作文范文之漫画作文的图片

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漫画作文的图片

【篇一:四级漫画作文】

漫画式作文写作攻略

201212月起,多题多卷中出现的三道写作题均为漫画作文及图表作文,令很多考生猝不及防,顿时乱了阵脚。本文拟从审题、布局和主体段的论证方法三个角度提出四级漫画作文的写作攻略,以帮助考生应对这种比较特殊的写作题型。

第一、读图审题

四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在写作题中,directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理20136月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。

题目一

directions: for this part, you’re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with a brief description ofthe picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature. you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

审题:本题的漫画反映的是一个社会现象。在漫画中,老师把一本厚厚的书交给学生,并对他说:“just think of it as if you’re reading a longtext-message.”结合题目中的写作指令(express your views on theimportance of reading literature),考生可以得出这幅漫画所反映的社会现象:随着新的电子媒体的出现,文学阅读日渐式微。需要提醒考生的是,漫画中的text-message象征着当代层出不穷的新媒体,这里并不需要对其做过于狭隘的理解。

sample 1 the importance of reading literature

as is shown in the picture, when the teacher assigns her student to read a literature book, she tells him to think of it as a long text-message. it reminds me of the importance of reading literature while most people are spending much more time reading text-messages than literary works.

as it is, reading literature is important in that it can not only broaden our horizon but also eich our mind. to be specific, reading classic works is a real eye-opener, from which we can acquire knowledge of different historical events and cultural traditions. moreover, the moral outlooks and views of life revealed in great works offer great nourishment and contribute to our growth and wisdom. take myself as an example, whenever i’m confronted with obstacles,i will reflect on the books i’ve read, imagining what the heroes would do if they were in my situation. then normally i will get the power and overcome the difficulties.

all in all, reading literature regularly as one does text-messages is critical to a more colorful and wiser life.

sample 2 the importance of reading literature

literature is acknowledged as the most precious product of human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers. so they always ask their students to read as many literary works as possible. just as the drawing shown above, a teacher gives a literary work to her student, saying: “just think of it as if you’re reading a long text-message.”

it is of great significance for us to appreciate literature due to the following reasons. firstly, a good literature can get you to know a life experience through the eyes of someone other than yourself. the more experience you gain, the more knowledgeable you are. secondly, a good literature allows you to learn about history in a personalized way. the stories told in the works can act as mirrors and help you adjust your own behaviors. lastly, a good literature is an effective way for relaxation. the beautiful and moving scenes shown in the literature are helpful for one’s mental health.

in short, literature is indispensable in our life. we, students, should catch our time to read more literature.

题目二

directions: for this part, you’

reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof doing small things before undertaking something big. you should write atleast 120 words but no more than 180 words.

审题:本题的漫画中有一对父子。儿子说:“dad, i’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste.”爸爸说:“if you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”这幅漫画传达的是一个人生道理:想做大事,要先从小事做起。一屋不扫,何以扫天下?如果考生没有从漫画中看出这层意思,也可以结合写作指令(express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big)看出这一点。

题目三

directions: for this part, you’reallowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with abrief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof learning basic skills. you should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.

审题:在本题的漫画中,一位老师正在教一群小学生乘法表,孩子们却面露疑色,其中一个学生向老师表达了大家心中的疑虑no offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated?结合写作指令(express your views on the importance of learning basic skills),考生不难看出这幅漫画意在强调学习基本技能的重要性。

第二、谋篇布局

在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。

第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。若漫画反映的是现象或问题,分析原因/后果;若漫画反映的是哲理,证明这一哲理的正确性或重要性。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。

第三段:重申主题,总结全文。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。

第三、论证方法

漫画作文的第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。

1.条分缕析

在写作第二段时,考生可以从23个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。

there wasa time when children could relish(欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换)literature. but can enjoy the sounds and action on a tv or computer screen. so why bother reading? some ask. the reasonis obvious: it eiches our imagination. when we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of robinhood or starting an adventure with tom sawyer. in addition, literature is the mirror of society. whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. we know thesociety better through literature.

2.举例论证

everything is smallbefore it is big. a good example is kfc. in 1930 colonel harland sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in corbin, a city in kentucky. he fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. from the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.

3.类比论证

如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。

simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. if shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered, learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. a growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life.

a 2012 study surveyed 300 ceos offortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.

总而言之,考生在写四级漫画作文时要做到以下几点:第一,仔细观察漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,树立文章的论点;第二,安排好文章的结构,以三段布局为宜;第三,掌握常用的主体段展开技巧,进行充分论证。如果能做到这些,那么四级漫画作文就没有那么可怕了。

用于描写漫画、图表的常用句型

1.as the graph depicts , ?

2.from the cartoon /picture , we can see that ?

3.according to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,

4.the table shows / indicates / reveals that ?

5.it can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that ?

