2018-2019学年上学期好教育云平台高二第一次月考卷
英 语 （B）
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第Ⅰ卷
第一部分 听力（共两节，满分 30 分）(略)
第二部分 阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（共15小题：每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
A
“I never expected that I would be so busy. Why can’t there be 25 hours in a day?” complained Liu Ran in Hong Kong as mid-term exams were going on.
The 18-year-old was Shandong Province’s top scorer in this year’s college entrance examination. After graduating from Tai’an No.1 High School, she chose the Chinese University of Hong Kong(香港中文大学), although both Peking University and Tsinghua University promised her a place.
“I want to experience a more international school and social life in Hong Kong. I’m majoring in journalism, so Hong Kong will surely help widen my horizons,” Liu said.
It is two months since Liu first set foot on Hong Kong. She missed home a lot at the beginning, because of the food and language problems.
“The canteen offers mostly Western or Guangdong food, but it’s convenient to cook for ourselves in our dorm if we like. People speak Cantonese and almost all classes are in English,” Liu explained.
Her English and Cantonese are now both improving, but she still needs more time to adapt to the new environment.
“I’m happy that I made the right decision to study here. With a mix of the Eastern and Western cultures, there is so much to discover and learn,” she said.
Liu has 18 credit hours(学分) of classes every week and 23 non-credit hours every other week. She has signed up for four associations including the Chinese Language Debating Team and the drama club. Essays, book reports and presentations also take plenty of time to prepare. And , of course, there are various parties to attend.
“I wasn’t a party animal before, but that may be interesting part of college. I sense myself changing,” Liu said.
21. Liu Ran chose the Chinese University of Hong Kong, because___________.
A. she couldn’t be admitted to Peking University
B. Hong Kong is a good place
C. she wants to be far from her homeland
D. the Chinese University of Hong Kong can widen her horizons
22. According to the last paragraph, we can infer__________.
A. now Liu Ran is an animal
B. Liu Ran hates the busy life in the Chinese University of Hong Kong
C. Liu Ran likes the food there
D. the busy and full life makes Liu Ran feel good
23. Liu Ran had to overcome the difficulties in many aspects EXCEPT_______________.
A. food B. language
C. missing home D. no friends
【答案】21-23 DDD
【解析】
21. 根据“I want to experience a more international school and social life in Hong Kong. I’m majoring in journalism, so Hong Kong will surely help widen my horizons,” Liu said.描述，可知选D。
22. 根据本段描述，可知这种忙碌而充实的生活让刘然感觉很好。故选D。
23. 根据短文描述，可知她在香港大学需要克服的困难是食物，语言和想家的困难，缺少朋友不是问题，因为可以交新的朋友。故选D。
B
It was Mother’s Day morning last year and I was doing my shopping at our local supermarket with my five-year-old son, Tenyson. As we were leaving, we found that only minutes earlier an elderly woman had fallen over at the entrance and had hit her head on the concrete. Her husband was with her, but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock. Walking towards the scene, Tenyson became very upset about what had happened to the couple. He said to me, “Mum, it’s not much fun falling over in front of everyone.”
At the front of the supermarket a charity(慈善) group had set up a stand selling cooked sausages and flowers to raise funds. Tenyson suggested that we should buy the lady a flower. “It will make her feel better,” he said. I was amazed that he’d come up with such a sweet idea. So we went over to the flower seller and asked her if we could buy a flower for the lady to cheer her up. “Just take it,” she replied. “I can’t take your money for such a wonderful gesture.”
By now paramedics（救援人员）had arrived, and were attending the injured woman. As we walked up to her, my son became intimidated by all the blood and medical equipment. He said he was just too scared to go up to her.
Instead I gave the flower to the woman’s husband and told him, “ My son was very upset for your wife and wanted to give her this flower to make her feel better.”
