高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文(39)

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（39）及参考范文

第二节：写作

请阅读下面一则短信（message）:

中国人在食品里完成了化学教育。从大米里认识了石蜡；从火腿里认识了敌敌畏；从咸鸭蛋、辣椒里认识了苏丹红；从银耳、蜜枣里认识了硫磺。今天三鹿奶粉又让中国人知道了三聚氰胺（melamine）……

食品安全（food safety）已经给中国人的健康敲响了警钟，谈谈你的认识。

词数：100左右。

【参考范文】作文：One possible version:

From the message mentioned above, we can see that food safety has gradually drawn people’s attention.

Why do the immoral phenomena happen so frequently in China? Driven by profits, some illegal businessmen add poisonous stuff like melamine to food regardless of people’s health and safety. What they do has violated laws and regulations. Additionally, some relevant departments fail to supervise them effectively……Actually, only a small number of manufacturers have been fined, giving rise to such terrible events as listed in the above message.

In my opinion, apart from profits, manufacturers should bear some social responsibilities. Meanwhile, government should spare no efforts to regulate the market of food and laws must be passed to limit and regulate the food safety. Solving the problem needs the joint efforts of the whole society. Only in this way can we prevent the tough, disturbing problems from happening again.

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2013高考英语：写作综合训练 --------【1】

假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Jim发来一封e­mail，向你了解我国传统节日端午节的情况，请你根据中文提示和图片利用本单元学过的词汇写一封图文并茂的电子文档发给他。

节日日期：中国农历五月初五

节日由来：爱国诗人屈原——投江自尽——划船找他的尸体——往江中投粽子(以免鱼损伤他的躯体)。

节日活动：家人团聚，观看龙船比赛，吃粽子，纪念先人。

参考词汇：端午节The Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu Festival；农历Lunar calendar；自杀commit suicide；汨罗江Miluo River

【1】---【参考范文】

Dear Jim，

Thanks for your interest in my country’s traditional festivals．And I’m delighted to introduce The Dragon Boat Festival to you．

The Dragon Boat Festival, also known as the Duanwu Festival, is one of the most significant traditional Chinese festivals．It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to Chinese Lunar calendar．

The festival is said to be in honour of Qu Yuan, a great poet as well as one who tried all his best to help his own country but failed and committed suicide by drowning himself in Miluo River． The fol

ks respected and loved him so much that they threw zongzi into the river to prevent fish from eating his body． Later it became a custom for people to eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races on that day．

Now we can have a one­day holiday on this festival when all family members can stay together and enjoy a big meal． As far as I am concerned, it is a chance for people not only to have a day to have fun, but also a day to recall the memories of our ancestors and to give thanks to the ones who have helped us． Although Qu Yuan was gone, his spirit will always live with us．

Yours，

Li Hua

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It’s easy to see how the sawfish got its name．These frightful creatures can grow to be more than 6 meters long．Their bodies are flat and winged，like underwater airplanes．And their noses are shaped like chainsaws．

Sawfish are food hunters of the sea．When a sawfish is hungry，it waves its sharp­toothed snout (口鼻部) through a group of fish．Then，it lifts its nose and uses its mouth to draw the injured victims．

Hardy (适应力强的)population of sawfish thrived in warm waters along coastlines around the world for thousands of years．Over the past 200 years，however，human actions have severely endangered sawfish．Threats include fishing nets that trap the huge animals，often by mistake．

Some people collect sawfish’s snouts as prizes：One snout recently sold for nearly $ 1,600 online．In some Asian cultures，the toothy snouts are used in ceremonies to drive evil and disease away．And sawfish are also delicious．A growing demand in Asia for the fish’s fins for a pricey soup has contributed to the fish’s loves．Compared with other fish，sawfish give birth late in life and at slow rates，which makes it hard for them to recover from overfishing．

New efforts now aim to restore sawfish population．Beginning next month，an international agreement will provide protection for all seven of the world’s sawfish species．Scientists are hoping that it’s not too late to save the sawfish．