【篇二:2015漫画作文模板1

漫画作文模板【英语一专用】消极型( 如环境破坏,贪污腐败,浪费粮食,道德丧失等)

第一段

i was extraordinary astonished by what is shown in the provided illustration which is very shocked/characteristic and

educational/instructive. in the above picture/drawing/cartoon,图片内容(如有两幅图,接着写 the other picture informs us that…, as is symbolically revealed in the picture下降,社会风气差等). what a representative and thought-provoking scene it is! although universal/general/widespread and intelligible at first glimpse, the picture does embody profound implication.

第二段(原因段)

why does this phenomenon appear? the reason is not far to seek. there are numerous reasons and i would explore only a few of the most important ones here. for one thing, reason for the circumstance, also responsible for the problem .times of safety.

第三段措施段,总结段

personally ,in order to deal with the idea of 文章主题the following steps should be taken. the effective solution to this problem depends on the efforts made by both the government and the ordinary people. previously, “practice economy, combat waste” advanced by xi jin ping should be abided by all the persons and the government ought to make a proper policy concerning the problem .simultaneously, the ordinary people should

第四段(可与第三段合并)

in a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the

problem of

everlasting world. let’s make concerted efforts to

翻译如下:

所示图片令我非常吃惊,图片内容很典型/令人震惊并且很有教育意义/有教育性。在如上所示的图片/绘画/卡通中__________。图片中象征地揭示了________。多么典型又令人深思的场景啊!/尽管第一眼看起来很简单/普遍而且易于理解,但图片包含深刻的含义。 这种现象是如何产生的?原因不难发现且有很多。我在这儿阐述期中最重要的几点。首先,随着小康社会的建成,人民变得富裕,有很多钱可以用来享受生活,但他们丢失了很多的优良传统习惯,例如勤俭节约。/随着紧急全球化的发展,中国走向世界并参与竞争,与此同时,关注的事件也从国内转到国外,所以一些问题和缺陷被忽视了。当然,____并不是造成这种现象的唯一原因,如环境影响/学校教育对这一问题也负有责任。如在升学压力的影响下,学校和社会忽视了素质教育。从而导致浪费、贪污现象的发生。/目前社会风气受到很多因素的影响,反过来,社会风气又影响人类尤其是年轻人/官员/没文化的人们。他们中的许多人缺乏辨别力,盲目跟随潮流而失去了自我。

我认为,如果要处理___问题,应该采取以下步骤。依靠政府和百姓的共同参与是解决这个问题的有效办法。首先,每个人应该遵守习近平提出的厉行节俭,反对浪费,并且政府应制定解决这个问题的合理政策。同时公民应当写提升到一定高度的主旨。

简而言之,全社会应当共同关注____问题。只有这样,我们才可以居住在一个舒适持久的世界中。让我们一起努力,保护家园/社会和自己吧。

【篇三:漫画作文】

漫画与习作

一、教学目标:

1、养成仔细观察图画的习惯,注意将内容写清楚。

2、能根据图画进行具体的细节描写,做到基本书写规范、整洁。

3、乐于、主动地表达自己作品,培养漫画的二次创作意识。

二、教学重难点

重点:仔细观察图画,从图画中得到信息,能根据图画进行具体的细节描写。 难点:培养漫画的二次创作意识,与人交流。

三、教学过程

(一)谈话导入

1、师:喜欢漫画书吗?说说你们的理由。

生交流,预设:漫画的图画非常有趣。

漫画中的文字很搞笑。

(二)说漫画

过渡:看来,你们个个都是漫画迷。老师带来几幅漫画,与你们一同欣赏好吗?

1、出示,去掉旁白的漫画图

1)(等几秒钟)让学生自己发现。旁白没有了。

2)如果还没有发现,师问:你们发现什么问题了?

(漫画中只有图画,没有文字。

2、师:咦,都怪老师太粗心了,忘了吧文字打进去了。没有文字,你能看懂这几幅图吗?你猜图上该写些什么?

1)师:不着急着回答,先仔细观察一下,等一会儿再叫你们。

2)请生交流。问:你看懂了哪一副图,讲得什么内容?

(三)写漫画

过渡:讲得真好,同学们赶快拿起你手中的笔,选择一幅或者几幅漫画,将静止的画面写活,比一比,看看谁写得最具体。

1、生开始写

2、按顺序选择几幅佳作展示,让学生充满成就感。

师:按漫画顺序请四位同学上台展示一下自己的作品,看看能不能成为漫画家?

3、出示漫画原文比较

师:同学们,将你们的文章与漫画原文比较一下,你现在想说什么?

(生1:原来的文字太简单了,生2:我们的文字中有人物的细节描写,把画面写活了。生3:原来漫画也可以写成文章。)

(四)总结

师:同学们,漫画的画面固然精美诱人,直接带给我们视觉的享受,但文字更像一壶陈年老酒,能够品出浓浓的醇香。所以,我们在看漫画时可以边看边动笔,用你手中的笔,将画面内容变活,变得更加丰富多彩。记住:每一幅漫画都是一篇好文章。

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