At that, the old man started crying and said, “Thank you so much, you have a wonderful son. Happy Mother’s Day to you.” The man then bent down and gave his wife the flower, telling her who it was from. Though badly hurt and shaken, the old lady looked up at Tenyson with love in her eyes and gave him a little smile.
24. What does the author intend to tell us?
A. One can never be too careful.
B. Actions speak louder than words.
C. A small act of kindness brings a great joy.
D. Love begins with a little smile.
25. Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage?
A. The elderly woman was knocked down by Tenyson.
B. Tenyson’s idea of buying a flower gained his mother’s support.
C. Tenyson’s care for the elderly woman puzzled the flower seller.
D. The elderly woman was moved to tears by Tenyson’s gesture.
26. The underlined word “intimidated” in the third paragraph probably means “___________”.
A. frightened B. astonished
C. struck D. excited
27. What would be the best title for the passage?
A. Mother’s Day B. Flower Power
C. An Accidental Injury D. An Embarrassing Moment
【答案】24-27 CBAB
【解析】
24. 推理判断题。本文是一篇记叙文，作者和儿子在商店里遇见了一位妻子和丈夫在超市购物摔倒在地，儿子主动买花安慰老人，作者非常高兴。也就是说微小的善意的行为会让人非常快乐。故C项正确。
25. 细节理解题。根据文章第二段2、3句Tenyson suggested that we should buy the lady a flower. “It will make her feel better,” he said. I was amazed that he’d come up with such a sweet idea.可知Tenyson建议为摔倒的老人买花，我很支持他。故B项正确。
26. 猜测词义题。根据划线词后y all the blood and medical equipment中的“血和医疗设备”可知推测，通常孩子对这类东西都很害怕。所以该词意为“frightened”。故A项正确。
27. 主旨大意题。本文是一篇记叙文，作者和儿子在商店里遇见了一位妻子和丈夫在超市购物摔倒在地，儿子主动买花安慰老人，作者非常高兴。所以B项中“Flower Power”和文章主旨一致。
C
Hey, ladies! It’s summer again and it’s time for a new you! No more make-up, no more pretending! Yes, that’s right! It’s time to stop making ourselves beautiful for the camera, and start posting confident pictures without all the make-up and extra tricks we add onto ourselves in the hope of appearing more attractive and beautiful. Because believe it or not, we already are!
After we wash our face and go to bed, it is not so perfect. You know it the face we should confidently be showing to the world! Who cares if you have pimples（面痕）or your eyes look small, or if you have crow’s feet? Guess what? Those are actually what make you such a beautifully grown woman. And any person who doesn’t think so is just not as strong as you.
Nowadays we are so prone to do anything and everything to make us look as young and perfect as possible. Yet the troth is, by doing this, we are actually making our tree skin get worse and badly affected by all the junk we put on. We are making ourselves believe that by changing our appearance we will be more accepted and seem more attractive to other people. And yet, our final goal is to find that without all of the make-up. What kind of twisted（扭曲的）game are we really playing with ourselves?
So I would like to make a suggestion for all women out there to give yourself a break at least this summer. Take a couple of pictures without all of that make-up on. You don’t need it every single day, especially not this hot summer! You’ll be surprised that the more confident you are about showing the real side of you, the more attractive you will be to everyone else.
Yes, the saying, “Beauty comes from within” is an old one, definitely still holds some troth today. So be brave, carefree, and make-up free! Let the world see you for who you really are!