Until 1998，“this fish had never been formally studied in the United States，”says Tonya Wiley of the Mote Marine Laboratory in Sarasota，Fla．“We didn’t know such basic things as where they live，what habitat they use，how often they breed，how many young they have—even what age sawfish are when they begin breeding．”

Through historical studies and field research，scientists have become aware of how much the fish’s numbers have decreased．Today，there may be 90 percent fewer sawfish than there used to be．Wiley estimates that only 3,000 to 6,000 sawfish remain in US waters．

Sawfish

【参考范文】

1．Descriptions/Features/Characteristics　2．Shape/Appearance　3．Over 6­meter long

4．its sharp­toothed snout　5．Factors/Reasons for/Causes of　6．People’s fish­catching activities　7．giving birth/breeding late 8．Present/Today’s situation　9．Aim/Goal/Purpose　10．Offering protection

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Baloney is a kind of sausage that many Americans eat often．The word also has another meaning in English．It is used to describe something—usually something someone says—that is false or wrong or foolish．

Baloney sausage comes from the name of the Italian city，Bologna．The city is famous for its sausage，a mixture of smoked，spiced meat from cows and pigs．But，boloney sausage does not taste the same as beef or pork alone．

Some language experts think this different taste is responsible for the birth of the expression baloney．Baloney is an idea or statement that is nothing like the truth．．．in the same way that baloney sausage tastes nothing like the meat that is used to make it．Baloney is a word often used by politicians to describe the ideas of their opponents．The expression has been used for years．Fifty years ago，a former governor of New York State，Alfred Smith，criticized some claims by President Franklin Roosevelt about the successes of the Roosevelt administration．Smith said，“No matter how thin you slice is，it is still baloney．”A similar word has almost the same meaning as baloney．It even sounds almost the same．The word is blarney．It began in Ireland about 1600．The lord of Blarney castle，near Cork，agreed to surrender the castle to British troops．But he kept making excuses for postponing the surrender．And，he made them sound like very good excuses，“This is just more of the same blarney．”The Irish castle now is famous for its Blarney stone．Kissing the stone is thought to give a person special powers of speech．One who has kissed the Blarney stone，so the story goes，can speak words of praise so smoothly and sweetly that you believe them，even when you know they are false．

1．What’s the main idea of the text？(No more than 5 words)

2．According to Americans，what does baloney refer to？(No more than 8 words)

3．What do you know about the lord of Blarney castle，near Cork？(No more than 6 words)

4．Why do people kiss the Blarney stone？(No more than 6 words)

【参考答案】

1．The other meaning of baloney．

2．It is something false or wrong or foolish．

3．He was a clever man．

4．To get special powers of speech．

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写作话题议论篇

诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以How to guarantee honesty为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。

注意：

1．词数：120左右；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

How to guarantee honesty

As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, …

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Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

【参考范文】------One possible version:

As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others’ homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.

Personally, I think honesty education is necessary. For instance, courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.Then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time.

Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

本文是一篇开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“How to guarantee honesty”,话题非常切合学生实际生活，让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间，有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、三人称为主；时态为一般现在时；本文可用三段成文形式成文。内容要点： 1. 学生中存在的作弊现象；2. 解决这一现象的方法；3. 总结要点。

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第二节：写作

在日常生活中，人们对于体育锻炼所持的观点各不相同，请你以“Health means wealth”为题写一篇不少于120词的短文，号召人们坚持健康积极的生活方式：每天锻炼一小时,健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子。

注意：1．适当想象发挥，不能逐句翻译：2．至少要有两个不同的观点或态度。

Health means wealth

【参考范文】Writing:

Health means wealth

People hold the belief that if they are healthy, they will have everything．Some of the young and middle-aged spend their holidays playing cards on online games, believing that they are healthy and there is no need for them to do sports．Some of them even continue to make more money, which means everything to them．

As far as I am concerned, I don’t think what some of the people do in their spare time is right．Games and money cannot bring us real happiness and wealth．Health is the most important thing for us and it can help us to do something that we want to do．We should all remember: exercise one hour a day, healthy work in fifty years, a happy life for life．

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