读后续写：一次难忘的远足
Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass, and a map wrapped in plastic… Bingo! He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.
Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons, Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term. "It will be an unforgettable experience, definitely.” he whispered to himself, unconsciously a smile spreading over his face. Harry and Joel, however, argued for the first three miles of their hiking trip. Harry accused Joel of wearing smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray(喷雾防虫剂). Harry told Joel he smelled terrible，Joel called Harry a coward(懦夫). “Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together? "their father said. “You're missing all of the beautiful scenery!”
It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip. They hadn't looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadn't paid any attention to the turns and twists along the way while they continued their argument. “Joel threw a stick at me!" Harry screamed. “That’s not true! "Joel shouted back. Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger. "And both of you need to stop arguing!" he erupted. As he turned to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that ran alongside the path. Harry and Joel raced to their father's assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet backpack up onto land.
Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured.
Paragraph 1: But his glasses came off when he fell in the water. ________________________________________Paragraph 2: “Just calm down.” Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.”________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导：paragraph 1: his glasses came off----Mr. Taylor: couldn’t see clearly----no one guided the way.
根据第二段句首：calm down---Joel & Harry: couldn’t calm down---panicked? Argued again?
Fortunately, their wet-through father found himself just slightly injured. But his glasses came off when he fell in the water.---dried the clothes; dealt with the injury; realized no one guided the way; panicked; blamed/argued again.
Realized no one guided the way: thought/reflected/imagined/realized/wondered…
whispered /murmured/said to himself…
There was a voice inside that… 心底的声音
She heard a whispering voice from her heart…
An idea hit /struck/occurred to him that… 突然想到
A thought went through her mind like an electric shock.
An idea flashed/popped/into his mind.
Questions/Thoughts exploded in his mind… 很多想法涌入脑海
All these thoughts / memories crowded in that…
Began to panic/panicked: He had a slight frown on his face. A wrinkle appeared on his forehead.
Joel’s brows rose into his forehead. He paced up and down.
He felt his heart sinking horribly. His palms began to sweat.
His heart was beating faster than a galloping horse.
His heart was pounding/thudding/thumping.
Blame/argue again: complained/accuse/blamed/grumbled/muttered(发牢骚)
yelled/cried/shouted/called out/snapped stormed/erupted
glared at … with burning eyes stared at…, shivering/trembling / shaking with rage
Harry put his hands on his hips, his face turned red and he screamed at the top of his voice, “It’s not fair!”
He was tongue-tied with anger, his hands trembling. His face was red with rage.
Paragraph 2: work together to find our way---using the compass and the map guiding the way and working together, Joel and Harry managed to find their way. ---learn to cooperate; enjoyed the hike
1. Low clouds envelop the mountainsides, which are covered with thick grass. I counted twelve shades of green from where I stood. (2019年全国卷I)
2. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. (2019年6月浙江卷)
3. Earlier that day, when they crossed the mountain, they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. (M3U5)
4. I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound. (M1U1)
5. The air was so fresh and the scenery so charming. The pretty birds were hopping from branch to branch, singing their merry songs. Soon the rays of the sun glittered on the rippling brook.
6. The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.
7. The small lake shinning like diamonds, the grass dancing with the beats of winds and flowers blooming with smiles.
8. The sweet fragrance of flowers; the faint buzzing of insects; the gentle touch of the breeze; the fragile flowers / the fragrant roses
参考作文：
But his glasses came off when he fell in the water. Mr. Taylor sighed before he quickly took off his wet clothes and squeezed the water out. While Harry was spreading the clothes on a huge stone, Joel walked their half-naked father to an opening. Seeing his father wrapping the wound with the bandage, Joel felt strange. A thought went through his mind like an electric shock. How could they continue hiking if Dad was unable to see clearly? “If only Harry stopped arguing earlier with me!” he grumbled, his brows rising into his forehead. “I heard you!” Harry yelled, glaring at him with burning eyes.
“Just calm down. “Mr. Taylor shouted, "Without my glasses, we need to work together to find our way.” He mentioned the map and compass before the boys approached reluctantly and fumbled for them in his backpack. It was not long before they located where they were and headed off. Joel soon found himself an expert at using a compass while Harry learnt to be an excellent map reader. Now and then, pretty birds singing merry songs and flowers blooming with smiles made the kids gasp. Later that day, they managed to catch sight of some mountain goats and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. It was the highlight of the day and they talked about it for hours, grinning from ear to ear.
积累：描写火灾
1. Smoke still hung thick over the south-east of the country on Wednesday evening, even as weather conditions offered a reprieve to take stock of the destruction.
2. As winds died. the air chilled. smoke from the burning of rice stubble in surrounding farmland drifted in and the cities thick traffic resumed, the index failed to go down again.
3. Thousands of Parisians watched in horror from behind police cordons as a ferocious blaze devastated Notre Dame Cathedral on Monday night, destroying its spire and a large part of the roof.
4. While fires rage across the continent, conditions have been especially perilous in Australia’s New South Wales, home to the city of Sydney.
3. The fire raged for twelve hours and fifteen people died.
6. A total of 83 homes were damaged in a powerful explosion that ripped through an apartment building in Baotou, Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region, killing five and injuring dozens on.
7. One of 18 wildfires sweeping through Califomia, among the worst in the states history, is generating such heat that it created its own weather.
8. More than 100 bush fires are raging in Australia as the continent swelters under record heat.
9. But the fire probably consumed countless other pieces of Brazils patrimony.
10. There have been no injuries reported after an enormous fire gutted Rio de Janeiro National Museum on Sunday, but the toll was still immense.
11. Firefighters are still battling at least 12 emergency-level blazes across New South Wales after a day of"catastrophic"fire risk in heavily populated parts of the state.
12. A fire that devastated Notre Dame Cathedral in the heart of Paris was brought under control by firefighters in the early hours of Tuesday morning, though officials warned there were still residual fires to put out.
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