袇膈芃薁袃膇蒆袆膂膆薈虿 F单元 书面表达
F单元 书面表达 1
F1书面表达记叙文 1
F2 书面表达议论文 4
F3 书面表达说明文 11
F4 书面表达应用文 12
F5书面表达夹叙夹议文 20
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试（201407）】F1第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、
1、 家庭
2、 工作
3、 业余生活
注意：1、字数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
【范文】
one Possible Version
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I
【试题分析】
考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语 be different 不同；get along well with 与。。相处融洽；in my free time在我的业余时间；take exercise锻炼；I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.在这个句子出现what引导的宾语从句；I will do a good job in whatever I do这个句子中whatever引导名词性从句。In a work, my life will be much richer and more colorful.,在这个句子运用比较级，表示越来越。。
【英语卷（解析）·2016届云南省玉溪一中高一下学期期末考试（201407）】F1 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文如下。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。
I’ve learned that you reach Beijing last month for Chinese learning. How are you getting along your Chinese studies?
I’m pleasing to tell you that I’ll go to Beijing to take part in an English Speech Contest this summer vacation. However, I have a trouble preparing it. I don’t know how to gather useful information of your speech. And I am unfamiliar with the language style of the speech article, that is total different from the common article. Could you give me some advices on the above problems?
Looking forward to hear from you!
解析：
第一行：reach改为reached：last month 是一般过去时时态的时间状语。
Along后加with：get along with 是固定句型。
第三行：pleasing改为pleased：表示“感到……”用V.ed；表示“令人……”用V.ing.
第四行：去掉trouble前面的a；trouble是不可数名词，前面不可以放不定冠词；
Preparing后加for：prepare for，为……做准备。
第五行：your改为my；根据上下文逻辑关系，应当是我的演讲；
that改为which：非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。
第六行：total改为totally：修饰形容词用副词；
Advices 改为advice：advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
最后一行：hear改为hearing：look forward to 中to 是介词，后面用动名词做宾语。
【英语卷（解析）·2016届广东省湛江第一中学高一下学期期末考试（201407）】F1 VI. 写作
第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
厦门方特梦幻王国(Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom)是我国新建的一座大型主题公园。假设你叫张娟，请根据以下内容给外国朋友凯特写一封邮件，介绍这一主题公园，并邀请她暑假一起到那里游玩。
[ 写作内容 ]
[ 参考词汇 ]
公顷 hectare 科幻 science fiction 互动interaction 高科技 high-tech
,
I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you
…….
Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Juan
【答案】
Dear Kate,
I’m very glad to have a chance to introduce a wonderful theme park to you.
Xiamen Fangte Magic Kingdom, which lies in Xiamen, a beautiful city by the sea, is a newly-built theme park. The kingdom, opened on April 28, 2013, covers an area of nearly 240 hectares. The theme park is famous for science fiction and interaction experience. What's more, by combining high-tech with traditional Chinese culture, the kingdom creates a magic world full of fantasied and excitement. You can take part in a variety of entertainments and enjoy performances there.
Why not come to visit it with me this summer holiday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Zhang Juan
【思路点拨】
本文是一封email，主要内容已经给出，学生很容易把握要点。注意写作要求是用5个句子表达出主要内容，考察学生的概括能力。
【解析】
该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用定语从句加同位语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了what's more等连接词。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。
【英语卷(解析)·2015届安徽省六校教育研究会高三第一次联考试卷（201408）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
现在的孩子由于被父母管教,呵护太多,渐渐失去一些自我管理和生活能力。当独自一个人时就会难以自律,甚至会加剧一些不良习惯。假如你一个人在家时,你觉得你该怎样做才能有利于自己的成长？请以Alone at home为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1．内容需涵盖2-3个具体做法。
2．字数：120左右。
【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文
【范文】
Alone at home
At present, most parents are worried a lot about their children, so they care about them too much. Under the parents’ control, the children have lost interest in many things. When we are at home, we often lose control of ourselves, so our parents will feel more worried and promise never to let us alone at home. To comfort our parents, what should we do while alone at home?
In fact, there is a lot interesting to do except surfing on the Internet, playing games and so on. In my opinion, we should read books and do our homework first. Then, we may listen to some music and read some books and newspapers. Also, we can take some exercise to keep fit.
I believe that if we do so, our parents will give us more free time and never be worried about our being alone at home.
【思路点拨】 本文主要从父母对孩子管制太多以致于不敢让孩子单独呆在家里入手，引出孩子在家应该做些什么以让父母放心。第二段作者提出了自己的观点，单独一人在家应该做些什么，多做些有益身心成长的事情，这样父母就不会再为孩子担心了。
文中使用了under the control of，keep fit等高级短语；也使用了our being alone at home动名词短语作宾语；还使用了believe的宾语从句，从句中又加入了if条件句；还使用四次了不定式等等，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。
【英语卷(解析）·2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考（201408）】第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文
【范文】
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.
Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.
I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the saying goes,"no pains, no gains." Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good healthand a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
人们常说“字如其人”。据一项调查显示，有85．8％的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图内容用英语写一篇短文，说明该现象并发表看法。
注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节。
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.________________________________
【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文
【范文】
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85. 8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting. 51. 5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32. 3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice . 10. 9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, “writing style shows the man ”. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
【思路点拨】该文是一议论文，主要讨论学生应该不应该改善写字状况，并清晰表述人们的观点，故应用一般现在时和第三人称。
文中使用了宾语从句，there be句型，so that引导的结果状语从句，as引导的非限制性定语从句等；还使用的高级词汇survey，beneficial，emphasis等；还使用了according to，yet，therefore等连接词，让文章一气呵成，等等这一切亮点都在告诉我们作者的英语功底深厚。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届江西省师大附中等五校高三第一次联考（201408） (1)】第三节：书面表达（满分25分）
在英语课堂上，你的周围有一些学习效率高的同学，他们表现突出，这与他们良好的习惯是分不开的。请就此话题用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，举一两个例子说明他们的良好习惯，并谈谈你的看法。
【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文
【范文】
Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.
When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.
From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.
【思路点拨】 本文是议论文，要求学生就好的学习习惯可提高学习效率进行讨论并举例说明，故应用一般现在时和第三人称。
文章使用了现在完成时、一般现在时兼有一般过去时，且使用得当，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了when与过去分词连用做状语；高级词汇efficient，enable，suffer from，distinguish等；还使用了Besides，moreover等关联词以及with which引导的非限制性定语从句等让文章一气呵成，堪称佳作。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届湖南省师大附中高三第一次月考（201409）】Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
不吃饭则饥，不读书则愚。十余年书海泛舟，哪一本是你的最爱呢？请以My Favorite Book 为题，介绍这本书的大致内容并说明它给你的启示。
注意：1.书名可以用汉语拼音。
2．全文不少于120词。
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One possible version：
【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文
【范文】
My Favorite Book
Reading books not only broadens our horizon, but also enriches our minds. Some books are to be overlooked, others are to be tasted, and some few to be chewed, digested all life long. So far, I have read numerous books, such as magazines, novels, story books and so on. Yet one of the books that I like best is My Life Story.
It was created in 1902 by an American writer—Helen Keller, a blind, deaf and dumb person. In the book, she wrote that she had not been able to see, hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months, which made her desperately sad. When she was seven years old, she knew Miss Sullivan, her private tutor. Helen was getting happier every day. Then, Miss Sullivan helped her learn how to write English words. At first, Miss Sullivan wrote some words on Helen's hands with her own fingers again and again. Helen tried as much as possible to remember words and her efforts paid off. After that, she wrote and published many famous works, among which is My Life Story. My Life Story described her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist across the world.
It shows us a universal truth: Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it! This is why I like it best.
【思路点拨】
本文是说明文，主要介绍学习自己最喜欢的一本书，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。
【解析】
该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用动名词短语做主语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了some……others等连接结构。文中使用了被动语态、非限制性定语从句、when引导的时间状语从句、if引导的条件状语从句等等。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】笫二节 书面表达（满分25分）
据报道，某女青年持假文凭就职某公司。她能力较强，工作出色，但后假文凭被查出，公司以她缺乏诚信为由解雇了她。你认为公司这种做法如何？我们应该看重诚信还是能力? 请谈谈你的看法。
注意：词数100左右 参考词汇：假文凭 fake diploma 诚信 honesty
【答案】【知识点】F2 书面表达议论文
【范文】
【思路点拨】范文作者针对“有能力女青年因论文造假被开除而引发的能力与诚信的讨论”一事发表自己的观点。开篇使用了短语in favor of (支持) 点明自己的观点。紧接着又用一句话指出了诚信比能力重要。然后又通过举例子，列事实来证明自己的观点。最后一段作者再次点明自己的观点。本文论述结构严谨，条理清晰，词汇丰富，句式多变，长短句交替使用。整篇作文使用较多语法，如状语从句、非谓语动词、定语从句，给文章增色不少。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高考摸底测试（201408）】F2 第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分）
最近，不少城市发出了“减少白色污染”的倡议，得到广大市民的支持。请以“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”为话题在博客上发表简单评论。
注意：词数120左右。参考词汇：可分解的degradable 窒息choke
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【答案】
Plastic bags are very popular in our daily life. People go shopping with plastic bags in free markets, super markets, or departments.
