人教版新目标英语八年级下册Unit 10 写作教学案

八年级下Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.写作教学案

（教师使用）

【话题】居住环境(Living Environment)

【写作目标】能运用本单元所学的语法（现在完成时）及语言材料，完成有关Living Environment(生活环境), changes in my hometown(家乡变化) 以及 Hometown Feelings（家乡的感觉）的文章。

【课前任务】

一、写出下列短语。

1、不再 2、决定去做

3、回来 4、把……当做

5、寻找 6、至少

7、一年一次 8、到目前为止

参考答案：1.not ... anymore/no more 2. decide to do sth. 3. come back /be back 4. regard ... as 5.search for 6.at least 7.once a year 8.so far

2、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。

1、因为我不再看它了。

Because I read it .

2、随着他们变得越来越大，我们的房子看起来变得越来越小。

they get bigger our house seems to .

  3、为了过上好日子，我们需要努力工作。

lead to better life, we need to work hard.

4、我从1995年起就在这个工厂工作。

I in this factory since 1995.

5、你买那辆自行车有多久了？有三年了。

have you that bike ? I’ve had it three years.

参考答案：1. don’t, anymore 2. As, get smaller 3. In order to 4. have worked 5.How long , had, for

三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。

常用词汇：

to be honest ,clear out , at least, as for ,across from, so far ,in one’s opinion, more than , grow up, used to ,

for a while, no longer ,give away,…

经典句型：

1.---How long have you had that bike over there? ---I’ve had it for three years!

2. ---Have you ever played football?

---Yes, I did when I was little, but I haven’t played for a while now.

3.I used to return home at least once a year, but I haven’t been back for almost three years now.

4.Children have learned to read and count at my old primary school since the mid-20th century.

5.But he also thinks some things will never change, and his hometown is still the place that holds all his childhood memories.

【课中任务】读写结合

1、A. 信息归纳

阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。

When Martin was a little boy, he lived in the town of Holtham . At the time, Martin thought that the little town was a very big town .

Well, Martin came back to Holtham last night. "It's a small town!" he said to himself.

The town has changed very little in the past forty years. But Martin has changed a lot. He has grown into a man. His ideas are a man's eyes.

Martin stayed in the town for five hours. He walked from street to street, but he knew nobody.

Who were the strangers, the people in Holtham or Martin? Martin suddenly understood it all. Not the people in the town but he.

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参考答案：1. town 2. forty/40 3.no friend 4. has changed 5. five hours

B．赏析

找出上面材料中的好词好句。

Useful words: little , thought , big , idea, for, knew, nobody, strangers, understood…

Useful phrases: a little ,live in ,at that time, came back, in the past forty years, a lot, grow into

Useful sentences: Martin came back to Holtham last night

The town has changed very little in the past forty years.

But Martin has changed a lot.

He has grown into a man.

二、书面表达

假如你是一位农民工的儿子，你爸爸几年前离开家乡去大城市打工，现在已经在北京工作了5年，为了赚钱，他们几乎2年没有回去了，他们希望你将来有个好工作，所以去年让你到北京来上学，从那以后你有了一个愿望，想成为一名建筑设计师，将来给父母建一座大房子，尽可能多地给予父母关爱。为了实现梦想，你下定决心，加倍努力，根据这些提示写一篇短文。100词左右。

参考词汇：migrant worker 农民工，Make money 赚钱，architect 建筑师

1、写作引导：

A. 重点短语 写出下列单词或短语。

1、离开家乡 2、寻找工作

3、搬往某地 4、自从那以后

5、实现 6、努力学习

参考答案：1.leave hometown 2. search for work 3. move to 4.since then 5.come true 6.study hard

B. 重点句型 根据汉语意思完成下列句子。

1、他们两年前离开了家乡。They____________ our hometown two years ____________ .

2、我们住在北京两年了。We ____________ ____________ ____________ Beijing for five years.

3、他们有两年没有回去了。 They haven’t____________ ____________ for two years.

4、我将尽量多地给父母关爱。

I will give my love to my parents____________ ____________ ____________ ____________ .

5、我想有一天我的梦想一定会实现。I think my dream will____________ ____________ one day.

参考答案：1.left,ago 2.have lived in 3.been back 4.as much as possible 5.come true

C. 写作技能指导

本单元写作涉及的话题是Living Environment(生活环境), changes in my hometown(家乡变化)以及 Hometown Feelings（家乡的感觉），围绕时间展开，引出话题，介绍情况，展望未来或下决心，注意延续性动词在完成时态中的正确运用。

D. 写作思路点拨

Ⅰ、引出话题→left hometown, search for work

Ⅱ、父母和我的情况和愿望→live in Beijing , haven’t been back,

school in Beijing , an architect,

build a house ,love parents

Ⅲ、决心和希望→achieve my dream, study harder

2、实践写作（含小组讨论、改评修正、赏析作品）

【我的草稿】

【我的作品】

【我的订正】

3、参考范文

My parents left hometown to search for work in the big cities a few years ago.

As migrant workers, now they have lived in Beijing for five years. In order to make money, they haven’t been back for almost two years. They hope I have a good job one day. So I moved to Beijing to go to school last year. Since then I have hoped to become an architect. I will build a big house for my parents . I’ll give my love to my parents as much as possible.

In order to achieve my dream, I will study harder. I think my dream will come true one day.

