剑桥雅思9真题及解析Test4写作

写作名师点题：

折线围主要考查以下几点:1.对析线趋势的总结描迷; 2.对复杂时间点的处理; 3.针对某些特殊点的描述。

 

雅思写作高分范文：

 

The line graph indicates the general consumption ofAmerican energy from 1980 to 2030. Uses of petrol and oil and coal see a drastic increase of about 15 quadrillion unites during the span of 50 years, while the other four energies rise slightly with the unites of no more than 5 quadrillion.

 

To be specific, in 1980, the highest proportion of consumption was occupied by petrol and oil

staying at 35 quadrillion units, and it experienced some fluctuations during the first 15 years, then it had been keeping increasing since the year 1995. It is predictable that it will reach nearly 50 quadrillion units by the year of 2030.

 

Furthermore, uses of coal and natural gas remain the middle level on the whole, which stood at almost 15 and exactly 20 quadrillion units respectively in 1980. Separately, consumption of approximately had been rising smoothly and is expected to arrive at 30 quadrillion units in 2030, but the latter remains at, by and large, the same level (20 quadrillion units) with some instabilities.

 

Eventually, uses of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were the lowest, with the same units of being about 4 quadrillion collectively. It is noticeable that none of them changes tremendously during this half century.

 

作文结构分析：

本篇范文由四段组成;第一段主要介绍该图表展示的是什么方面的信息以及几组折线的总体变化趋势;第二段对水平位置最高的折线进行描述;第三段对中间位置的一组折线进行描迷;最后一段对水平位置最低的折线进行描述。

 

亮点词汇：

亮点语句：

1. Uses of petrol, oil and coal see a drastic increase of about 15 quadrillion unites during the span of 50 years, while the other four energies rise slightly with the unites of no more than 5 quadrillion.

汽油、石油和煤的消耗量在这50年间有大幅增长，增长量约为1.5兆个单位(计量单位)，而其他四类能源(天然气、核能、太阳能/风能、水能〕的增长幅度较小，涨幅不超过0.5兆个单位。

1. Separately, consumption of Coal had been rising smoothly and is expected to arrive at 30 quadrillion units in 2030, but the latter remains at, by and large, the same level (20 quadrillion units) with some instabilities.

分开来讲，煤的使用稳步上升.有望在2030年直接增至3兆个单位，面后者(天然气)的使用量则大体上保持在2兆个单位，其中伴有小幅波动。

写作名师点题：

此类题目是近几年多次出现的考题，属于argumentative的立论型题。具体而言。题目的第一个要求To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?属于传统的片表达观点或现象发表看法并进行论证的形式。第二个要求则要对not important和will be easier之间的关系进行论证。

 

雅思写作高分范文：

 

It is undeniable that so many kinds of languages and dialects exit in the multi-cultural world, which causes some complex and embarrassed situations while communicating with people holding different languages. Some predict that if some lesser-known languages vanish, we may enjoy a much easier lingual atmosphere. Personally I think it is entirely wrong.

 

Admittedly, to eliminate some languages that have been used in some certain parts of the world will make people's communication easier. Namely, English and other international languages will bridge over the lingual barriers to some extent. However, if a language disappears, the

culture behind it will not exist then shortly. Besides, the living habits and traditions relying on those language features will also die out with the loss of a language itself.

 

When it comes to the reasons for my disagreement, two aspects should be listed: for one thing, as mentioned above, language is no more than a way of communication. It is more likely to be a better symbol on special occasions, like some famous directors will thank all his helpers in English on stage when he is awarded by Oscar, but he will definitely thank his homeland in his native language at last, which represents a national pride vividly. For another, if it is possible to remove some lesser-known languages, some substitution will be used as English and French recently. However, the problem is the translation is not so perfect to transfer each cultural meaning and indication from a native surrounding to a western lingual way. The missing translation will lead to the loss of cultural diversity subconsciously.

 

In sum, some lesser-known languages should not be widely used for the globalization, but the preservation of those cultural-valued legacies should never stop until the extinction of the human beings.

 

作文结构分析：

此范文根据题目的要求相应地分为四段，第一段介绍题目背景并表明个人立场(positions)；第二段开始做出让步，转而提出自己的反对意见；第三段阐迷自己持反对意见的两方面主要的原因；第四段再次强调自己的主张。

 

亮点词汇：

亮点语句：

1. Besides, the living habits and traditions relying on those language features will also die out with the loss of a language itself.

此外，基于语言本身的生活习惯和传统也将随着语言的灭亡一起消失。

2. Language is no more than a way of communication. It is more likely to be a better symbol on special occasions.

语吉绝不仅仅是一种沟通方式.它更像是一种特殊场合下的象征。

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