大学英语作文参考范文

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【参考范文】

A course that has impressed you most in college

  There are many courses in each college year. But the course which impressed me most in college is Advanced English Audio-Visual & Speaking. The reasons why I like this course are as follows.
  The first reason is that I have learnt a lot from this course. My listening ability, speaking ability as well as translation ability has improved greatly after taking this course. The second reason is that I like the teacher of this course, Mr. Qin, very much. He is a charming gentleman with great patience. His oral English is perfect, sounding like American speakers. He treated us very strict but we still like him extremely.
  Just as the proverb goes, “A strict teacher produces outstanding students.”  Thanks to Mr. Qin’s guidance and teachings in this course, all my classmates have made great progress in English learning.

  【参考译文】
  大学中给你印象最深的一门课
  大学阶段各个年级都有很多课程,但给我印象最深的一门课是高级视听说。之所以喜欢这门课,有很多原因,现将原因列举如下。
  喜欢这门课的第一个原因是我在这门课上学到了很多东西。我的英语听力水平、口语水平和翻译水平都得到了很大提升。喜欢这个课程的第二个原因是我很喜欢教我们这门课的老师——秦老师。他是一个既有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英语口语很棒。乍一听,完全就是美国本土人在讲英语。他对我们要求很严格,但我们依然很喜欢他。
  正如谚语所说:严师出高徒。多亏秦老师在这门课上的悉心指导和教诲,我们班同学的英语水平都得到了空前的提升。

The Most Beneficial Activity in My Campus(文都版)

  It is well known that university is greatly different from high school mainly due to that university will hold a large number of activities, which benefits college students a lot. From my perspective, the most beneficial one is “Long-distance Running for Love” organized by the Students Union when I am a freshman. The money collected by this activity is contributed to Project Hope.
  It is really my honor to participate the long running, because it benefits me greatly not only in body but also in mind. To begin with, the activity reminds me of the great importance of physical health. Before I go to college, I only focus on academic achievements while the physical health misses my attention. But, the long-running tells me in time that a sound mind lies in a sound body. Additionally, during my participation in this activity, I am informed well that there are still many children in rural areas who have to drop out of school because of impoverished families. Thus, for one thing, I fully realize the great importance of helping them fulfill their dreams. For another thing, I cherish the opportunity to study in university more, for when compared with those children in poverty-stricken areas, we should harbor a grateful heart.
  By and large, although I have taken part in many campus activities, I deem the long running for love most beneficial to me. And I am looking forward to that more wonderful and meaningful activities will be held in our campus.

  范文译文:
  众所周知,大学与高中截然不同,主要原因是大学里会举办很多校园活动,而这些大学活动使大学生受益匪浅。我认为最有益的校园活动是大一时,由学生会举办的爱心长跑。这次长跑筹集的善款用于捐助希望工程。
  我很荣幸参加了这次长跑,因为这次活动使我的身心都获得了很大裨益。首先,这次活动提醒我身体健康的重要性。在我上大学前,我只关心自己的学习成绩,而忽视了健康。但是,这次长跑及时提醒我——健康的身体孕育健康的灵魂。此外,通过参加此次长跑,我深刻了解到还有许多偏远山区的小孩因为家庭贫困被迫辍学。因此,一方面我充分意识到帮助这些小孩实现梦想是何其重要;另一方面,我更珍惜自己能上大学的机会。因为,和那些贫困地区的小孩相比,我们应该怀有一颗感恩的心。
  总体而言,虽然我参加过许多校园活动,但是我认为这次爱心长跑最为有益。我也期待有更多精彩而有意义的校园活动举行。

The Most Impressive Classmate in My College

  Without question, Lisa is the person who has influenced my college life most. She is my classmate, who always leaves a deep impression on you by demonstrating her passion for life and the spirit of never yielding, even in the face of extreme challenges. She is the most courageous person I have ever known.
 During my college years, it is Lisa that kept teaching me how to live through setbacks in the life journey. I’ll never forget that when I failed in my English examination and I felt overwhelmed,    Lisa taught me that failure teaches success, everyone had to persevere and face up to innumerable setbacks, as long as I face my problems bravely, I would create my own wonderful life . With her help , I finally gained the confidence and passed the exam.
  Thanks to Lisa, I have learned the importance of courage, which is the indispensable characteristic in my life. She also let me know the importance of confidence. It means a lot to me and still in my head till this day.

