细节描写片段练习

细节描写片段练习

一、进球

他抢过球，转身一抛，把球抛进了篮筐里。

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二、吃辣椒

他拿起一根辣椒咬下去，辣得他晕头转向，他急忙找水喝。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、试卷发下来之后

老师把批好的试卷发了下来。在拿到试卷之前，我紧张得要命，就怕自己考砸了。试卷拿到手以后，我一看不及格，很是伤心。

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四、做错了题目

老师批评学生做错了题目，老师说：“你又做错了！”我无地自容。

要求：请同学们把老师批评学生做错了题目这个典型细节写得生动起来，要精心锤炼词语，巧妙运用修辞，善于想像联想，写一段片段作文。

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