28. The author thinks that ladies should show others _______.
A. their crow’s feet
B. their beautiful pictures
C. their real face with confidence
D. their attractive appearance
29. What does the author think of adding make-up to our face?
A. It makes perfect images.
B. It’s really meaningless.
C. It makes true images go outdated.
D. It’s hard to achieve what we wish.
30. What is the author’s purpose of quoting the old saying?
A. To declare it’s what one really is that matters.
B. To show the importance of adding make-up
C. To give us some examples of adding make-up.
D. To tell us not to neglect those old sayings.
31. What is the topic of this text?
A. Spending more time being with families and friends.
B. Not putting on any make-up on our face this summer.
C. Paying enough attention to ourselves in this summer.
D. Showing the beautiful side of ourselves to others.
【答案】28-31 CDAB
【解析】
28. C细节理解题。根据第一二段的内容可知，作者认为女士们应当自信地以真面孔示人，故选C项。
29. D推理判断题。根据第三段的We are making ourselves believe that…What kind of twisted game are we really playing with ourselves?可知，作者认为化妆实际上是一个扭曲的游戏，带来的效果可能会与我们的初衷相反，结果必定差强人意，故选D项。
30. A推理判断题。作者在最后一段中以一句谚语“Beauty comes from within”结束本文，是为了说明我们的真实面孔才更重要，故选A项。
31. B主旨大意题。文章首段和末段都出现了作者在本文的论点，So be brave, carefree, and make-up free! Let the world see you for who you really are! 即“建议女士不要化妆了”，故选B项。
D
It’s generally believed that people act the way they do because of their personalities and attitudes. They recycle their garbage because they care about the environment. They pay $5 for a caramel brulee latte because they like expensive coffee drinks. It’s undeniable that behavior comes from our inner dispositions（性情）, but in many instances we also draw inferences about who we are, as suggested by the social psychologist Daryl Bern, by observing our own behavior. We can be strangers to ourselves. If we knew our own minds, why should we need to guess what our preferences are from our behavior? If our minds were an open book, we would know exactly how much we care about the environment or like lattes. Actually, we often need to look to our behavior to figure out who we are. Moreover, we don’t just use our behavior to learn about our particular types of character --- we infer characters that weren’t there before. Our behavior is often shaped by little pressures around us, which we fail to recognize. Maybe we recycle because our wives and neighbors would disapprove if we didn’t. Maybe we buy lattes in order to impress the people around us. We should not mistakenly believe that we always behave as a result of some inner disposition. Whatever pressures there can be or inferences one can make, people become what they do, though it may not be in compliance（符合）with their true desires. Therefore, we should all bear in mind Kurt Vonnegut’s advice: “We are what we pretend to be, so we must be careful about what we pretend to be.”
32. According to the passage, personalities and attitudes are commonly believed to _________.
A. determine one’s behavior
B. reflect one’s taste
C. influence one’s surroundings
D. result from one’s habits
33. Which of the following would Daryl Bern most probably agree with?
A. A kind person will offer his seat to the old
B. One buys latte out of true love of coffee
C. One recycles plastics to protect the environment
D. The return of a wallet can indicate one’s honesty
34. What can be inferred from the underlined sentence in the passage?
A. We fail to realize our inner dispositions
B. We can be influenced by outside pressures
C. Our behavior is the result of our true desires
D. Our characters can shape our social relationships
35. What does the author mainly discuss in the passage?
A. Personalities and attitudes B. Preferences and habits
C. Behavior and personalities D. Attitudes and preferences
【答案】32-35 ADBC
【解析】
32. A细节理解题。根据第一段It’s generally believed that people act the way they do because of their personalities and attitudes.可知，人格和态度通常被认为会决定一个人的行为。故选A。
33. D推理判断题。根据第二段It’s undeniable that behavior comes from our inner dispositions（性情）, but in many instances we also draw inferences about who we are, as suggested by the social psychologist Daryl Bern, by observing our own behavior.可知，我们的行为来自于我们的内在倾向，所以可以推断出，返还一个钱包可以表明一个人的诚实。故选D。
34. B词句猜测题。根据第三段Maybe we recycle because our wives and neighbors would disapprove if we didn’t.（也许我们回收，因为我们的妻子和邻居会反对，如果我们没有。）可知，我们可能会受到外界压力的影响。故选B。
35. C主旨大意题。本文主要讨论了行为和个性之间的关系。故选C。
第二节 （共 5 小题，每小题 2 分，满分 10 分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，选项中有两项为多余选项。
Creativity is a skill that you can work on with time, training, and effort. There are many areas you can focus on to improve your overall creativity.___36___
Doodle(信手涂鸦)in your spare time. Doodling can increase creativity by increasing your engagement with the world and attention span. ____37____The more information you’re able to absorb, the more creative you will be.