But plastic bags are one of the major pollutants. We can see littered plastic bags thrown everywhere, especially along the railways or highways, in the parks or in the rivers. Because plastics is not degradable, once it is thrown in the environment, it will exist for a long time and pollute soil and water. They are even dangerous to wildlife as thousands of sea animals are killed each year when they eat or are choked by plastic bags. What’s more, “white pollution” creates a bad image for China.
So government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets. Meanwhile, people should be encouraged to replace them with paper bags or cloth bags.
【思路点拨】
本文是一简单评论，主要内容已经给出，学生很容易把握要点。本文应使用一般现在时，并使用第三人称。
【解析】
该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确，特别是使用了once和when以及as引导的状语从句，使用主动语态和被动语态等以及especially，littered，image等高级词汇的应用恰如其分；自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，如：but，meanwhile，what’s more等的使用，使全文流畅结构紧凑。
【英语卷（解析）·2016届云南省玉溪一中高一下学期期末考试（201407）】F3书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是育才中学的学生刘超，你的美国朋友Steven发邮件告诉你，今年暑假他将来北京。请你给他写一封回信，要点包括： 1.问候； 2.推荐（景点、美食等）；3.表达期待。
注意：1、词数：100左右 ；
2、开头已为你写好；
3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 。
Dear Steven，
How are things going?
Yours,
Liu Chao
One possible version:
Dear Steven,
How are things going?
I’m so glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many questions in your letter, and now let me answer them.
To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is a charming city with a long history. You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope you’ll enjoy it. Besides, there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. These scenic spots attract millions of tourists each year. I guarantee you will have a wonderful time here in Beijing.
I really miss you so much. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Liu Chao
【英语卷(解析)·2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考（201408）】第二节：书面表达 （满分30分）
请根据下列提示以 “Helping Others Can Help you” 为题写一篇参加志愿者活动给我们带来的益处的英语短文。
1. 获得生活经验和技能；
2. 结交有趣的朋友；
3. 回报社会，消除理解障碍；
4. 你自己的看法。
注意：120词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。
Helping Others Can Help you
Volunteering has a meaningful, positive effect on your community. But did you know that it can have many benefits for you, too?
【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文
【范文】
Helping Others Can Help you
Volunteering has a meaningful, positive effect on your community. But did you know that it can have many benefits for you, too?
To begin with, volunteering enables you to gain some valuable life experience as well as work skills, which I think lays a solid foundation for your future study or career. In the meantime, by volunteering, you can make friends with people from all walks of life, from whom you can obtain useful knowledge that can’t be learnt at school. In addition, volunteering provides you with a good opportunity to give back to society and break down barriers of understanding, thus a harmonious society can be created.
As far as I’m concerned, volunteering is a good way for us to build self-esteem and self-confidence, too. Also, when offering others help, we ourselves will have a sense of satisfaction. Therefore, volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves.
【思路点拨】范文中运用到一些常见的短语To begin with首先；as well as也，和；make friends with与。。交朋友；In addition此外；break down瓦解；As far as I’m concerned就我而言；a sense of satisfaction.满意；To begin with, volunteering enables you to gain some valuable life experience as well as work skills, which I think lays a solid foundation for your future study or career这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句；In the meantime, by volunteering, you can make friends with people from all walks of life, from whom you can obtain useful knowledge that can’t be learnt at school.这个句子中from which引导非限制性定语从句，that引导knowledge的定语从句；Therefore, volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves.这个句子用到be of 名词 等于 be +形容词；not only but also 连接两个宾语；
【英语卷（解析）·2015届宁夏银川一中高三上学期第一次月考（201408）】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，为了弘扬雷锋精神，你校决定开展多项志愿服务活动。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英语报上，号召同学们加入本校的志愿者俱乐部。内容包括：
1.陈述当志愿者的好处；
2.向同学们发出几点倡议。
注意：
1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. ______________________________
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. Students’ Union
【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文
【范文】
Dear fellow students,
Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. It can benefit us in several ways. First of all, volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. Secondly, by volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use.
I hope more and more students will join the voluntary club of our school. Let’s express concern for the old and disabled people around us and offer a helping hand. Let’s clean the parks near our home. Let’s go to nursing homes to bring love to those in need.
Remember, we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand, so let’s take action.