  范文译文:

 毫无疑问,Lisa是大学里对我影响最深的一名同学。她是我同桌,她对生活的激情以及面临极端困境时永不服输的精神永远都能给人留下深刻的印象。她是我见过的最勇敢的女生。

  在我的大学生涯中,是Lisa一直教导我如何面对生活中的挫折。我永远都不会忘记,当我没通过英语考试,灰心丧气时,是她教给我,失败是成功之母,每个人都会遇到无数的困难,都应坚持,只要我勇敢面对困难,我肯定能迎来自己美好的生活。在她的帮助下,我最终找回了自信,通过了考试。

  多谢Lisa,让我学到了勇气的重要性,这是我性格中不可或缺的一部分。她同时也教会了我自信的重要性。这一切对我意义非凡,至今难忘。

1.On Open Policy

The open policy means that our country is open to investment, trade and technical and economic cooperation with other countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. The purpose of open policy is to acquire advanced technology, management skills to serve our socialist construction so as to promote the realization of the four modernizations.

We must adhere to the open policy. Because economic relations between states today have become increasingly close, and no country can possibly advance behind close doors. Only in this way, can we gradually close the gap between our country and the developed countries.

Through the implementation of policy, we can learn advanced technology and managerial expertise from abroad; make full use of the foreign capitals to set up great enterprises; absorb useful and healthy ideas and new knowledge of the modern civilization; and broaden our views and raise our level of competence.

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From: http://www.hxen.com/englishwriting/yingyusijizuowen/2014-07-10/354910.html

第一,四级写作再现反押题的倾向。

之前我们可能会去了解了宏观的大话题,比如社会生活、两代关系、文化教育、网络科技、伦理道德等等这样的话题,这次的考试题目跟这些所谓的预测和同学们之前的准备出入还是很大的。近来关于大学生中的一门课、一个同学、一项校园活动,这些我们觉得都过于平常,过于普通,跟大学生的思想深度好象没有什么关系,但是我们确实考到了。
我们想一下20146月份考的是一个朋友来你的家乡、校园旅游的话,你会带他去哪里玩,并且写出理由。好象是一篇记叙文,又是一篇议论文,这种题目我们之前也是无法预测,或者我们根本不屑于准备,是我们看不上的题目。6月份考了,今年12月份又考的是这样的题目——一门课、一个同学、一项活动,所以这是最新的四级写作方面的命题趋势,那就是反押题。我们之前的预测方向和这些有一些出入。

第二,主题比较开放、自由

我们说的现在的四级作文题目,我们在这个点上,我们可以延伸到六级,还有考研英语写作的命题,那就是主题比较开放、自由,非常自由的主题,基本上不存在跑题的问题。有的人说我作文题目没有读懂,有的说我题目读懂了,但是没有写对方向,这样的情况已经基本上不会发生,它可以推广到六级和考研英语写作,其实都有这样的特点。

我们今天在微博上和新东方在线的互动平台上,看到一些奇葩的评论和互动。有的同学说我的考试题目是《A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college一个影响我最多的同学,结果这个同学写完发现写的是一个影响我最多的老师,我们觉得这也不算跑题,应该是审题不够仔细,考场过于紧张,可能是考前缺乏听课的训练和素质提升,也没有进行模考,可能紧张了,但是这样的题目会扣分的,明明让你写一位影响最深的同学,你写了影响最深的老师,这个我们可以根据未完成题目指令的要求这一项来进行扣分。我想这方面的错不知道大家有没有去犯?如果没有的话自然是最好的。所以我们现在的题目普遍来说比较简单。

第三,更加注重考生的语言质量

我们结合6月份和12月份的考试得出第三条的结论是作文更加注重同学的语言质量。因为我们已经不存在说题目读不懂,看不明白,大家都是一样的主题,那就代表着大家都有话好说。所以在这个层面上如果不拼你的审题能力和对话题预测准备能力的话,应该考的是同学的语言质量问题。

这么简单的一个主题,好像你会说的很多,又好象什么也不会说;好象你能写的很多,但是语言普通简单也不行。所以现在我们说现在四级作文第三个趋势是重在语言质量。同学们比拼的是驾驭英语语言本身的能力,对词汇、语法、固定句型套用的熟练程度和精彩程度。

第四,题目记叙、描述与议论并重
之前四级、六级,甚至包括我们说的考研考试当中,我们其实更多的是重在考生的思考问题、发表评论、写议论文的能力。这些题目的论据和表达都比较固定、官方、正式,比如我们说推进经济建设、提高学生的心态素质、推进中国传统文化的弘扬还有网络话题,好象都比较正式,甚至我们说的极端一点,有点假大空的感觉,但是这样的话题涉及的面比较广、话题比较正式,但是考前好准备。同学们只要稍微背一背,什么随着现代生活社会的步伐加快随着人们变得越来越富有随着国家提供的便利措施等等,好象你背一下都有了,但是现在的作文考的是你真正的语言描述和记叙的能力。

作文题目一:
a campus activity that has benefited you most. state the reasons at least 120 No more than180 words

参考范文:(沈阳新东方学校-吴欣慰老师)

Currently, students in mounting numbers pay attention to academic achievement, neglecting campus activities, like speaking contest , song contest and its like. However, from my perspective, we youngsters should take participate in more campus activities.

