英语作文范文-范文-honesty

英语作文范文

范文:honesty

　　「要求」

　　请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇题为“诚实”的文章。

　　It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.

　　One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience.

　　Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation.

　　「范文」

　　honesty

　　We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.

　　It is usually better to be honest than dishonest. People tend to believe an honest man， no matter what he does and what he says. On the contrary， dishonest people are not trustworthy. For this reason， honest people are always more successful than the dishonest. So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed.

　　One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. If a person tells lies， his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. He will always live in fright.

　　Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. All people consider what you’ve said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. Therefore， you can say what you like and do what you like without fear. You will feel very happy. Likewise， just because of your honesty， people respect you and love you. Gradually， you will gain a good reputation. To be honest will ensure you a happy life.

　　「评语」

　　该文内容切题，详略安排得当，重点放在诚实的益处，即第二段和第四段上。这两段的段末均有一句总结句与段首的主题句相呼应，使段落结构完整，同时强化了主题。文章语言略显单调，但比较顺畅，表达也较清楚。

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