Listen to music. Simply playing music in the background can inspire you creatively. It can help you focus better and increase your overall concentration. Classical music tends to work particularly well for creativity and concentration. ___38___While classical music has beneficial effects for many, experiment a little to find the music that best helps you concentrate and feel creative.
Play video games. ___39___Interactive games that require movement help with creative thinking as they stimulate multiple senses. Things like Wii Tennis or Dance Dance Revolution would work well. Avoid games that require you to sit for long periods.
Read more. Make a habit of reading regularly. Pick books from multiple types and styles of writing to expand your horizons and really cultivate your creativity. Try to make time to read every day. ___40___This will help direct your reading if you’re unsure what kinds of books to start with.
A. Try joining a book club.
B. Not every type of music works for everyone.
C. Some video games are actually good for the creative mind
D. Creativity is really important to your life as well as to society.
E. Video games do harm to our creativity instead of helping with it
F. The following are some creative approaches you can involving yourself in
G. It helps you stay engaged during activities where you would otherwise zone out
【答案】36. F 37. G 38. B 39. C 40. A
【解析】
36. F考查上文和句意理解。根据上文：创造力是一种可以随着时间、训练和努力而发挥作用的技能。有很多方面你可以专注于提高你的整体创造力。可知下文：以下是一些可以让你自己参与的创造性方法。故选F。
37. G考查上文和句意理解。根据上文：在业余时间涂鸦。可知下文：它可以帮助你在从事其他活动的地方从事活动。故选G。
38. B考查上文和句意理解。根据本段主题句：听音乐。可知下文：不是每一种音乐都适合每一个人，也要适当选择。故选B。
39. C考查上文和句意理解。根据下文：需要运动的互动游戏有助于创造性思维，因为它们刺激多种感官。可知上文：一些视频游戏其实有益于创意性灵感。故选C。
40. A考查上文和句意理解。根据本段主题句：多读书。可知下文：试着加入读书俱乐部。故选A。
第三部分 英语知识运用 （共两节，满分 45）
第一节 完形填空（共 20 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 30 分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C 和 D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
While high school does not generally encourage students to explore new aspects of life, college sets the stage for that exploration. I myself went through this ___41___ process and found something that has changed my ___42___ at college for the better: I discovered ASL—American Sign Language (美式英语).
I never felt an urge to ___43___ any sign language before. My entire family is hearing, and so are all my friends. The ___44___ languages were enough in all my interactions (交往). Little did I know that I would discover my ___45___ for ASL.
The __46___ began during my first week at college. I watched as the ASL Club __47___ their translation of a song. Both the hand movements and the very ___48___ of communicating without speaking ___49___ me. What I saw was completely unlike anything I had experienced in the __50___. This newness just left me ___51___ more.
After that, feeling the need to __52___ further. I decided to drop in on one of ASL club’s meetings. I only learned how to ___53___ the alphabet that day. Yet instead of being discouraged by my ___54___ progress, I was excited. I then made it a point to _55___ those meetings and learn all I could.
The following term, I ___56___ an ASL class. The professor was deaf and any talking was ___57___. I soon realized that the silence was not unpleasant. __58___, if there had been any talking, it would have ___59___ us to learn less. Now, I appreciate the silence and the ___60___ way of communication it opens.
