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【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacher
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.
Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你最难忘的人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
6．（·广东中考模拟）近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不 敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 “My opinions about school bullying” 为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1. What do you think of school bullying?
2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?
要求：
1. 所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以 使行文连贯；
2. 80词以上。
参考词汇：心理问题mental health problems .
My opinions about school bullying
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【答案】My opinions about school bullying
School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?
If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达
假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动， 请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。
提示问题：
1. What’s your hobby?
2. Why do you like it?
3. When did you start it?
4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 不少于80词。
My hobby
【答案】My Hobby
I have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇作文按照要求可分为4块儿内容，首先指出我的爱好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接着说明为什么喜欢这个爱好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old.我开始这个爱好的时间，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.自己的收获以及期望. 中间用到短语such as…,以及连词because…., when….and…等，使文章表达清晰，也具有连贯性，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的文章。
8．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：
1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：
（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。
（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。
（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。
3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. ___________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Billy,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.
Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
9．（·广州市天河中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。
提示：1. 出行方式
2. 不浪费纸、水、电等
3. 其他低碳生活的方式（补充一点）
4. 低碳生活的作用
注意：1．词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名等相关信息。
My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. _______________________
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【答案】My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when I don't need them. What's more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.
I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。本文时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一人称。认真阅读所给提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我的低碳生活
低碳生活是一种生活方式。节约我们周围所有的能源是一种习惯。保护我们的环境很重要。首先，我总是步行去上学，告诉父母步行去上班，而不要开车。其次，当我不需要的时候，我会及时关掉水龙头、风扇、电视机和电灯，以节约用水和用电。更重要的是，我们家里的水一直都在重复利用。第三，我使用纸张的两面。我认为充分利用纸张是件好事。通过这样做，我们可以拯救许多树木。最后，我会带着篮子购物而不使用塑料袋。
我相信如果我们能做这些事情，我们的生活会越来越好。
低碳，快乐生活。我们采取行动吧。
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
10．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）写作。
Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （毕业）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included.
1. How your junior school life is.
2. Things/moments that you won’t forget.
3. The regrets in the three years.
4. Plans for your future.
5. A natural ending.
【答案】I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
【解析】学生们已经度过了三年的初中生活，在这三年里，一定有一些事是他们无法忘记的。这篇作文要求学生们介绍一下自己的初中生活。题目中列出了一些要点，如初中生活的感受、难忘的事情或时刻、后悔的事情、未来的计划，然后再加上一个自然的结尾。写作时，我们就可以利用这些要点来组织语言，充实文章的内容。通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，注意谓语动词形式的变化。另一个难点是英语表达和汉语习惯是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句式整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型。可以多用简单句，如主谓宾结构、主系表结构等，点缀一些并列句和复合句或较高级的句型，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。合理安排文章结构，注意语句之间的衔接，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，要点全面，并且结构安排合理，层次清晰。短文首先介绍了自己对三年初中生活、老师以及同学们的感受；然后介绍了自己在这三年里后悔的事情；接下来是对未来的计划以及对老师和同学们的祝福。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，谓语动词形式变化准确，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中长短句结合，使文章富于变化，有节奏感。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future.等。
11．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达。
你向往的高中生活即将开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文
要求：
1.短文应包括提供的所有内容，进行适当发挥。语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，注意句子之间的衔接。
2.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息。
3.文章标题已给出。词数：90-110 词左右。
I Expect My Senior High School Life
【答案】I Expect My Senior High School Life
I hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new friends.I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing tennis.I expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my friends.After school,I hope to do after-class activities in the free time. I hope these will come ture.
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on well with，make progress，after school，hope to do，in the free time，come ture等。而And I hpe there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. / I hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball, playing tennis.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时和一般将来时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。
12．（·北京中考模拟）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，在你的生活中一定有人给予你无私的爱和帮助。某英文网站正在开展题为 "The person I want to thank" 征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？
提示词语: mother, busy, take care of, cook, encourage, help, love, hard
提示问题:Who do you want to thank?
Why do you want to thank him/her?
What do you learn from him/her?
The person I want to thank
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【答案】The person who I want to thank most is my mother. When I was ill she looked after me carefully. If I felt upset, she would talk to me and encourage me. She is not only my mother but also my best friend. I real want to say thanks to my mother. I also want to tell her I will love her forever.
【解析】这是一篇话题作文。要求以"The person I want to thank"为题写一篇短文，内容包括：谁是你想要感谢的人？为什么你要感谢他（她）？你从他/身上学到了什么？根据所给出的材料内容可知本文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
13．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80字左右）
内容包含：1.遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。
4.你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。
参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
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【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
【解析】本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述，谈论有关交通安全的相关内容。实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充个人的观点。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。可能用到的词组：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。
14．（·江苏中考模拟）假如你叫Sandy，你收到了你的英文笔友Lucy的来信。请你用英文给她写一封回信，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出可行的建议。
Dear Sandy,
I am very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers,ice creams and potato chips,but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little for lunch and I often feel tired and can't follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy
注意事项:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;
2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Lucy,
I am glad to receive your letter.
Yours,
Sandy
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand your feeling and I'm worried about your health and your study. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips are bad for your health, so you had better give up the thought that you want to eat them at school. Second, try to eat as much school lunch as possible in order to have enough energy. Try your best and everything will be all right soon. Finally, if there is really something wrong with the school lunch, you can talk to your teachers and help improve it. It's not only for yourself, but also for the whole school. Good luck.
Yours,
Sandy
【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这封信使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如；be worried about；be bad fo as ··· as possible ;Try one’s best； in order to； not only··· but also···等；First；Second, Finally,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
15．（·广东中考模拟）随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：
1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？
2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,
【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
16．（·北京中考模拟）自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。
提示词语：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing
提示问题：
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
17．（·海南中考模拟）书面表达
年1月以来，琼海市开始推广使用共享单车，你对这一举措有什么看法？请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文，谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议，以便在英语课上与同学们交流。
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 必须包含所给提示，但不要逐字翻译，并做适当发挥；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …
What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?
【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
18．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
年济南市入选全国文明城市。为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。
要求： 1.词数100个左右。
2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.
First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.
Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.
Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.
Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.
We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文。为使济南市入选全国文明城市，巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该规范自己的言行举止。要求根据所给出的提示，写一篇短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。本文给出的材料比较具体全面，考生需要用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，并可进行适当想象发挥。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
19．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
假设你叫李明，曾荣幸成为天津国际马拉松赛的一名志愿者。请根据以下要点，用英文写一篇演讲稿，谈谈这一段美好的经历。
（1）年4月国际马拉松赛在天津举行；
（2）作为志愿者，赛前接受了培训；
（3）在闲暇时间里，和运动员用英语交谈，为他们提供帮助；
（4）和许多运动员成为了朋友，也了解了许多不同的文化；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：志愿者 volunteer
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help them.And we are friends with many athletes.At the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.
I think the experience is good for me.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for等。而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a training.等被动语态和I think the experience is good for me.宾语从句的运用，使本文内容丰富，语态多样，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
20．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容。
提示词：plate 盘子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩笔， color 给…上色，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, "Why not turn them into paintings?" Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图画叙述一个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题和一些常见句式的应用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的应用，使短文内容表达丰富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。切忌堆砌词语和句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子连贯流畅。
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