2014届高三英语第二轮复习
《半开放性作文指导》
湖南省汨罗市第二中学 吴波
【学习目标】
1. 分析本次月考作文中学生常见问题，并找出相应的解决方法。
2. 通过自主学习和小组合作与探究；改错，炼句和审题等训练；让学生学以致用，逐渐掌握高分作文的方法。
【重点&难点】
高中所学知识在作文当中多，准，精的灵活运用。
【课前研读】
【课前炼句】
一.改错
1. When I was a child , my father like go fishing.
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2. Father is a tall tree to child.
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3. Parents leave their children is a mistake.
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4. I and father is friends.
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5. She said in a low and tiring voice, “I just want you have a good education …”
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二.高中词汇的精，准使用
1.Our school lies in the east of the city .
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2.I can not find any ways to solve the problem .
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3.Suddenly ,I had a good idea .
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4.What you do will be very important
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5.Would you please help me to turn down the radio ?
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6.We should try to improve our Engish.
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三．应用较多较复杂的语法结构改写句子
1.We can fit in society well only if we are independent. .
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2. I didn’t understand my mother until I won the writing composition.
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3. When I touched the bricks of the greet wall, I felt inspirited.
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4. We are studying hard and all the lights are on .
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5. Ms Wu is standing here. She is teaching us English.
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【他山之石】
【本次作文学生优美句型】
1. Parents are to kids what water is to fish.
2 .Such a warm show wakes up the memory of mine.
3. Thank you, my dear father .While you are not as rich as those famous fathers, the happiness you give me is never less than theirs.
4. Whatever your parents do, they only want to help you and pave the way for you in the future.
6. We are the bond of our family. On no account can we overlook the importance of what we do in our daily life.
7. To be honest, the sense of happiness sprang up from my heart at that moment.
8. Touching the bricks of the Greet Wall, I felt inspirited.
9. It was not until I won the writing composition that I understood my mother.
10. Only if we are independent can we fit in society well .
【本次作文参考范文】
Recently, a programme named “Where Are We Going, Dad？” by Hunan TV is popular among all the ages. The parentchild show deals with five wellknown but busy fathers experiencing country life together with their kids. Through the programme the kids are learning to be independent and the dads are becoming increasingly qualified.
After watching their stories, I can’t help thinking of my parents and there’re also many unforgettable memories between us. One Sunday ten years ago, my dad and I went camping on a mountain. He prepared all the equipment and taught me how to set up a tent, which for a boy of seven was not a piece of cake. He guided me patiently and thanked me much for my participation, making me feel I was very helpful! That was where my pride and confidence came.
As the programme tells us, parents play a significant role in the growing process of children. I’m grateful towards my parents for their devotion to educating me and accompanying me.
【现场作文】
Practice
在生活中, 你自已或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历, 其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文.
主要内容包括: 1丢失的物品;
2物品失而复得的经过;
3你的感想。
注意: 1词数不少于120个;
2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称
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【课后演练】
2013湖南高考作文
请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。
match winner loser result
内容：1．自己或他人的一次经历；2．你的感受。
注意：1．必须使用所给4个关键词; 2．词数不少于120个；
3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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★Remember:
★Rome isn’t built in a day.
★The more you read ,accumulate and practise，the better your writing will be！
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