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雅思写作7分官方评分标准解析.docx

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Someexpertsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentobeginlearningaforeignlanguageatprimaryschoolratherthansecondaryschool.Dotheadvantagesofthisoutweighthedisadvantages?Foreignlanguageshaveincreasinglygainedpopularityamongstudentstheseyears,giventhattheworldisshrinkingandeachcountrynowhasamorefrequentcontactwiththeoutsideworld.Manypeople[c1]arguethatchildrenshouldbeginlearningaforeignlanguageatelementaryschool,insteadofwaitinguntil[c2]theyentersecondaryschool.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Firstly,despitethefactthatparentsdonotwanttoputtoomuchpressureontheirchildren,theyalsodonotwantthemtoloseatthestartingline.Thismeans,ifthekidsstarttolearnaforeignlanguageearly,theirparentsarerelievedfromthethoughtthattheirkidswillhavetocatchuplateron,whichistruetosomeextent.Ontheotherhand,itisscientificallyprovedthatchildrentendtolearnalanguagefasterbeforetheageof12.AsfarasIknow,myfriendswhostartedtolearnEnglishwhentheyweresixorsevennowhaveamuchmoresatisfactoryEnglishlevelthanthosewhostartedat12or13.Soitiswisetohaveforeignlanguagecourseinprimaryschoolcurriculum.Additionally,learningaforeignlanguageatanearlieragecanlaychildrenasolidfoundationforfuturestudying.Ratherthanjustlearningalanguageitself,childrenlearnalotmoreaboutthelearningmethods.Asa
result,whentheyentersecondaryschool,theycanexploremorelanguagesandenrichtheirknowledgebyextensivereadings.Theonlydisadvantageoflearningaforeignlanguageatprimaryschoolmightbeonemorecourseandpressure.However,primaryschoolscanintroduceadvancedteachingmethodstotacklethisproblem,suchasplayinggamesandroleplay,andensurethatchildrencanenjoythelanguagelearningprocess.Inconclusion,theadvantagesoflearningforeignlanguagesatprimaryschoolratherthansecondaryschooloutweighthedisadvantages.注释：[c1]people和expert是有区别的，注意看题目指的是哪类人[c2]tilTotal:(6.5+6.5+7+7.5/4=7分Taskresponse6.5分1.addressallpartsofthetask7分首先列举的advantages，然后提出disadvantage，紧接着驳斥了这个disadvantage。这一步证明了你都懂题目不仅是要让列举利弊还要做出比较2.presentaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse.7分主体赞成利大于弊，并在说弊的时候有力的反驳了，最后一段明确提出自己的立场。

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