41. A. searching B. planning C. natural D. formal
42. A. progress B. experience C. major D. opinion
43. A. choose B. read C. learn D. create
44. A. official B. foreign C. body D. spoken
45. A. love B. concern C. goal D. request
46. A. meeting B. trip C. story D. task
47. A. recorded B. performed C. recited D. discussed
48. A. idea B. amount C. dream D. reason
49. A. disturbed B. supported C. embarrassed D. attracted
50. A. end B. past C. course D. distance
51. A. showing B. acting C. saying D. wanting
52. A. exercise B. explore C. express D. explain
53. A. print B. write C. sign D. count
54. A. slow B. steady C. normal D. obvious
55. A. chair B. sponsor C. attend D. organize
56. A. missed B. passed C. gave up D. registered for
57. A. prohibited B. welcomed C. ignored D. repeated
58. A. Lastly B. Thus C. Instead D. However
59. A. required B. caused C. allowed D. expected
60. A. easy B. popular C. quick D. new
【答案】
41. D 42. D 43. B 44. D 45. B 46. A 47. D 48. B 49. A 50. B
51. D 52. C 53. C 54. B 55. B 56. B 57. D 58. C 59. B 60. D
【解析】
41. A我自己经历了这个探索的过程。根据前文While high school does not generally encourage students to explore new aspects of life, college sets the stage for that exploration可知大学为探索提供了平台，所以这里指的是作者“探索”的过程。searching寻找的，探索的；planning计划的； natural自然的；formal正式的。故选A。
42. B我发现有些东西改变了我的大学生活经历。progress进步； experience经历； major主修课目； opinion观点。故选B。
43. C我以前从没有过学习手语的冲动。choose选择；read看，读； learn学习；create创造。故选C。
44. D 根据前文My entire family is hearing, and so are all my friends.可知，作者的家人及朋友都可以听得到，作者认为在平时的交流中，再加上肢体语言就足够了。official官方的；foreign外国的；body肢体的；spoken口语的； 故选D。
45. A我没想过我会发现自己对美式手语的热爱。前文中I never felt an urge to learn any sign language before作者表明以前从未想过学习手语，而根据后文内容可知作者非常喜欢手语。love热爱；concern关心，顾虑；goal目标；request请求。故选A。
46. C故事发生在我上大学的第一周，这里作者开始讲述在大学学习手语的事情。meeting会议；trip旅行；story故事；task任务。故选C。
47. B在ASL 俱乐部表演一首歌的翻译时，我正观看着。分析可知ASL 俱乐部是手语俱乐部，应该是在用手语表演一首歌。record记录；perform表现，表演；recite背诵；discuss讨论。故选B。
48. A手部的动作和不用语言进行交流的想法吸引了我。作者当时在看手语表演，而手语就是为了想借助手势进行交流。idea想法；amount数量；dream梦想；reason原因。故选A。
49. D分析语境可知ASL 俱乐部的表演吸引了作者，否则作者也不会去学习手语。disturb打扰；support支持；embarrass使...难堪；attract吸引。故选D。
50. B我所看到的和我在过去经历的事情完全不同。 end结束，末尾；past过去；course课程；distance距离。固定短语in the past在过去 故选B。
51. D这种新奇的感觉使我想了解更多。分析语境可知作者被手语吸引，想要进一步了解，所以也有了后文中的参加手语俱乐部的会议上手语课的经历。show展示；act行动；say说；want想要。故选D。
52. B在那之后，我感觉到想要探索更多关于手语的东西，我参加了ASL 俱乐部的一次会议。exercise锻炼；explore探索；express表达；explain解释。故选B。
53. C那天我只学会了写字母表。作者第一次参加手语俱乐部的会议，学会的应该是最基本的写字母表。当然，打印字母表、在字母表上签名、数字母表和学习手语都没有联系。print打印；write写；sign签名；打手势；count数。故选C。
54. A我并没有因为缓慢的进步而沮丧，相反我很兴奋。因为作者只学会了写字母表，所以进步是很慢的。slow缓慢的；steady平稳的； normal正常的；obvious明显的。故选A。
55. C我下定决心参加俱乐部所有的会议去学习我能学习的一切。chair主持；使…入座；sponsor赞助 ；attend参加；organize组织。attend meeting参加会议。故选C。
56. D接下来的一个学期，我报名上了一个手语班。miss错过，想；念pass通过；give up放弃；register for报名注册。故选D。
57. A教授的耳朵听不见，任何口语交流都是禁止的。根据后文if there had been any talking可知在课堂上没有口语交流。prohibit禁止；welcome欢迎；ignore忽视；repeat重复。故选A。