点评：作者能根据提示要求，分层次来写，段落合理，句式富于变化，语言丰富、地道，语句通顺、连贯，时态使用规范，特别是单元语法句式的运用效果较好。注意了延续性动词在完成时态中的运用。

【课后任务】读写结合

1、A. 信息归纳

阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。

London has a population of over 7,000,000. From about the year 1800 until World War Two, London was the biggest city in the world. But now there are many cities which are much bigger than it. London is famous for many things. Tourists come from all over the world to visit its famous buildings and hear the famous clock, Big Ben.

Like many big cities, London has problems with traffic and pollution which stop the city from developing. Over one million people a day use the London underground, but there are still too many cars on the streets. The air isn’t clear, but it is anyhow cleaner than it was 100 years ago.

For me, the best things about London are the parks. There are five in the city center. But my children’s favorite place is Hamleys, the biggest toy shop in the world.

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参考答案：1. Tourists 2.1800 3. clock 4. one million 5. clean

B．书面表达

请你根据下列提示，以Great changes in China为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

1、中国变化很大，城市、城镇、乡村建了很多高楼大厦；

2、汽车越来越多，道路越来越拥挤。

3、现在道路变得越来越宽了，城市还建了立交桥（overpasses）。

4、人们生活水平提高了，有了电视机、洗衣机、冰箱、电脑等家电产品。

5、我们应该努力学习建设美好家园。

参考范文：

Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages. The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasses (立交桥) have been built in big cities. Chinese people’s life is much better than ever before. We have TV sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc.

We’ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful.

【教学反思】

八年级下Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.写作学案

（学生使用）

【课前任务】

一、写出下列短语。

1、不再 2、决定去做

3、回来 4、把……当做

5、寻找 6、至少

7、一年一次 8、到目前为止

2、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。

1、因为我不再看它了。

Because I read it .

2、随着他们变得越来越大，我们的房子看起来变得越来越小。

they get bigger our house seems to .

  3、为了过上好日子，我们需要努力工作。

lead to better life, we need to work hard.

4、我从1995年起就在这个工厂工作。

I in this factory since 1995.

5、你买那辆自行车有多久了？有三年了。

have you that bike ? I’ve had it three years.

3、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。

常用词汇：

经典句型：

【课中任务】读写结合

一、A. 信息归纳

阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。

When Martin was a little boy, he lived in the town of Holtham . At the time, Martin thought that the little town was a very big town.

Well, Martin came back to Holtham last night. "It's a small town!" he said to himself.

The town has changed very little in the past forty years. But Martin has changed a lot. He has grown
into a man. His ideas are a man's eyes.

Martin stayed in the town for five hours. He walked from street to street, but he knew nobody.
Who were the strangers, the people in Holtham or Martin? Martin suddenly understood it all. Not the
people in the town but he.

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B. 赏析 找出上面材料中的好词好句。

Useful words:

Useful phrases:

Useful sentences:

二、书面表达

假如你是一位农民工的儿子，你爸爸几年前离开家乡去大城市打工，现在已经在北京工作了5年，为了赚钱，他们几乎2年没有回去了，他们希望你将来有个好工作，所以去年让你到北京来上学，从那以后你有了一个愿望，想成为一名建筑设计师，将来给父母建一座大房子，尽可能多地给予父母关爱。为了实现梦想，你下定决心，加倍努力，根据这些提示写一篇短文。100词左右。

参考词汇：migrant worker 农民工，Make money 赚钱，architect 建筑师 ，

1、写作引导：

A. 重点短语 写出下列短语。

1、离开家乡 2、寻找工作

3、搬往某地 4、自从那以后

5、实现 6、努力学习

B. 重点句型 根据汉语意思完成下列句子。

1、他们两年前离开了家乡。They____________ our hometown two years ____________ .

2、我们住在北京两年了。We____________ ____________ ____________ Beijing for five years.

3、他们有两年没有回去了。They haven’t____________ ____________ for two years.

4、我将尽量多地给父母关爱。

I will give my love to my parents____________ ____________ ____________ ____________ .

5、我想有一天我的梦想一定会实现。I think my dream will____________ ____________ one day.

2、实践写作

【我的草稿】

【我的作品】

【我的订正】

【课后任务】读写结合

一、A. 信息归纳

阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。

London has a population of over 7,000,000. From about the year 1800 until World War Two, London was the biggest city in the world. But now there are many cities which are much bigger than it. London is famous for many things. Tourists come from all over the world to visit its famous buildings and hear the famous clock, Big Ben.

Like many big cities, London has problems with traffic and pollution which stop the city from developing. Over one million people a day use the London underground, but there are still too many cars on the streets. The air isn’t clear, but it is anyhow cleaner than it was 100 years ago.

For me, the best things about London are the parks. There are five in the city center. But my children’s favorite place is Hamleys, the biggest toy shop in the world.

Information Card

B. 书面表达

请你根据下列提示，以Great changes in China写一篇80词左右的短文。

6、中国变化很大，城市、城镇、乡村建了很多高楼大厦；

7、汽车越来越多，道路越来越拥挤。

8、现在道路变得越来越宽了，城市还建了立交桥（overpasses）。

9、人们生活水平提高了，有了电视机、洗衣机、冰箱、电脑等家电产品。

10、我们应该努力学习建设美好家园。

【我的收获】

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