Students’ Union
【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的倡议书写作，试题只给出写作要点2条，为半开放开放性写作。范文采用三段。前两段各一个要点，最后一段收尾。第一段用总—分的方式陈述了写作要点一：当志愿者的好处。用了First of all，Secondly一条一条列举，条理清晰。第二段连用了三个let’s的祈使句呼吁同学们加入志愿者行列，语言地道流畅。最后一段用一个复合句收尾，与开头呼应。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届江西省南昌二中高三上学期第一次考试（201408）】第三节 书面表达(满分25分，注意含卷面5分)
假设你是二中高三（8）中学的学生王军，班里从外地转来一名同学李华，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：
☆帮他分析原因 ☆给他提出建议 ☆陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意：词数130左右
Dear Li Hua,
I’m very glad to become your classmate. I know you are worried about your study and don’t know how to adapt yourself to the new environment. _________________________________
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Best regards,
Yours,
Wang Jun
【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文
【范文】
【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作要点，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。范文的结尾用了总结性的短语all in all。总体来说范文要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点，行文连贯。
好词好句
puzzled adj. 困惑的，迷茫的 be/become puzzled
adapt oneself to 使自己适应
show around 四处参观；到处转转
If you have any problem, please tell me and I will give you my advice not only on study but also on your life here.
【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（201409）WORD版】第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是某校高三学生李华，下面的通知引起了你的注意。请根据通知内容和要求向学校写一封申请信。
VOLUNTEERS WANTED
The 2016 International Horticultural Exposition（世界园艺博览会）will be held in Tangshan．Volunteers are wanted to offer service to visitors from all over the world．
REQUIREMENTS:
1．Fluency in English
2．Excellence in personality
3．Good knowledge of Tangshan
If interested, please send your application in English to the Office of the Principal before Friday．
注意：
1．词数100左右：
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（请在答题卡上作答）
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm glad that the 2016 International Horticultural Exposition will be held in Tangshan．
Looking forward to your reply．
Li Hua
【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad that the 2016 International Horticultural Exposition will be held in Tangshan. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. In my opinion, I meet all the requirements.
To begin with, I have a good command of English and can speak English fluently. So there is no doubt that I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Besides, I’m outgoing, warm-hearted, and quick in mind, which I think is a basic quality for a volunteer. Above all, as a native of Tangshan, I know this city and its culture very well. So I’m sure that the visitors will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【英语卷(解析)·2015届广西桂林中学高三8月月考（201408）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书
3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
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Li Hua
【答案】【知识点】F4 书面表达应用文
【范文】
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【英语卷（解析）·2014届西藏自治区高三最后一次模拟统一考试（201405）】F4第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：
（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；
（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；
（3）时间：星期六晚六点；
（4）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；
（5）路线：在Jane所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
注意：（1）须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
（2）词数：100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party
Dear Jane,
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It's pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way，you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本文是一封email，主要内容已经给出，学生很容易把握要点。本文可适当发挥，增添一些细节，增加文章内容。
【解析】
该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确，特别是使用了定语从句等高级结构；appreciate，fulfillment，ahead等高级词汇的应用恰如其分；通篇行文十分流畅，可以看出作者的语言功底；大量地使用副词和介词短语使文章很充实。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省唐山一中高二下学期期末考试（201407）】F4 第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，中国青年志愿者网（China Youth Volunteers/CYV）计划在6月30日前向全国各大院校及社会各界招募1000名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自我推荐信。要点如下：
1. 个人情况：年龄：18； 性别：男； 出身医学世家。
2. 个人优势：掌握基本急救知识，有救援经验，身体素质好。
3. 目的：帮助有需要的人；回报社会。
注意：可以适当增加细节使文章连贯。词数：100左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Li Hua, a boy at the age of 18. I feel honored to write to you and promote myself as a volunteer of CYV to get across the common sense of first aid.
Firstly, I have a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors. What’s more, it is the abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the wounded that guarantees me to be of help, when it comes to tough situations. Last but not the least, I am in good condition, due to the constant exercises and body building.
On the whole, I am qualified to be a volunteer. I hope to help out people in need and reward our society as soon as possible. Looking forwards to your earliest reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【试题分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】
文中出现一些常见的短语feel honored to 对，，感到荣幸；have a good knowledge of有。。方面的知识；What’s more,而且；when it comes to当提到。。；Last but not the least最后但同样重要的。What’s more, it is the abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the wounded that guarantees me to be of help, when it comes to tough situations.在这个句子中saving与attending是并列，故都用动名词形式；I hope to help out people in need and reward our society as soon as possible.这个句子中help 与reward 并列。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届湖北省部分重点中学高三上学期起点考试（201408）】F5 第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分）
请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened/reduced while happiness will be doubled.
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【范文】
We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its important too much. By sharing, we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.
When it comes to this topic , memories flood into my mind. There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam, my world turned grey and I lost interest in everything until my best friend came up to comfort me. Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared my trouble with him ,…which relived me of troubles soon. Littlie by little I regained my confidence. The following months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made great progress in another important exams.
As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence. Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also mentally/psychologically. 肁芈蚄袈羇芇莃蚀袃芇蒆袆
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