58. C反而，如果当时有口语交流，那只会造成我们学的手语更少。根据前文I soon realized that the silence was not unpleasant.可知作者很快意识到安静并不是令人不愉快的。反而有口语交流会影响手语的学习。lastly最后，终于；thus因此；如；instead反而；however然而。故选C。
59. B如果当时有口语交流，那只会造成我们学的手语更少。require要求；cause造成 ；allow允许；expect期待。故选B。
60. D现在我很感激当时的安静并且享受它带来的一种新的交流方式。由此可知手语对于作者来说是一种新的交流方式。easy简单的；popular受欢迎的；quick快速的 ；new新的。故选D。
第 II 卷
第三部分 英语知识运用
第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
I first met Steve Jobs years ago at a yard pool party. I was ___61___ excited and embarrassed by the chance to meet him in person that I could hardly whisper my name when we __62___ (introduce). I watched as he swam in the pool with his son, like a regular guy, a good dad ___63___ (have) fun with his kids.
The second time I met him was when our children started going to school together. He was sitting in the classroom while___64___rest of us were pretending that having Steve Jobs in the room was ___65___ (total) normal. It was one Halloween when I realized he actually knew my name, ___66___ made me a little surprised. ___67___(dress) like a monster, he was decorating a scary house with his wife. As I walked by with my son, Steve smiled and said, “Hi, Lisen”My son thought I was the coolest mom in town when he realized Steve Jobs knew me.
__68___ then on, when I saw him holding his meetings in our __69___（neighbor）, I didn’t hesitate to smile and ___70____(say) hi. Steve always returned the greeting, proving that while he may have been a genius, he was also a good neighbor.
【答案】
61. so 62. were introduced 63. having 64. the 65. totally
66. which 67. Dressed 68. From 69. neighborhood 70. say
【解析】
61. 考查连词。句意：我很兴奋，很尴尬因为有机会和他见面我几乎不能在我们被介绍的时候说出我的名字。空格后是形容词，后面有that引导的从句，so+形容词或副词+that…“如此……以至于”。故答案为：so
62. 考查动词时态及语态。句意：我很兴奋，很尴尬因为有机会和他见面我几乎不能在我们被介绍的时候说出我的名字。根据1空前的was可知，这里叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以2空格处也应该用一般过去时，句子的主语we与introduce是被动关系，所以应该用一般过去时的被动语态。故答案为：were introduced
63. 考查非谓语动词。句意：我看着他和他的儿子在游泳池里游泳，就像一个普通的人，一个好爸爸和他的孩子们一起玩。like“像”是介词，a good dad与have之间是主动关系。这里应该用动名词的形式，故答案为：having
64. 考查冠词。句意：他坐在教室里，而我们其他人则假装有Steve Jobs在教室里也是完全正常的。这里指除了Steve Jobs之外的所有的人，表示特指，用定冠词。故答案为：the
65. 考查副词。句意：他坐在教室里，而我们其他人则假装有Steve Jobs在教室里也是完全正常的。空格后是形容词，修饰形容词应该用副词来修饰。total形容词“完全的”；totally副词。故答案为：totally
66. 考查定语从句的关系词。句意：那是一个万圣节的时候，我意识到他知道我的名字，这让我有点吃惊。___66___ made me a little surprised.是定语从句，先行词是句子：he actually knew my name。这里是非限制性定语从句，指事时用which。故答案为：which
67. 考查非谓语动词。句意：他打扮得像个怪物，他和他的妻子一起装饰了一间可怕的房子。整个句子已经有谓语动词was decorating，句子没有连词，所以空格处只能用非谓语动词，句子的主语he是dress的逻辑主语，它们之间是被动关系，所以应该用过去分词表示被动。故答案为：Dressed
68. 考查介词短语。句意：从那时起，当我看到他在我们的社区里参加会议时，我毫不犹豫地微笑着打招呼。短语from then on从那时起。故答案为：From
69. 考查名词。句意：从那时起，当我看到他在我们的社区里参加会议时，我毫不犹豫地微笑着打招呼。neighbor邻居；因为空格前有介词in，所以这里指社区neighborhood。故答案为：neighborhood
