2018年6月的浙江读后续写题浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文

2018年6月浙江省英语高考写作试题

第二节读后续写(满分25分)

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.

 We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.

  His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.

  In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountain. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” My dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.

注意：

1.      所续写短文的词数应为 150左右；

2.      至少使用5个短语中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.      续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；

4.      续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。     

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ______________________________________________________

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. ______________________________________________________

浙江一线教师的五篇读后续写范文

第一篇 Cherie 老师

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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.  

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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was! 

第二篇：Katie 老师

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out excitedly, “Dad! Look!” Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep.   (86 words)   

We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm. (114 words)    

第三篇： Oz老师

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  Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so quick that my horse was scared. The horse started to neigh, shiver and gradually lose control. It suddenly ran to another direction away from the initial track Uncle Paul has warned us to keep. My dad held the rope tightly in order to calm the horse down. However, it didn’t work. Our cowboy hats were even lost while the horse was running wild and finally we fell down from the horse and the horse just ran away leaving me and my dad lying on the ground.

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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. My legs were hurt so that my dad had to carry me on the back. “We get lost, right?” I asked my dad, “Yes. But don’t worry, we’ll find the way back home.” We slowly walked towards the luminous direction.“I guess we’re late for supper.” Sensing my fear and concerns, my dad tried to make me laugh. At that time, we saw the river in front of us. “Dad, this is the river next to our farm house. We can follow the river to find our way home.” “Exactly! How clever you are!” Then we followed the river bank and finally our house came into our sight. Reflecting on this memory, I regarded this experience as my special adventure with my dad.

第四篇：Niehai 老师

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It got such a fright that it rushed at a high speed. I, frightened too, grabbed the rein tightly. Minutes later, the horse was off the track and I found that there was no sign of my dad. In the middle of nowhere, I felt a wave of fear wrap around me .Worse still, the rain came pouring down and I was wet through. After seemingly long hours, there came a loud cry of my dad. As a quick response , I shouted in a loud voice."Dad, I’m here!" Tracing my voice, Dad finally found me and we got reunited.

We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The moon burst through the clouds and cast its silver light all over the wet land. We wandered slowly on our horses,feeling at a loss what to do.Suddenly,the sound of a floating river caught my attention."Dad, maybe we can find thefarm house down the river." Dad nodded with approval. With great care,we rode our horses along the river. Shortly afterwards, the uncle paul’s farm,sure enough ,came into our sight. Finally,we got to the farm, safe and sound. What a trip like never before!

第五篇： Tanya 老师 

     Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off the track.  I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless sea of trees, I knew we had gotten hopelessly lost. I called; the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees.  The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a horse or a human voice.

     We had no idea where we were and it got dark. At last I heard the welcome sound of rushing water -- the river!  Gratefully we went to the bank and drank our fill. We followed it in the direction that the sun had set, and eventually heard the familiar frogs, and saw the comforting sight of the old farm house, my dad shining a huge lamp from the porch, guiding our way home.

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