I hold the notion that campus activities has lots of benefits on various fronts. At the top of the list, social activities, such as song contest could help us make more friends, expanding our acquaintances. In addition, students would widen horizon, increase knowledge during the period taking part in campus activities. Last but not list, just as a saying goes, “ all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”; therefore, students’ choice to join in some school activities would ease our mind and relief our burden, which will be beneficial to the study.

In conclusion, youngsters should take part in colorful and meaningful activities at campus. Hence, I suggest schools can hold some activities to cultivate students ability, physically and psychologically.

I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming.

In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother supporting the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row.

The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friendsbut we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)

【参考译文】


在我的大学生活中,遇到了很多朋友。他们对我的人生产生了重大的影响。然而,我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。

在开学第一天的入学班会上,他没有给全班同学留下任何印象。李明让我们开始认识他,是因为他总是上课迟到,同学们都以为是个懒惰的人。因为我们是室友,平时的交往比较多,后来我才慢慢了解到他的情况:原来他的母亲罹患重病,长期卧床,父亲残忍地离开他们而去,照顾生病的母亲和养家重任只能由他来承担了。令人惊讶的是,在重压之下,他将自己的生活和学业平衡地很好:他不再总是迟到,将妈妈照顾的很好并且连续几年获得奖学金。

李明的经历是坚持和意志的作用的最有说服力的例子之一。他给我留下的印象无法磨灭,他对我造成的影响持续深远。的确,这样的朋友被视为我们生活中的财富和资产。我们有权利选择自己的朋友,然而交友的过程中,我都应该足够理智和谨慎,选择那些能够给我们带来正能量的真正的朋友。

写作题目:你生病住院时,同班同学曾探望过你,假设现在你在给他们写信,以表达感激之情,并告知现状。

参考文章:

                      A Letter For Gratitude

Dear Classmates
  First of allplease allow me to say“Thankyou”to an of youIt is very kind of you to spare your valuable time during the period of final examinations and come to seeme
  Your visit has brought me much confidence and power to overcome the illness During the first several days in hospitalI felt quite lonely,anxious and frightenedI Was almost collapsed by some pessimistic thoughtsBut then you shown upalongwith your smiling faces and warm wordsYour appearance has made me feel that I am the luckiest person in this wonderful worldNow I regard the illness as nothing but a chance to harden myselfThese days my condition has obviously improved thanks to the careful treatment by the doctors and nurses1 will probably get recovered in a couple ofweeksI hope that I Can see you earlier
  Againspecial thanks go to all of you

Sincerely Yours
LiMing

【图表篇】

写作题目:

依照上述图标及如下大纲写一篇以手机为主题的文章,字数不少于120字。

写作大纲:
1. 描述柱形图表示的手机用户数的变化情况
2. 分析原因
3. 评价其现象

参考文章:

                                                     Cell Phones
  As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.
  There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.
  The wide use of cell phones has make them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.

【议论文篇】

写作题目:随着工作压力的负担以及经济来源的压力,现在越来越多的父母成为了孩奴。请解释出现这种现象的原因及可能造成的影响。

参考文章:

Parents’ Being Slaves to Children

  Parents’ being slaves to their children or “child’s slave” is nowadays a hot topic in China. It refers to young parents who have to spend a large part of their income on children. These parents feel great strain under the burden of raising a child and struggle hard to make as much money as possible.

  The cost of raising a child in China is becoming greater and greater. But economic pressure is not the only reason that makes young parents “child’s slave”. Parents’ competing with each other in trying to provide the best possible living conditions for their children should also be blamed.

  If this problem continues, it would affect parents and the development of our country. These parents would suffer from huge economic pressure, which may pose a threat to their marriages or physical and mental health. On the other hand, to avoid being slaves, some couples are unwilling to have children.