70. 考查非谓语动词。句意：从那时起，当我看到他在我们的社区里参加会议时，我毫不犹豫地微笑着打招呼。hesitate to do 顾虑地做某事，空格处与to smile是并列的两个动词不定式，第二个动词不定式前面的to可以省略。故答案为：say
第四部分 写作 （共两节 满分 35）
第一节 短文改错（10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have recently been told that listen to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she had turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gives a party she doesn’t have to invite a rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered certain electronic sounds have strangely effects on rats. He declares break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with their legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday.
【答案】
1.listen—listening
2. 去掉been
3.had---has
4. a---the
5. in---to
6.strangely ---strange
7. declares后加they
8. trembled---trembling
9. tail---tails
10.that---if/whether
【解析】
第一处：考查动名词用法。本句中动名词短语在句中做主语，表示经常性习惯性的行为。句意：最近我被告知听吵闹的音乐会渐渐地让人们听不见。
第二处：考查语态。动词happen意为“发生、碰巧”，没有被动语态。句意：我确信这件事情一句发生在我的邻居身上。
第三处：考查时态。时间状语for years通常要和现在完成时连用，所以本句使用现在完成时has turned…。句意：几年以来她对我要求调低收音机的要求充耳不闻。
第四处：考查冠词。短语the rest of….“其余的…”句意：当她举行聚会的时候，她不得不邀请街上的其他人。
第五处：考查固定短语。短语dance to the music随着音乐跳舞。句意：每个人都可以在他的房间里随着音乐跳舞。
第六处：考查形容词。在英语中形容词通常做定语或者表语，副词通常做状语；本句中形容词strange做定语修饰名词effects。
第七处：考查句子结构。动词declare后面接宾语从句，从句中缺少主语，用they指代前句中的rats。句意：他声称他们崩溃了。
第八处：考查非谓语动词。本句中含有一个“with复合结构”，其中介词with的宾语their legs与动词tremble构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词trembling在句中做宾语补足语。
第九处：考查名词单复数。本句中their指代上句中的rats，所以要使用复数形式tails。
第十处：考查宾语从句连接词。句意：我想知道同样的事情是否也会发生在我的邻居身上。
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
.假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，想了解共享单车的利弊。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 这种单车的优点（如经济实惠, 存放空间小；无污染； ……）
2. 这种单车的缺点（受天气条件限制，如雨天出行不便；随意停放，影响市容；……）
注意: 1. 词数不少于110；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I am writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
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【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter..
As we all know, cycling is a fun, healthy and economical means of travel around the neighborhood. Parking a bike takes up less space and riding bicycles a. Besides, with more people taking to bicycles, the traffic problem in big cities will greatly be eased.
Although there are so many advantages，it also has its own limitations. It is unsuitable for a long journey. As most bikes don't have a roof in case of rain, it is inconvenient and unsafe to ride bicycles in the heavy rain. What is worse, some people with bad manners park the bicycle everywhere at their will, which leads to the disorder of the city.
Anyway, the mobike is now a popular means of transport in China. In my opinion, such a change will contribute to a healthy and responsible lifestyle.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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