第四讲 │ 漫画作文

这种题型更能考查学生分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，切忌审题偏颇影响得分。高考漫画作文主要有两种类型：1.讽刺型漫画，引发考生对不良社会现象的思考；2.哲理型漫画，通过形象或抽象的图画，讲述道理引发哲理性思考。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后分析图画所反映的问题或讲述的道理，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。

1.读图

仔细观察画面，注意细节，尤其是夸张表现的地方。注意：文字说明部分往往是重要线索(clues)，切记要认真阅读！

2.解意

(1)辨明褒贬，找准角度

(2)联系生活，明晰主旨

3.谋篇(一般分成三部分)

【常用词汇及句式】

(1)描写画面(用现在时)

①The picture is talking about/shows...

②The picture shows a common phenomenon...

③The picture describes an interesting phenomenon...

④In the picture，there is/are...

⑤The picture above is about...

⑥Let’s look at the picture above/first.

(2)分析漫画所反映的问题

①It seems very ridiculous that...However，this kind of story is performed everywhere.

②The picture shows that...It is the exact reflection of...

③The picture indicates that we...

④Nowadays，it is a common phenomenon that...

⑤This is a satirical(讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among...

(3)表达个人观点

①I think/believe that...

②As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/From my point of view...

③...should...

④It is better/advisable to...

⑤I consider it necessary...

【写作模板】

As is shown in the picture above，________(图画的内容).The first thing we notice is that ________(图画的最大特点).This means that ________(进一步说明).The implied meaning of the picture should be considered/taken into account seriously/paid more attention to.First，________(分析、说明原因或结果①).Second/What’s more，________(分析、说明原因或结果②).Last but not least/Finally，________(分析、说明原因或结果③).And the problem has aroused the great concern/care of the whole society/world/all the people around.In my view/As for me，we should take measures to deal with the problem shown in the picture.First，we should ________(措施、建议、办法①).And then we have to ________(措施、建议、办法②).Only in these ways can we solve/settle the problem of ________(图画主要问题).

(2015·福建高考)请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

内容包括：

1.描述画面；

2.概述其含义；

3.谈谈个人感想。

凿壁偷光

注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯。

3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇：凿，钻bore

In the picture，　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

[材料分析]　本题为看图写作，主题是古时候的一则成语“凿壁偷光”。首先，图画描述部分必须简要。然后结合图画讲述成语背后的故事，这部分的难点是要总结出成语的寓意。最后是表述个人观点，主要是成语给我们的启迪。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【参考范文】

In__the__picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldn’t afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

(2018·南通、泰州等六市二模)请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“We Chinese Should Carry Forward Traditional Chinese Culture”为题，用英语写一篇作文。

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1.简要描述两幅图的内容；

2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；

3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。

注意：1.可参照图片适当发挥；

2.作文词数150左右；

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

【参考范文】

We Chinese Should Carry Forward

Traditional Chinese Culture

Today，young Chinese people take completely different attitudes to Chinese and western festivals.In Picture 1，a girl is greeting her mother excitedly at Christmas while Picture 2 shows a girl is at a loss about the Dragon Boat Festival.

The phenomenon reflects declining effects of traditional Chinese festivals among young people.Although traditional Chinese festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival haven’t lost their vital positions，they’re encountering neglect and embarrassment.Western festivals are gaining growing popularity in our society，posing a threat to traditional Chinese festivals.

The Chinese nation has created a rich，colorful culture.But how can we deal with the challenges? We’re supposed to educate young people about Chinese culture.Besides observing festivals，young people should also be encouraged to be involved in other traditional Chinese activities，such as paper cutting，Peking Opera and so on.Only in this way can we carry forward our traditional culture well.

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