四六级考前冲刺:写作必背40个提分句式

1. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies to control population growth while raising the quality of the population.
2. It is (has been) estimated that the world's population could reach 6 billion by the end of the century.
3. It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.
4. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we can overcome. 5. As is known man is the product of labour.
6. It is a common saying that man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.
7. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for peace.
8. It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours each day.
9. It's hard to say whether the plan is practicable.
10. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.
11. It seems certain that they have made a series of experiments.
12. It is said that bats have been using radar for millions of years.
13. To tell the truth , many mistakes we made could have been avoided.
14. As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
15. It must be admitted that you haven't done what you promised to do.
16. In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you saw.
17. It is certain that we have a long way to go.
18. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.
19. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.
20. It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, is made up of atoms.
21. It has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose base must be completed within this year.
22. It is obvious (evident) that the success of the innovation depends on our concerted efforts.
23. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.
24. It is natural that one may have trouble expressing complicated ideas in simple English.
25. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is being carried out.
26. We will be successful as long as we persevere.
27. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth may not apply to things happening here.
28. It is true that we must redouble our efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed countries.
29. I take it for granted that they will support this idea. I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea.
30. In a certain sense, a successful scientist is a person who is never satisfied with what he has achieved.
31. The oceans do not so much divide the world as unite it.
32. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the production.
33. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the production.
34. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't utter a word.
35. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
36. Our goal must be attained. Our goal can unquestionably be attained.
37. Noting can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations.
38. Now in China, more and more families can afford to buy high-grade goods, such as washing machines, TV sets, videocorders.
39. No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it.
40. It can be said that without knowledge of science and technology, it is impossible to build socialist modernizations.

英语四级写作万能结尾句式

四级作文万能结尾句(1)

From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that
Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that
It is high time that something was done about
From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that
Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that …
Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that
It is clear , therefore , that
All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to
It is essential that effective measure be taken to …
From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that
In conclusion ,the most important is
On the whole , it is high time that every one
As a result , we should take some effective steps to …
Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that
Only in this way / in so doing , can be really

四级作文万能结尾句(2)

1)至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为……
As for as I am concerned,I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that省略。

2)总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来…… In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of省略.Only in this way can省略in the future

3)就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因此……
Personally,I believe that省略.Consequently,I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because省略。

4)随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society,省略.So it's urgent and necessary to省略.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society,it will be better and better

5)至于我(对我而言,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能…… For my part,I think it reasonable to省略.Only in this way can we省略。

6)在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形式。然而,就我个人而言,我发现……
It is difficult to say whether省略is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of省略-.However,from a personal point of view find省略。

7)综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above,we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that省略。

8)如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means,we may not control this trend,and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly,so what we should do is..

比起四六级图表作文来,四六级图画作文要更灵活,更富于变化。我们一定要多练习,以达到一看到图画(含图中和图边文字)和提纲就能有效地审题解题,构造出合理的具体段落的目的。

图画作文可分为图片、漫画与照片等多种。图画作文总体上比图表作文的结构变化更多,更为灵活,因此难度也更大。

1.描述图画

图画作文对图画的描述应在第一段进行,且最好在首句即开始。此类作文大部分是一幅图,也会有两幅图出现的情况。如果出现两幅图,则很有可能是突显对比的情况。

图画上可能没有任何文字,也可能在上面出现了一句话,也可以单个人物说话或两个人物对话,也可能在图画外写了总结性的一句话。大家注意,这一句话或两句话一般是非常重要的,应予译出。

一般说来,对图画的描写不必过长,应以简练、准确为标准。

2.图画类作文结构分析

我们想象中的最典型最理想的图画题提纲应该是下面这样:

1. 描述图画

2. 推导绘画者的意图

3. 做出评论

对于这一提纲我们来做具体分析,其中第三点更要细致研究。首先由图画引出一种社会现象或社会问题,可以是好的,也可以是不好的。在推导绘画者的意图时多是展开说此现象或问题的表现,以证明其引人注目。还有一种可能性是说此现象或问题产生的原因,提纲可直接列出,或还用上述提纲。这时可把简单意图推导直接放到第一段描述图画之后,而在第二段中说原因。

第三段做出评论,有可能只是简单评论、深化主题就结束,但这种可能性越来越小了。这一部分很可能说的是办法,不好的事情就是如何解决的办法,好的事情就是如何进一步发展的方法。

通过上述列表,我们可以看出,多年以来,真实的提纲是怎样一步步地向我们想象中的理想模式靠近的。对于提纲里面出现的变化和规律,我们来分析一下。

我们仔细分析,会发现历年考研(微博)真题基本上都呈现"现象或问题--原因解释--解决办法"这样的模式,但变化非常多。因为我们谈论的既可以是一件值得弘扬的好事,也可能是一个令人忧心忡忡的社会问题;针对后者我们极有可能需要提出做法;而对于前者,可能解释一下就结束了,也可能要写出相应的做法。

综上所述,可以看出,比起图表作文来,图画作文要更灵活,更富于变化。我们一定要多练习,以达到一看到图画(含图中和图边文字)和提纲(有时有文章标题)就能有效地审题解题,构造出合理的具体段落的目的。

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