作文
一、 评分标准
内容7分，语言8分，组织结构3分
1、 内容7分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整。
5~6分：基本
3~4分：不够
0~2分：文不对题，表达不清
2、 每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分
3、 内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分
内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分
通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分
开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点
先划档次：A档 18~15分
B档 14.5~12分
C档 11.5~8分
D档 3.5~0分
然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分.
二、 理清结构，分三步写作（总分总）
1、 作文开头的有用句式
As we all know,
As is known to all,
It’s known to all that…
It’s common knowledge that…
It’scommonly accepted that…
There is no denying that…
How time flies !
In a blink of an eye,
Time flies like a speeding arrow,
Time goes like the the flowing water.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand
分两点：For one thing, For another,
分三点：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least
3、结尾部分
All in all,
In a word,
In conclusion,
In brief,
In short,
To put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说
Last but not least
三、 组织语言
发表观点的
In my opinion,
From my point of view,
In my eyes,
As far as I am concerned,
Believe it or not,
表示递进的
In addition
Furthermore
More importantly
What’s more
Moreover
其他与“我”有关的写作材料
1、重点句型
It`s+a. for sb.to do sth.
So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too…to do
Not….until
That`s why+句子 那是。。。的原因
It`s said that +句子
There`s no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问。。。
It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问。。。
There`s no need to do 没必要做。。。
There`s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
2、 提建议
Had better do/not do
How/what about doing
Why not do/why don`t+句子
I think you should do
I suggest that you should do
If I were you,I would do 我要是你的话，我会做。。。
It`s best to do
3、表示喜欢，感兴趣
Like/love/enjoy doing
Be fond of/be keen on sth.
Prefer to do A rather than do B
Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in
4、努力做。。。
Try to do/strive to do
Make efforts to do=make every effort to do
Try one`s best/do one`s best to do
Do what/everything sb.can to do
5、打算做。。。/计划做。。。
Intend to do/plan to do
Be going to do
Decide to do
Determine to do=be determine to do
Make up one`s mind to do
6、表示想/希望
Want to do=would like to do
Hope to do
Expect to do
Wish to do
Consider doing
7、其他有用的短语
From now on/sooner or later/in the near future
Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn…by heart/
Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties
Play an important role/part in….
8、其他有用的句式
For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows,
People`s view on…vary from person to person
四、增添亮点
使用复合句和谚语
谚语举例
I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”.
As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.”
It`s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses.
An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”
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